What About the Villain Witch? I Will Pamper My Disciple

The good-looking single female protagonist is in pure love and the sweet daily life of the male and female protagonist. It feels like the author may have wanted to extend the story line, so he deliberately controlled the protagonist's upgrade speed. This is understandable. But to be honest, compared with the geniuses of his generation, the protagonist's cultivation is really lagging behind a lot (they are all in the late stage of Golden Core), which makes me feel a little nervous when watching it. The main feeling is "unreliable". When reading a story about a single heroine, isn't it just for the sake of stability and sweetness? I want to see how the protagonist pampers the heroine and how to live a good life of his own. But now the protagonist's strength is a bit weak, and it always feels like he is struggling to even protect the heroine, so he has to be constantly on tenterhooks, fearing that something unexpected will happen in the next chapter. This constant sense of urgency, to be honest, has a bit of an impact on my sugar-drinking mood, and I can't completely relax even in my daily life. In fact, the protagonist does not necessarily have to be Long Aotian, but he must at least keep up with the first echelon, right? As long as his strength can make everyone feel "Well, with him here, I'm stable" and can deal with most crises, then you can safely immerse yourself in the daily love life you wrote, and then encounter times when you can't beat him, right? It can also explode. Write some emotional or passionate content. In fact, the heroine of the original book is not particularly annoying now, she is just a young and spoiled little girl (with some green tea). If she could experience some things, grow up slowly, and form a couple with the male protagonist in the original book, wouldn't the story be more interesting? (Other books of the same type vilify the male and female protagonists in the original book and then confront each other) In fact, here we are watching the sweet couple of the protagonists, and there we are watching the slowly growing lovers of the original book. This is not the same as following two novels at once, which is double the happiness! Written directly as a group portrait story, each character has its own growth line and emotional line. In this way, the story pattern is suddenly opened up, and you can write it as long as you want. He was poisoned from behind.

The writing is quite good, the plot is not cliche, but a bit bland, and the psychology of the character descriptions is clearly explained. It tastes like eating light food, but the taste and aftertaste are very good. There is no problem with the continuity of the story, and there is no sense of fragmentation. For me, there are almost no surprises, and the updates are very diligent. Currently, it is updated three times a day, so I can read it with confidence.

It's quite nice. The male protagonist is wearing it. I've seen a lot of soul piercings, and I especially like it. Both the male and female protagonists are very strong, their revenge is refreshing, and they kill decisively. There are no confusing emotional lines. I just like to see the emotional lines not messed up. This one looks pretty good so far, I hope it will continue to work!

Summary: Simple and plain Disadvantages: 1. The novel about cultivating immortals lacks the feeling of cultivating immortality. This book focuses on the emotional progression of the protagonist and the heroine. All the plots in the early stage are to build a ladder for the emotions of the male and female protagonists. There is no passion for cultivating immortals, and the battle plot is seriously insufficient. Compared to the novel about cultivating immortals, I see that the current plot is more like the daily love life covered in the novel about cultivating immortals. 2. The characters are flat and the characters except the male and female protagonists are downplayed, which makes the book look dull and cliché. In fact, this requires the author's writing style. I said it after thinking about the evaluation. 3. The plot is too bland, and what I mean by bland is compared to a fairy tale. If the book focuses on the emotional changes of the male and female protagonists, it may be regarded as a climax of the plot. After reading more than a hundred chapters, my heart has not changed much. Some plots can cause discomfort. It is possible to start low and go high, but it cannot retain people. There is very little foreshadowing. Perhaps what I saw is the line between the male and female protagonists in the original book, and the male protagonist's family in the upper world. Conclusion: This book is tasteless and it would be a pity to discard it. It can be used as a boring pastime. And: the above are all personal opinions, please forgive me if you don't like it.

The writing style is above average, but the characterization is very good, the plot is compact, and the logic of some details is a bit problematic, but the overall level of Tomato is quite good if you don't look closely. The score is a little low, and it should be no problem to get 8 points. Sure enough... Every low-scoring book is based on strength... The strength of the protagonist is suppressed in the back. It is unbearable to look at it. In dozens of chapters, the strength has not increased at all. After receiving the inheritance of Yuanying Alchemy Master, he stopped refining alchemy, learned martial arts, and practiced... Then Later generations flew directly to learn incense and Shintoism. After learning a little bit, they wanted to transform the communist world. They flew away again just after starting. This time, they went directly to write about supporting characters. I wrote about minor supporting characters in a large space... I rambled here and there, dozens or hundreds of chapters before slowly returning to the main line...

It's very good-looking and exciting. I basically finished it in one day. To be honest, it's sweeter and more bland than most novels. However, you only started to get on track after more than 90 chapters. It's a bit too late to fill it in, but I think it's quite normal. There's no problem, because there's a lot of foreshadowing and it's pretty good-looking. Anyway, just take your time and write it, don't be in a hurry, it's very good-looking.

Tell me what I like most about this book. If a traditional female video does not include other supporting characters, it is inevitable that one thing will be repeated later and the expression will be barren. Therefore, some supporting characters will be added, and some writers will simply discard them when they are finished! Some writers cannot handle the emotional transition well, which makes the audience feel that it is a pity that there is only one female protagonist, which is very conflicting. However, all the supporting characters in this book are handled very well. Without affecting the theme of the single female protagonist, other characters are introduced to add twists and turns to the plot, and finally give an ending. Everyone's ending is different. It seems that I have made up the experience of each supporting character on my own. "Single female protagonist", "Single doting female devil", "Daily life of master and apprentice", "Rebel apprentice". The author has been immersed in his own art recently and cannot extricate himself. There are fewer and fewer straw men, don't stop, keep chasing them.

It is very delicate, and the pace is not sluggish. Every story and every character is carefully designed by the author. Even the small characters are based on the author's own thinking. Of course, there are some flaws, but overall it is very comfortable to watch, and I don't feel bored yet. The plots at each stage are relatively stable. Some people think it is water and separation, but these plots pave the way for the protagonist's character growth. It's pure fun. If you just fight and level up, readers will get bored after a few chapters. Very well written

It's pretty good to watch. The relationship between the male and female protagonists in the early stage is quite good. I really like how the heroine's character is developed, but the middle and later stages are not very good. (Minor spoilers) First, in order to complete the story of the male protagonist in the original world, too much ink was spent. Not only did dozens of chapters of the male protagonist in the original world be written separately, but also in order to reflect the growth of the female protagonist, the female protagonist did not appear in more than a hundred chapters. That part was the most uncomfortable part to read, and I renovated it every time. When writing the chapter, I was looking forward to Huanhuan coming out... But even if I wrote about the growth of the heroine, she only grew in age. From the beginning to the end, the heroine failed to stand with the hero to fight against the enemy as he wished. It was always like, when the enemy came, the hero said: "Go and wait for me in the small world." Then there's the male protagonist, maybe because I can't continue writing? In the early stage, he created a cautious image, but in the later stage, there was no way to pave the way for the advancement of the plot. The male protagonist went on adventures everywhere, and then he was always beaten by a level higher than himself, and he provoked high-level monsters everywhere. Maybe the author couldn't continue writing because of poor data at the end. It took him only one or two hundred chapters to complete his cultivation in Nascent Soul, but it only took one or two hundred chapters to go from becoming a god to ascension. The plot and rhythm were pushed too fast, and it ended suddenly, which was a little bit unfinished. But in summary, I really recommend watching it. The first plot is really interesting. I feel very sorry for the ending. I still like the portrayal of the heroine's character very much.

I originally wanted to give it five stars when I first watched it, but I can only give it four stars. When I was watching it, I had a lot to say, but after watching it, I suddenly didn't want to say it anymore. To put it bluntly, I am a person who reads harem novels. If I read too many harems, I will also read a sweet love story with a single female protagonist, like those 9:00 novels with a single female protagonist surnamed Jiang. I particularly like it. Many people must have read it, but this one does not meet my expectations. In more than 250 chapters, the protagonist was taken away by the space turbulence. It took more than 100 chapters to come back and meet the heroine. I also skipped more than 100 chapters here. I haven't read it, that's one thing. The most important thing is that the male and female protagonists are really together in chapter 510, and the whole book is only in chapter 540 [punch out] [punch out]. In the end, the author probably couldn't continue writing, so he only wrote about the lower world, and the upper world was just touched upon. There are other places where I feel ambiguous with other girls. It's hard to say. It depends on your own opinions. I have a good relationship with a few female nuns, but others only regard the protagonist as friends. I thought this book would have multiple female protagonists. After reading it, I was still thinking about Wen Ruotang. I really like this character, but it would be nice to have a good ending in the end. As for Ye Xi, she liked the protagonist. Even though he died and was resurrected in the end, he was finally accepted as his apprentice, so he mentioned it. That's about it? There are some places where I wanted to say something while I was reading it, but then forgot about it after watching it, so that should be it. When I first watched it, I wanted to give it five stars, but I can only give it four stars. There was a lot I wanted to say while I was watching it, but after watching it I suddenly didn't want to say it anymore. To put it bluntly, I am a person who reads harem novels. If I read too many harems, I will also read a sweet love story with a single female protagonist, just like those 9:00 novels with a single female protagonist surnamed Jiang. I particularly like them and many people must have read them. But this one doesn't meet my expectations: 1. Rhythm problem: The protagonist was taken away by space turbulence to other places in more than 250 chapters, and did not come back to meet the heroine until more than 100 chapters. I also skipped more than 100 chapters here without reading. 2. The emotional line is too slow: The most important thing is that the male and female protagonists only really get together in Chapter 510, and the whole book only has 540 chapters. 3. The ending is hasty: In the end, the author probably couldn't continue writing, so he only wrote about the lower world, and the upper world was just touched upon. 4. Ambiguity: There are other places where you feel ambiguous with other girls. This is hard to say. It depends on your own opinions. I have a really good relationship with a few female nuns, but others only regard the protagonist as friends. I thought this book would have multiple female protagonists. After watching it, I was still thinking about Wen Ruotang. I quite like this character, but it would be nice to have a good ending in the end. As for Ye Xi, she liked the protagonist. Although he died, he was resurrected in the end and was finally accepted as his apprentice, so he mentioned it. That's about it? There are some places where I wanted to say something while I was reading it, but then forgot about it after watching it, so that should be it.

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"Walking the Horses" is so beautiful, I can't stand it anymore. I have classes tomorrow, so I stayed up late to finish reading it. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] Author, please hurry up. I feel so uncomfortable if I don't read it now. Don't force me, please🙏

It's pretty good. I see that there are basically no issues in the more than 200 chapters. The more exciting ones include the relationship between master and apprentice in the early stage, the sect competition, and later the Yuanying Cave Palace, the destruction of Bixiao Sect, the destruction of Yun Qingyao from the lower realm, etc., Are quite interesting. The development of the story also won my heart, it was very peaceful, as if I were really traveling with the master and apprentice: like Sister Wen in the human world, and Sister Zhao Rong in the back, it was handled particularly well, with a bit of a romantic mythical style haha... Including the New Year's Eve part with Su Rao was also very warm. There is no nonsense chapter, the foreshadowing is very good, and it not only has the battle of wits and courage with Yun Qingyao and the others, but also has some soothing plots, and the rhythm is well controlled, with tension and relaxation. I am very optimistic about this book at the moment. It is both sweet and funny, and the level of improvement is also very reasonable. It will not collapse and it will not be aggrieved by being suppressed all the time. In short, it is worth reading o>_<o

After reading it for so long, to sum up, book lovers who first want to read daily romance novels can exclude this book first. It does not mean that the writing is not good. Although the interaction between the male and female protagonists in the early stage is quite sweet, in the later stage, they focus on cultivation. This is no problem, but the main reason is that it is too dull in the later stage. It is really dull! ! ! More than 420 chapters! The male protagonist doesn't even have any interest in the female protagonist, and he just raises her as his daughter. There is also too much emphasis on branch plots, always adding some supporting characters for no reason and then rushing to write them all at once. This also causes the emotional main line of the male and female protagonists to develop too slowly [laughing] After finally finishing some straight lines and reaching the main plot, it turns out that the male and female protagonists are either practicing or on the way to practice. Anyway, as mentioned above, the soup is clear but not watery (it needs to be sweet but not sweet, and the knife is not sharp enough). Now that we've talked about the plot, let's move on to the setting. It was clearly written well in the early stage, but later on, we decided to give the heroine a second personality (I hate this kind of setting anyway. A single female author and a single female protagonist insist on a second personality, which makes me a bit uncomfortable to watch as a mental freak.) Moreover, the male protagonist is too simple, and it is obvious what the female protagonist means to the male protagonist. Everyone around him can see it, but the male protagonist doesn't know yet. In general, that's it, but there are still many benefits. For example, the world view is quite complete, and the details and human nature are also very delicate. In addition, because the main plot is too slow, this book can probably be written for a long time╮(￣▽￣)╭The author is also very diligent and updates quickly. I hope it can continue. Okay, that's all. \^O^/...... It shouldn't be too much, right? [Eat melon]

It's good to watch, the protagonist is smart, the plot is not overly sophisticated, the Golden Finger is moderate, and the pacing is well controlled. The main plot is advanced while interspersed with the daily relationship development between master and apprentice. It seems that the combat power is not too high at the moment. You can watch this if you like it.

This is my favorite novel so far. I personally feel that the plot is pretty good, and the description of the supporting characters in the book is also great. It can be seen that the author has really worked hard. Of course, the most important thing is that the author's writing style is good. But can you give Huanhuan a few chapters first? The branch plot with the male protagonist is too long. I can't say that the branch plot is not well written. The branch plot has the function of a branch plot, but you can't give a few chapters of Huanhuan's plot [Thoughts]

As of Chapter 124, it's worth watching just because of the showdown between the male protagonist and the male protagonist. The other little bits like Huanhuan's inner change, the handyman disciples entering and exiting the Peak Master's residence at will, and the death of Ye Xi are all little kisses. Compared with the other bits and pieces of the single-female protagonists in the movies next door, it's much more comfortable to watch. I can't tell this one is a female channel routine, and I really can't stand the female channel routines in the next few movies, so let's continue watching. I would like to add that Yun Qingyao's line seemed awkward to me when I looked at it closely at the beginning. I thought it would be better to write less about her. As of 182, the author is starting to let himself go a little bit. As of 198, it is indeed the same as other book friends commented. We want to read Lao Chu and Huan Huan. The author always writes about Yun Qingyao, so I won't read it for the time being.

The plot is really enjoyable, especially the part where Jiang Ning fights against the Bixiao Sect, hahaha. It's not mindless. Jiang and Shen's growth process is step-by-step. There are no surprises. It is written in such a way that people want to keep reading. I'm sorry to my family members [Cool] The author, cheers up [Working on the manuscript] [Working on the manuscript] [Salute]

It's quite interesting, the routine is vulgar but interesting, and it looks good. I was addicted to it after reading it, and after more than 200 chapters, I had no desire to continue reading. In my humble opinion, it is reasonable to have foreshadowing, but not at the expense of the reader's reading experience. In the eyes of the author, the ending of the story can be seen. For this ending, the ending is constantly being prepared and conceived from back to front, but the reader reads from front to back. Too long a foreshadowing is difficult to attract the reader's interest in reading. In the eyes of the author, it is a normal story flow, but in the eyes of the reader, it is inexplicably very fragmented. The climax is not reached yet. I can't go on anymore. I was attracted to it because of Jiang Ning and Huan Huan. The story of the two of them together is the story. Forcibly splitting it apart will only be an accident. Who is writing such a long paragraph at the end? Don't you understand how many people start with five-star praise and then follow up with negative reviews? After more than 100 chapters, the hero comes back to save the beauty. I laughed out loud and chased after him.

Especially beautiful. There is no brainless feeling like what I saw before, where the system is basically invincible after awakening. It was just a little bit toxic when the heroine had a split personality in the early stage. After watching that episode. There is no poisonous point later on. It's just that this wave of heroines are not completely dead. I really didn't expect it. Moreover, the heroine's soul-transportation has many benefits. They are all immortal-level techniques, and the ones the male protagonist is using now only look like low-level ones on the earth level. I hope the male protagonist can be improved a bit.

The emotional portrayal is very delicate. This is the first time I have read the comments on Tomato after a long time. Some people say that the heroine is schizophrenic and poisonous. The heroine is not a child who grew up in a greenhouse. Only if we can fully understand the inhumane treatment of the heroine before can we understand the psychology of the heroine. That is not a poisonous point, but a very real and delicate portrayal of emotions.

I've caught up with the latest chapter. What's the point? First: the male protagonist is wearing clothes. What is written in the article is that he passed through the bureau to correct other people's perceptions and automatically regarded the male protagonist as the original owner. This hole should be difficult to fill. Maybe the author wanted to write about wearing clothes, but couldn't find a way to avoid leaving holes, so he just left it like this [laughing and crying]. There is no other story about a villain in a book that "can't change the plot too much and still has to torture the heroine." This makes me feel more comfortable. Second: Confession Bureau. Later, he directly confessed to the heroine the reasons why he treated the heroine differently before and after. This kind of writing about self-explosion about time travel is not considered poisonous. At least it is better than those who keep pulling the strings with unspeakable background, making the heroine misunderstand and doubt. Third: After the original heroine was killed, her soul entered the world. She feels that she will not die for a while. Later, the original heroine may be asked to act as a demon to enhance the relationship between the male and female protagonists [laughing and crying] Fourth: The female protagonist is from the demon clan. In novels, the male and female protagonists always have unusual identities. It's an old classic. There's not much to say. Finally, I came to read the story through the search for Chong Shi Ni's disciples. The fighting and combat power don't seem too outrageous to me. I can just glance at them and scan them all [laughing and crying]. I hope that the single heroine will not have ambiguities with other women. There is no such thing as past and present life, reincarnation, etc.

Let me give it five stars first. The first fifty chapters were quite enjoyable to read. Some people say that the male protagonist🐢 is the male protagonist, so I suggest you read the novel about female fans, or the ancient fairy tales, or the harem novels. This is how the male protagonist makes up for the harm done to the female protagonist, and the process is still very sweet. But there are a hundred chapters in the middle where the male protagonist and the female protagonist grow up separately. It feels to me that the focus of this book is still on cultivating immortality and becoming stronger. The title and label are a bit like deceiving readers of sweet novels, which makes me a little unhappy. If you are a reader who has read fairy tales such as Perfect World, Fighting to Break the Sky, Mortal Cultivation, etc., But wants a single female protagonist, then this book is very suitable. Those who only read fairy tales can also read this book. But if you just want to read the emotional drama between the male and female protagonists, then this book does not live up to its title, because there are too many plots in it that have nothing to do with the female protagonist. The emotional drama between the male and female protagonists accounts for at most 30%, and the rest is all the stuff of cultivating immortals. This book is destined to be over a million words long, and there will definitely be a lot of sweet plots in the back, especially after the heroine reaches adulthood and becomes completely yandere, it should be very exciting. But for now, it's just a prototype and can be pursued, but it is more recommended to raise it. Give me a five-star encouragement first and see if there are any big du points later. [Praise]

It's well written. The master dotes on his disciples and is tough on others. I hope the author will continue to do so and you will receive rave reviews.

🤔In the early stage of this book, it was just about the love and hatred between master and disciple. I saw that in more than 100 chapters, the author not only wrote about the fighting scenes of cultivators, but also about various situations in the world, as well as reflecting the struggles of small people in reality. Although it is a bit off track, the writing is really good.

Although it is not finished yet, I am very satisfied when I see the successful results. Although the plot in the middle when the master and apprentice are not together is really boring, fortunately, everything that needs to be written has been written, and I have no intention of reading the rest. It is already a good ending. There is also a slight gap from what I thought. There is no problem with the relationship. The main reason is that when the emotional dust has settled, the strength is still very weak, and the level of improvement is still too slow. It only takes one or two hundred chapters to reach a big level. If you ignore the strength, the progress of the novel is very different from what is written in the introduction, so I didn't want to continue reading.

It was pretty good up to Chapter 109. In Chapter 110, Wen Ruotang suddenly became the empress. The lack of foreshadowing made it feel a bit anti-character. I suggest that if you have time in the later period, you can add some content. Then the male and female protagonists break the gap, and you can add sweet scenes (refer to more popular love novels). I hope that the later chapters will not be too cliche about college upgrades or the heroine's strong family background and a lot of family disputes. Finally, I wish the author will get better and better as he writes [Love]

It's also very good. It's not too toxic at the moment. It's a little bit toxic in the early stage, but it's harmless. Overall, it's relatively smooth and pretty good.

Recently, there are very few authors who can seriously calm down and write thoughtful and logical articles. Although the plot and plot are old-fashioned, they are rare. I hope the author will not follow the trend and give up his own writing style in order to make quick money.

The plot and characterization of this book are not bad, and the rhythm of emotional changes is also appropriate. Overall, it is not bad. I can only say that this rating needs time to settle, and it was a bit delayed by the title of the book [face covering]