When the system tells you that you can make nine wishes, what will you wish for?
Traveling through the world of Zhetian, Li Ran felt that the dog system was not a good person, and he had to rely on himself to go back. Every time he heard the voice of the dog system, he felt that there was a rogue who wanted to harm me.
For Li Ran, in the eyes of the system, he is a madman, a weirdo, and a psychopath. His brain circuit is always different from that of normal people, and every day the system feels that there is a troublemaker who wants to harm him.
Reader comments
It's good-looking and well-written. You can cut some opportunities. The heroine laid out the restricted area in advance and only grabbed one Taichu ancient mine. It's too little.
The more I write, the more chaotic it gets. I don't mention the realm. I don't mention the fighting power. The world has no way of heaven and no will. Other world leaders come to check it out from time to time. The protagonist neither cuts off his beard nor practices to improve. What is this? Are you trying to fool the readers? In one chapter, the emperor of heaven is doing business, and in one chapter, the protagonist should just wander around and think wildly. After a few steps, the matter is dealt with.
It's good-looking and well-written. You can cut some opportunities. The heroine laid out the restricted area in advance and only grabbed one Taichu ancient mine. It's too little. The more I write, the more chaotic it gets. I don't mention the realm. I don't mention the fighting power. The world has no way of heaven and no will. Other world leaders come to check it out from time to time. The protagonist neither cuts off his beard nor practices to improve. What is this? Are you trying to fool the readers? In one chapter, the emperor of heaven is doing business, and in one chapter, the protagonist should just wander around and think wildly. After a few steps, the matter is dealt with.