The Prince of Britain

Hiss... Just comment briefly. As one of the rare time-travel novels in England, it is certainly worthy of praise (laughs), but there are also shortcomings in it. From the beginning of the constitutional crisis, the plot speed starts to slow down. Then the protagonist prince goes on a tour of several autonomous territories. After the war begins, the plot speed completely collapses. Several days of content can be covered in a few hundred words. There are many different time periods and backgrounds in the same chapter, and the protagonist seems to be a bystander. It reads like reading a celebrity biography summarized by future generations, and what someone did on a certain day. The plot lacks a description of the villain, that is, the side of the Axis powers: readers do not know what the German side thinks about the protagonist, nor do they know how Germany's next deployment will deal with the protagonist or the protagonist's side. It can also be said that there is a lack of description from multiple perspectives. The time-skipping transition in the middle was too abrupt and stiff, just like the actors' script. What is the date of the month and the background? Here's a paragraph. On what day of the month, let's do another section. The author's use of punctuation is also strange. Of course, the author's description of the protagonist and the portrayal of the main supporting characters Chamberlain and Churchill are still great, and I look forward to continuing his work. Changes in the world situation and various descriptions can be appropriately added to the plot, come on!

The prince charges as the company commander?

A bit like Al generated

I have never been a king. When I looked at the catalog, I thought I would go to Australia to take over the throne and work part-time. The type who is still running around, his thoughts change quickly, and he can quickly become involved in royal emotions. He might as well pick up a Commonwealth crown.

Without a soul of his own, a person from the Dragon Kingdom becomes an Englishman directly emotionally.

What I write is a historical biography. It is the same as having a protagonist or not.

It is a well-written book, perhaps because I have not read such a foreign format for a long time, which makes it a little unfamiliar. In my opinion, some parts are no different from history books and are even a bit boring. However, I feel that the description of the war in this book is not so pale and feeble, but very vivid, which makes me empathize. It also shows the personal powerlessness of the prince as a time traveler under the general trend of history (a bit like writing a personal historical biography of the prince). It seems that nothing has changed, but what has changed? Looking forward to the author's follow-up

Narrative essay explaining history

I hate novels written in foreign languages. They always have some formatting and arrogant tone, as if it's our problem that we can't read them. I don't know if this is a book written by a foreigner, or a direct translation of a foreign language, but it's obvious that you can read the rigid style.

A small suggestion, the author can optimize a book based on this book, standardize the timeline and character stories, etc., And send it to Qidian. I think this book has a future in Qidian, but I feel that the timeline is too messy, and many inconsistencies are unclear. If it can be smoothed out and published to Qidian, it should have good results.