HP: Oops! Being Targeted by the Yandere Dark Lord

It's beautiful, the interaction between the male and female protagonists is very sweet, and the author's description is very good! The male protagonist feels like the Riddler I thought he was, but the ending is too short! I still want to see their follow-up and it's over. I'm crying. Can you please make a few more extra episodes? [Crying]

Hahaha I was confused by the introduction. When I first read the introduction, I thought Ariana was the heroine. After reading the first chapter and looking at the introduction again, I realized that the heroine is Ariana's daughter. It was well written and the loop was finally closed, but the rest of it was very rushed. The author said that the data was not good and a lot of main lines were cut. You can seem to relax a bit, after all, it is short and not abusive. Tom had a happy ending, and so did Erin.

I like it very much! I like it very much! Baby Alice, you are a fragrant and soft little cake₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

Very interesting angle. It's rare to see such a niche setting!

Before, no fanfic would set up a background where confidentiality laws were broken, because this social environment is really difficult to write about. However, the author handled it well. He did not describe too much external situations and only wrote about the life of the protagonist. The unusual things revealed between the lines are worth reading.

The writing is really good, the characters are not OC, the writing is okay, but there are too many hidden lines, and it will be unfinished later on. The writing is good but the data is not good [face covering] It would be nice if there were more happy lives between men and women.

It's really good-looking and has a lot of foreshadowing.

In fact, the writing style and setting are very good. It's a pity that the author didn't write it completely due to poor data and ended it in a hurry.

The content is novel, the concept is clever, and it is worth recommending [shy]

It looks good, but it was cut down a lot because of poor grades. What a pity.

Overall, it's very good, with good settings and writing. However, the ending feels a bit too rushed, and there are very few comments and other content, so it's quite normal that it's hard to continue writing longer.

It's nice to watch, but it's a little short. I originally wanted to see the happy married life of the heroine and Tom, but it ended up being gone.

It's actually very nice. It's a sweet, butter-baked biscuit. It's delicious [Blow a kiss]

It's really beautiful!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Just like to see this

It's so beautiful but it doesn't have any ratings! ! !

It was pretty good to get through the beginning.

A mindless sweet article, not bad

It's great. It's my first time to follow a serial book to the end. It's a very novel setting. The only drawback is that it's too short, and I feel like the main plot is a bit weak.

It's very interesting. Although it's very short, the plot line is complete. I like this kind of plot that doesn't drag on.

I rarely comment, but this book is really perfect. Everyone in the pro era has a good ending.

The data is so bad! But it's very well written! It's not particularly long, but as a novella it's excellent and totally worth 5 points!