Camouflage************

After reading the first story, overall the plot is very innovative, and it is not a homogeneous plot. However, the ending is a bit hasty and feels a bit unfinished. The immersive way of reading the book can better introduce the heroine's character and plot, but although the heroine wants to conquer the male protagonist In fact, there are not many scenes between the male and female protagonists, and there is no sense of gradual emotional deepening. Most of the time, I have a deep impression of the bully and villain. I feel that the focus of the story is a bit wrong. I hope the author of the subsequent stories can play better. Overall, the first story is okay.

It looks good, but the first world is more regretful. The heroine died trying to save him in the end. The heroine knew she was afraid of pain, but she still cut her wrists to save him, and he could only watch helplessly as his lover died to save him. I love you more than myself. I'll write a sequel [I'm about to cry]

It's well written, and it's my favorite style of writing. Unfortunately, the endings are all "be". I can't accept "be" for no reason at all. I feel like it's "be" for the sake of "be". It might be better if he could.

Family members, please give me a thumbs up. This book is super nice. Just savor this book carefully, hehe. Author, tell me the truth whether this is your trumpet account, do you have any other accounts, and show me your other books! ! ! It's simply not enough to read. Why is it that I'm chasing a new book? The author needs more updates! ! ! More! ! !

Please read it carefully, this novel is really beautiful!

The writing is very good and immersive. The heroine is very sensible and beautiful! ! !

It's so beautiful. I'll revive it soon. This book is really beautiful and the characters are very touching.

I like the first world very much, it's beautiful [Adoration]

It's really, really delicious!

Come on, author! ! ! It's getting better and better starting from the second world! [Adoration]

I particularly like (ღ˘⌣˘ღ), it's super good-looking. Recommended to watch.

Good-looking, love to watch, watch more

It looks good, it looks good, I love immersion