So What If I’m a Villainous Witch? I’ll Spoil My Own Disciple

The good-looking single female protagonist is in pure love and the sweet daily life of the male and female protagonist. It feels like the author may have wanted to extend the story line, so he deliberately controlled the protagonist's upgrade speed. This is understandable. But to be honest, compared with the geniuses of his generation, the protagonist's cultivation is really lagging behind a lot (they are all in the late stage of Golden Core), which makes me feel a little nervous when watching it. The main feeling is "unreliable". When reading a story about a single heroine, isn't it just for the sake of stability and sweetness? I want to see how the protagonist pampers the heroine and how to live a good life of his own. But now the protagonist's strength is a bit weak, and it always feels like he is struggling to even protect the heroine, so he has to be constantly on tenterhooks, fearing that something unexpected will happen in the next chapter. This constant sense of urgency, to be honest, has a bit of an impact on my sugar-drinking mood, and I can't completely relax even in my daily life. In fact, the protagonist does not necessarily have to be Long Aotian, but he must at least keep up with the first echelon, right? As long as his strength can make everyone feel "Well, with him here, I'm stable" and can deal with most crises, then you can safely immerse yourself in the daily love life you wrote, and then encounter times when you can't beat him, right? It can also explode. Write some emotional or passionate content. In fact, the heroine of the original book is not particularly annoying now, she is just a young and spoiled little girl (with some green tea). If she could experience some things, grow up slowly, and form a couple with the male protagonist in the original book, wouldn't the story be more interesting? (Other books of the same type vilify the male and female protagonists in the original book and then confront each other) In fact, here we are watching the sweet couple of the protagonists, and there we are watching the slowly growing lovers of the original book. This is not the same as following two novels at once, which is double the happiness! Written directly as a group portrait story, each character has its own growth line and emotional line. In this way, the story pattern is suddenly opened up, and you can write it as long as you want. He was poisoned from behind.

The writing is quite good, the plot is not cliche, but a bit bland, and the psychology of the character descriptions is clearly explained. It tastes like eating light food, but the taste and aftertaste are very good. There is no problem with the continuity of the story, and there is no sense of fragmentation. For me, there are almost no surprises, and the updates are very diligent. Currently, it is updated three times a day, so I can read it with confidence.

It's quite nice. The male protagonist is wearing it. I've seen a lot of soul piercings, and I especially like it. Both the male and female protagonists are very strong, their revenge is refreshing, and they kill decisively. There are no confusing emotional lines. I just like to see the emotional lines not messed up. This one looks pretty good so far, I hope it will continue to work!

Summary: Simple and plain Disadvantages: 1. The novel about cultivating immortals lacks the feeling of cultivating immortality. This book focuses on the emotional progression of the protagonist and the heroine. All the plots in the early stage are to build a ladder for the emotions of the male and female protagonists. There is no passion for cultivating immortals, and the battle plot is seriously insufficient. Compared to the novel about cultivating immortals, I see that the current plot is more like the daily love life covered in the novel about cultivating immortals. 2. The characters are flat and the characters except the male and female protagonists are downplayed, which makes the book look dull and cliché. In fact, this requires the author's writing style. I said it after thinking about the evaluation. 3. The plot is too bland, and what I mean by bland is compared to a fairy tale. If the book focuses on the emotional changes of the male and female protagonists, it may be regarded as a climax of the plot. After reading more than a hundred chapters, my heart has not changed much. Some plots can cause discomfort. It is possible to start low and go high, but it cannot retain people. There is very little foreshadowing. Perhaps what I saw is the line between the male and female protagonists in the original book, and the male protagonist's family in the upper world. Conclusion: This book is tasteless and it would be a pity to discard it. It can be used as a boring pastime. And: the above are all personal opinions, please forgive me if you don't like it.

The writing style is above average, but the characterization is very good, the plot is compact, and the logic of some details is a bit problematic, but the overall level of Tomato is quite good if you don't look closely. The score is a little low, and it should be no problem to get 8 points. Sure enough... Every low-scoring book is based on strength... The strength of the protagonist is suppressed in the back. It is unbearable to look at it. In dozens of chapters, the strength has not increased at all. After receiving the inheritance of Yuanying Alchemy Master, he stopped refining alchemy, learned martial arts, and practiced... Then Later generations flew directly to learn incense and Shintoism. After learning a little bit, they wanted to transform the communist world. They flew away again just after starting. This time, they went directly to write about supporting characters. I wrote about minor supporting characters in a large space... I rambled here and there, dozens or hundreds of chapters before slowly returning to the main line...

Tell me what I like most about this book. If a traditional female video does not include other supporting characters, it is inevitable that one thing will be repeated later and the expression will be barren. Therefore, some supporting characters will be added, and some writers will simply discard them when they are finished! Some writers cannot handle the emotional transition well, which makes the audience feel that it is a pity that there is only one female protagonist, which is very conflicting. However, all the supporting characters in this book are handled very well. Without affecting the theme of the single female protagonist, other characters are introduced to add twists and turns to the plot, and finally give an ending. Everyone's ending is different. It seems that I have made up the experience of each supporting character on my own. "Single female protagonist", "Single doting female devil", "Daily life of master and apprentice", "Rebel apprentice". The author has been immersed in his own art recently and cannot extricate himself. There are fewer and fewer straw men, don't stop, keep chasing them.

It's very good-looking and exciting. I basically finished it in one day. To be honest, it's sweeter and more bland than most novels. However, you only started to get on track after more than 90 chapters. It's a bit too late to fill it in, but I think it's quite normal. There's no problem, because there's a lot of foreshadowing and it's pretty good-looking. Anyway, just take your time and write it, don't be in a hurry, it's very good-looking.

It is very delicate, and the pace is not sluggish. Every story and every character is carefully designed by the author. Even the small characters are based on the author's own thinking. Of course, there are some flaws, but overall it is very comfortable to watch, and I don't feel bored yet. The plots at each stage are relatively stable. Some people think it is water and separation, but these plots pave the way for the protagonist's character growth. It's pure fun. If you just fight and level up, readers will get bored after a few chapters. Very well written

It's pretty good to watch. The relationship between the male and female protagonists in the early stage is quite good. I really like how the heroine's character is developed, but the middle and later stages are not very good. (Minor spoilers) First, in order to complete the story of the male protagonist in the original world, too much ink was spent. Not only did dozens of chapters of the male protagonist in the original world be written separately, but also in order to reflect the growth of the female protagonist, the female protagonist did not appear in more than a hundred chapters. That part was the most uncomfortable part to read, and I renovated it every time. When writing the chapter, I was looking forward to Huanhuan coming out... But even if I wrote about the growth of the heroine, she only grew in age. From the beginning to the end, the heroine failed to stand with the hero to fight against the enemy as he wished. It was always like, when the enemy came, the hero said: "Go and wait for me in the small world." Then there's the male protagonist, maybe because I can't continue writing? In the early stage, he created a cautious image, but in the later stage, there was no way to pave the way for the advancement of the plot. The male protagonist went on adventures everywhere, and then he was always beaten by a level higher than himself, and he provoked high-level monsters everywhere. Maybe the author couldn't continue writing because of poor data at the end. It took him only one or two hundred chapters to complete his cultivation in Nascent Soul, but it only took one or two hundred chapters to go from becoming a god to ascension. The plot and rhythm were pushed too fast, and it ended suddenly, which was a little bit unfinished. But in summary, I really recommend watching it. The first plot is really interesting. I feel very sorry for the ending. I still like the portrayal of the heroine's character very much.

I originally wanted to give it five stars when I first watched it, but I can only give it four stars. When I was watching it, I had a lot to say, but after watching it, I suddenly didn't want to say it anymore. To put it bluntly, I am a person who reads harem novels. If I read too many harems, I will also read a sweet love story with a single female protagonist, like those 9:00 novels with a single female protagonist surnamed Jiang. I particularly like it. Many people must have read it, but this one does not meet my expectations. In more than 250 chapters, the protagonist was taken away by the space turbulence. It took more than 100 chapters to come back and meet the heroine. I also skipped more than 100 chapters here. I haven't read it, that's one thing. The most important thing is that the male and female protagonists are really together in chapter 510, and the whole book is only in chapter 540 [punch out] [punch out]. In the end, the author probably couldn't continue writing, so he only wrote about the lower world, and the upper world was just touched upon. There are other places where I feel ambiguous with other girls. It's hard to say. It depends on your own opinions. I have a good relationship with a few female nuns, but others only regard the protagonist as friends. I thought this book would have multiple female protagonists. After reading it, I was still thinking about Wen Ruotang. I really like this character, but it would be nice to have a good ending in the end. As for Ye Xi, she liked the protagonist. Even though he died and was resurrected in the end, he was finally accepted as his apprentice, so he mentioned it. That's about it? There are some places where I wanted to say something while I was reading it, but then forgot about it after watching it, so that should be it. When I first watched it, I wanted to give it five stars, but I can only give it four stars. There was a lot I wanted to say while I was watching it, but after watching it I suddenly didn't want to say it anymore. To put it bluntly, I am a person who reads harem novels. If I read too many harems, I will also read a sweet love story with a single female protagonist, just like those 9:00 novels with a single female protagonist surnamed Jiang. I particularly like them and many people must have read them. But this one doesn't meet my expectations: 1. Rhythm problem: The protagonist was taken away by space turbulence to other places in more than 250 chapters, and did not come back to meet the heroine until more than 100 chapters. I also skipped more than 100 chapters here without reading. 2. The emotional line is too slow: The most important thing is that the male and female protagonists only really get together in Chapter 510, and the whole book only has 540 chapters. 3. The ending is hasty: In the end, the author probably couldn't continue writing, so he only wrote about the lower world, and the upper world was just touched upon. 4. Ambiguity: There are other places where you feel ambiguous with other girls. This is hard to say. It depends on your own opinions. I have a really good relationship with a few female nuns, but others only regard the protagonist as friends. I thought this book would have multiple female protagonists. After watching it, I was still thinking about Wen Ruotang. I quite like this character, but it would be nice to have a good ending in the end. As for Ye Xi, she liked the protagonist. Although he died, he was resurrected in the end and was finally accepted as his apprentice, so he mentioned it. That's about it? There are some places where I wanted to say something while I was reading it, but then forgot about it after watching it, so that should be it.