Daqin************

So pretty, so pretty. The plot is well described. Although nothing has changed in terms of historical macro, the personal emotions are described very well. Enough to fill the entire novel. The author must work hard, the First Emperor must not die, the writing is so good. The advice I give is don't rush into plots such as God's words. The protagonist can wait, he can get some v-myths, heavenly palaces, etc. Or forget it. The core suggestion is that the protagonist is the most amazing thing in the world right now. And there are some rare and exotic animals in the world, but there are no gods. If you make this worldview too big, you won't be able to play it later.

After reading it, it feels more like writing an autobiography for Ying Zheng, or a second creation. What's the matter with this bird without the main character...

Just my personal opinion: not enough😖. In terms of characters, the First Emperor is portrayed with great flavor. The image creation of the First Emperor is also at a remarkable level. Intuitively speaking, Xuanniao has less pen and ink in the article, and is more inclined to show the atmosphere of the Qin Dynasty. The writing is concise and worth learning. Let's wait and see later. This is my personal opinion only. This is my first time writing a book review, so please don't criticize me.

It's much better starting from chapter 58. Author, you just can't read the previous ones. If you travel through a few pictures at first and you get used to it, you can just write a few pictures. After writing dozens of pictures, it will be much better when you start writing and there won't be so many negative comments. You should say it in the comment area. Starting from chapter 58, there won't be so many negative comments. The writing is not good yet. For newcomers, it will be fine starting from chapter 58. Those who do these are still very good. [Like] The author is too cool

Ahhhhhhhhh, it looks good! My charming and great ancestor! Ahhhhhhhhhh!

It's really beautiful! (If you can deceive someone, you're good [laughing evilly])

No, I was still waiting to see Brother Zheng wake up, but it was taken off the shelves? (இωஇ )

It's really beautiful, and the further you look at it, the better it gets! The plot line and friendship line are super attractive. Xuanniao also became His Majesty's good friend It started to look good after the black bird turned into a human.

I think it looks pretty good, but now I don't know why it was taken off the shelves.

It was taken off the shelves for no reason. It looks so good. Can anyone contact the author? [Crying]

It's beautiful, I hope it can make His Majesty live forever.

It's so perfect, pure dialogue, and my son fell in love with it at the beginning. What is the protagonist's ability? I don't know, I haven't figured it out after reading more than a dozen chapters.

It's pretty good, but it's just not enough. It must be distressing for the main character to turn into a bird, but it is good to turn into a human. Hee hee hee hee hee [laughing] [laughing]

I only had books for a few days, why are they gone? (っ╥╯╰╥C)

Not bad, currently non-toxic In order to live forever, why didn't Ying Zheng ask if Xuanniao's 🩸 could extend his life? There's nothing wrong with you being an ordinary bird, but you are indeed a divine bird with spirituality. So, let's see about it later.

I didn't expect to be killed [smile] [cry]

I quite like it, but I don't know why it was suddenly taken off the shelves.

Generally speaking, it is good, but the focus may be a bit misplaced. I am more particular about the wording. It is a good article. Generally speaking, there is basically no obstacle in reading it and it does not feel too awkward or anything.

There are two books about Daqin missing from the bookshelf. Why exactly?

Why did it suddenly disappear?

Why was it removed from the shelves [crying] I was still waiting for the update, but when I came back it was gone [almost crying]

How could I have died if I had only been raising books for a few days [shocked][shocked][shocked]

Doesn't the author think the name "Destiny Black Bird" is strange? God ordered the black bird to come to the world and the Shang Dynasty was born. Tianming is not his name, it sounds just like Tianming Xuanye. The author's score is low for no reason. He keeps inking and pulling. This is not a female channel.

It's very beautiful, but why has the book been taken off the shelves? When will it be available?

Why was it removed?

Can you still see the back? The author will be back soon

The author has carefully read the history books. This book is written with the First Emperor as the protagonist. Articles written from the perspective of the First Emperor are rare, and it is generally difficult to write about the First Emperor well, so many authors use their own characters as the protagonists. The author writes the First Emperor very well, and it fits the image of the First Emperor in my mind. He is proud and stubborn. Looking forward to the subsequent plot and hoping that the First Emperor will live forever.

This feeling, I think the author's writing style is good It's like a bowl of light soup. It tastes slightly salty, and when you taste it with a blink of an eye, it also has a umami taste. The storyline doesn't have much ups and downs, I personally think it's pretty good

It's okay, it feels better and better as time goes by.

Business will enrich the country, industry will strengthen the country, and agriculture will stabilize the country.