Great Qin: The Black Bird’s Egg, Worshiped as the Nation’s Guardian Beast

I've already transformed myself, but I'm still trying to persuade me not to look for immortality [awkward laughter]

Birds can speak human language, and Ying Zheng, who is crazy about seeking immortality, might just kill the pig's feet and eat them.

To be honest, I have read the latest chapter of this book, and I really don't see what the main character is for. I didn't even tell the First Emperor about salt, potatoes, corn and other messy things. After reading this book, I just wrote one sentence. History is written as a novel and then a god-man protagonist travels back in time to become a bird to watch history. The protagonist has very few roles. It's really hard to break down.

Emm, killing Hu Hai is very safe, so you just have short legs and disfigurement, then why do you want to time travel, why not Yi Xiaochuan

So pretty, so pretty. The plot is well described. Although nothing has changed in terms of historical macro, the personal emotions are described very well. Enough to fill the entire novel. The author must work hard, the First Emperor must not die, the writing is so good. The advice I give is don't rush into plots such as God's words. The protagonist can wait, he can get some v-myths, heavenly palaces, etc. Or forget it. The core suggestion is that the protagonist is the most amazing thing in the world right now. And there are some rare and exotic animals in the world, but there are no gods. If you make this worldview too big, you won't be able to play it later.

I don't see the use of the protagonist

Modern people all praise Fusu, but I don't like him very much. In modern terms, you are a good person, but you are not my beloved. Is it enough that the prince is a good person? Compared with the prince who Liu Che forced to death, Fusu is much worse. He may be the taller among the dwarfs, so he seems to be good. Perhaps the biggest contribution is to recuperate and recuperate. Maybe recuperating and recuperating can prolong the life of Daqin for a few more years. Xuanniao is not close to Fusu, and even if Xuanniao supports Fusu, he may not listen. There is also the Confucian pillow style. If you want to stand by and do it to the end, you can either support Daqin from the beginning, or you can stand by and watch until the end.

I don't see any use for hair, or is it really just for hair?

After reading it, it feels more like writing an autobiography for Ying Zheng, or a second creation. What's the matter with this bird without the main character...

You bird is not as useful as a roast chicken