After Time Travel, I Became Li Lianhua's Wronged Brother

Looks great, I like this setting. An ordinary person in the world of Lotus Tower, without a golden finger, would actually not be able to connect with a top figure like Li Xiangyi. I met Li Lianhua first. At this period, his personality charm was stronger than that of Xiaoyu. He had the pyrotechnics of a normal person. He was not as difficult to approach and catch up with as Xiaoyu. Ordinary people were probably not as good as Qiao, who could walk with a genius like a gap for a period of time, and his mental state and strength could not match him. The Lotus period is more like a master who has settled down after great enlightenment, but the posture of falling is a bit miserable. He does not actively grow but passively accepts it, which makes people feel uncomfortable.

The humor is laced with pure sincerity. What you thought was your first encounter is actually the reunion of a long-lost friend, a best friend across time and space. Woohoo, although there is no CP, CB is still good. The 15-year-old Comrade Xiao Xie and Li Lianhua after the East China Sea, a wandering soul in another world and a helpless wandering doctor, depend on each other for life (?). They watch indifferently from the perspective of an alienated god, to forcefully breaking through their long-standing persistence for their best friend. Feelings are always two-way. From my personal understanding, Xiao Xie's feelings for Lotus should have some sense of fledgling in a sense. After all, he is the first person he meets during time travel, and considering his mission and emotions, Lotus is also the only anchor point in his endless linear time travel. It is a task, a mission, and a personal choice. The 22-year-old Lao Xie and the young and spirited Li Xiangyi are overly emotional and natural. The young man's feelings are quite sincere. From the negative impression caused by the corpse brother's lies in the early stage to the journey of thousands of miles to find him, this description is very comfortable. The rest of the story is also very exciting from the introduction, I hope to see it soon (I don't force it, just do it as the author feels comfortable, just don't cheat me🕳️, please (╥╯╰╥)ง) Hehe, but the author, although a small amount of abuse is pleasant, a large amount of abuse is really harmful to the body. Please give me a good ending! In the end, Li Xiangyi was the best in the world, and Li Lianhua lived a long life. This is a story worth reading. Some things are worn away by the temper of time, and some true feelings gradually become deeper and deeper over time. A diamond needs to be sharpened, and a heart needs to be responded to. Let us dedicate our praise to the distant place and to those who bring stories from far away. The first long review is dedicated to the storyteller and to this story!

The logic is smooth, the characters are not jumpy, and even the time paradox in the closed time loop is solved very well. The author is very awesome ദ്ദി ˉ꒳ˉ͈́ )✧, I finally saw them reunited, and I came here to write a review. The update is relatively stable so far, so cheers for the author! !

The setting is novel and interesting. The protagonist Lao Xie, who was wronged during time travel, laughed until he did the splits and flew up with joy. Sand sculptures and knives flew together. No matter how miserable Li Lianhua was, there were still people who knew the truth. Fans were ecstatic! Traveling between two timelines, my past is your (half) future, and my (half) future is your past. Huahua, who is in the future timeline, is not sure whether Lao Xie will have a third chance to travel back to the present. She also has the original plot awareness and can be considered a qualified matchmaker. [Face covering] The suicide note part is very sad, but it can also be regarded as a confession in a different direction [almost crying], Lao Xie, you are so in love. [Like] Lao Xie, who is responsible for making complaints and humanoid barrage, is responsible for translating the "irrationality" of the martial arts world into memes, giving readers a strong sense of involvement. Huahua retains the Buddhist character of "wanting to live but not winning" in the original work, and adds the proud afterimage of "the young man who is the best in the world", forming a huge contrast. On the basis that the original characters are "not OOC", new blood has been successfully added. Switch between high abuse and sand sculpture freely, with great emotional tension. This book uses a hilarious shell to wrap a tender core: it allows Li Xiangyi, who has fallen from the altar, to learn pain and laughter again, and it also allows modern college student Xie Suichen to find the coordinates of "being needed" in the shadow of swords and swords - it turns out that the real "long life" is having someone watch all the fireworks side by side with you, and then go home to steam fish and cook rice together.

After reading it for a few months after writing it, I found that the writing style of this book is undoubtedly immature, and the settings and emotions I wanted to write about can only be expressed at a tenth of tenths, and some parts are even too far-fetched. The main text is not satisfactory, the extra chapter ends hastily, and there is a long extra chapter that cannot be published. It is full of regrets, but all regrets can only end here. Looking back on the whole process now, I still feel that the true character of the character Li Lianhua/Li Xiangyi was not written. It is unknown whether the concerned Xiao Yuhua has this kind of character, and whether love and companionship can give him a reason to live cannot be verified. As an author who writes boldly, I have fictionalized too much and changed too much. The TV series has been aired for more than two years, and Li Lianhua's ending is fixed in that sentence. I think maybe the meaning of fandom is not to really change anything, but to give comfort to all the fans who can't bear the ending. It doesn't take much to finish writing a fanfic, just a little sincerity is enough. As for writing well, it may require sincerity, respect, understanding, courage... Unfortunately, my mediocre life experience is not enough to support me in understanding Li Lianhua, and my lack of boring writing skills is not enough to support me in writing a wonderful story. Some readers may be curious about the reason why the author ran away. There is indeed a reason for the poor data. Since it is all about generating electricity for love, I would rather choose a platform that is relatively friendly to the author. There is much more to say, so I won't go into details here. Finally, thank you all for clicking into this article.

This is the 23rd completed fanfic of "Lotus Tower". I stumbled upon this by accident. The date of writing seems to be that it is new, but I feel like I have seen it too late. It is an excellent work. The young author is a contemporary college student with strong writing skills. This is the most informative and comprehensive fanfic I have read so far: it combines physics, chemistry, arithmetic, classical Chinese, the Book of Songs, various professional terms, poetry, pinyin, English... And various dimensions of space... It is well-founded and well-founded. If you don't understand, you can find answers in the comment area. The young author is very active! There are a lot of funny jokes in the article, which are sweet and refreshing but also slightly sadistic. The writing is humorous, full of emotions, active and logical thinking, and the plot reversal is well grasped. The original story frame is very attractive. You have been to my future, and I have been to the past... The various personal settings are intertwined and fascinating. The ending is actually about going to the mountains and seas to join forces, and saving Mingming. From a martial arts writer to a fairy, he will live forever. This is my favorite type! The protagonist in the article, Xie Suichen, is a contemporary super academic. He has very upright views, attaches great importance to love and justice, has strong martial arts skills, strong hands-on ability, is super diligent, and is also very funny. The key point is: his thoughts and knowledge are thousands of years ahead of the Lotus Tower era, and his ability to make money is first-rate. He is really a super good person! In an accident, he was sent to the space of the Lotus Building by the plot consciousness. After dozens of reincarnations and many adjustments, he finally formed a bond with Li Xiangyi (Li Lianhua), planned everything for him, and planned to die... Who knows that the plot consciousness turned around... And finally embraced the beautiful woman (and a "baby") to live a happy life. The other protagonist also fits the character very well, our world's number one swordsman Li Xiangyi. When he was young, he was confident and flamboyant, passionate, resolute, and as cute as a little whirlwind! Li Lianhua (because the male protagonist made all the arrangements in advance, he has money, elixirs, and a house, and he also plays puzzle games and digs for treasures from time to time, so he was raised very well) during his period, he was gentle, steady, affectionate, and a little cunning~ The two redeemed each other, attracted each other, appreciated each other, loved each other, tolerated and understood... If the author hadn't told the truth, I wouldn't have noticed it was CP at first. The emotions were so natural and everything fell into place. Readers shouted: Group CP, if this is not love, what else can it be? Read the full text There is a kind of reincarnation, and that person is just you! It can only be your feeling. This is a good article worth re-reading. I would like to thank the author for his hard work in writing and giving a wonderful ending to the story. It touches the world and spans time and space. I love Li Xiangyi and Li Lianhua. Of course, I also love Xie Suichen, the author's original character (it's so good that I can't help but love it) ~ If you have different opinions, you are right. I wish you all a happy reading and see you in the world! [Love][love][love] The rating of this book does not match the content. I believe that as the reading volume increases and the praise continues, the rating will be higher! Every reunion is the renewal of warmth after a long separation. At the moment of reunion, all the waiting and longing turned into one sentence: You have lost weight! At this moment, I cried along with the protagonists! The article fills in all the confusion in the play: Fang Xiaobao was treated, cared for, and taught martial arts by Lao Xie when he was a child, so he was a very well-educated, diligent and discerning child! Even if you don't like the character in the play, you won't hate him! (I have been promised by Lao Xie since I was a child: treat him with my heart, listen to his words, and don't make him angry or do anything with him) Qiao Wanyuan is very unpleasant in the play, she is a contradictory person, her consciousness and behavior are very separated! Qiao Wanyan here is a real young hero. After realizing that her relationship with Xiaoyu was not suitable, she broke up decisively and concentrated on her career. She is beautiful and sassy! Later he became the master of "Wuwang Pavilion"! Di Feisheng, the martial arts idiot, maintains his aloof image as always. After losing his memory, he has become somewhat humorous, and his character image is richer and more delicate. The He family's Yun Tie was forged into two swords: Waiting and Cutting the Neck. The three of them, Jiao Liqiao and Xiao Tissue, who were plotting against the senior brother, gave Bicha to Xiaoyu, and they all ended badly! In the extra chapter, the master and his wife are all there, and the cats, dogs, and little parrots are also very cute! If you save Mingming and become a fairy, you can live for a long, long time~ In the article, the stories of supporting characters such as the scholar with no skills, Kongkong Miaoshou, Zhan Yunfei, the head of the He family, He Xiaofeng... Have also been fleshed out, with rich content and fuller characters. See you in the article for more specific details ~ [Love] [Eat Melon] [Love]

The character design is very good. I laughed out loud while reading the article. I don't think it's weird like other articles after adding a character. Lao Xie's portrayal is very vivid and there are no bugs in the plot. Xie Hua cb99!

He can respect Huahua and say that Huahua can choose whatever life he wants. He gives Huahua all the details and has all the antidotes ready. He does not require Huahua to detoxify. But if he wants to live, then detoxify him. If he doesn't want to, then don't force him and prepare a way out for him. It's great. Those who love Huahua naturally hope that Huahua will live a long life. But no one has ever asked Huahua. Basically, his relatives and friends are all gone. Does he want to live? Thank you very much for showing us a different Huahua who has a way out no matter what Huahua wants to choose.

A very excellent article. The author writes about the closed loop of time very well. Why the time traveler is willing to save the protagonist, why the protagonist believes in the time traveler, the time traveler's incompatible words and deeds, and the concepts are also many different. Learning internal strength, swordsmanship, and killing from scratch... Are all very logical. The plot consciousness is carefully selected to kidnap the time traveler. The time traveler mainly focuses on a rebellious character and is not close to the protagonist at all. The plot consciousness can only be restarted again and again to modify the encounter timing. Plot awareness: You two were not meant to be together, so you relied on me to use my energy to restart the world, and in the end I died. If the protagonist changes something, the plot will change accordingly, and the villain will also use other methods. In this life, the two of them finally got to know each other. Lao Xie really risked his life to save Hua Hua, but was obstructed and rejected by plot consciousness. Lao Xie went from a lively and cheerful abstract male to a talkative man, lost his energy and spirit, and turned into a zombie, with suppressed internal energy and weakened senses. It's really miserable and cruel. The plot consciousness still wants to kill the donkey, but Huahua's protagonist consciousness can snatch Lao Xie back, so that the two can fall in love and stay together. Lao Xie arranged everything he could think of, including a house, a fire bed, clothes and bedding, gold bars and broken silver, appropriate prescriptions and medicinal materials. He also asked Hall Master He to arrange for someone to guard the hut, and the warehouse also made the best mechanism. Even Fang Xiaobao gave instructions in advance. Although Huahua was still poisoned, she did not suffer the hardship of life at all. After the Battle of the East China Sea, when everyone betrayed, Huahua sent a "suicide note" to comfort Huahua, letting Huahua know that there was someone who had been working hard for her and loved her. There are dozens of "treasure maps" for Huahua to solve and open blind boxes, so there is no time to be depressed. Soon we will be accompanied by Lao Xie version 1.0. This Huahua is much more lively and cheerful than the Huahua in the original drama. The young Xiang Yi is also well described. Huahua is Lao Xie's anchor in this world. The two of them redeem each other, and they both care deeply about each other. There is no misunderstanding. Fang Xiaobao and A Fei knew the truth early on. The four of them got along well, and their style of painting was gradually led astray by Lao Xie. Many characters have been changed well, such as Miss Qiao and Fang Xiaobao, and the conflicts in the characters in the play have disappeared. The ending is happy, but the middle is still a bit tragic. Later, Lao Xie was seriously injured again, A Fei was still affected by Nan Yin's three evil spells, and Wu Yan, Pi Gongzi and others also died. Extra story, Lao Xie went on a business trip to the world of mountains and seas, rescued Xiao Qiushui and Xiao Mingming, killed the bad guys, and brought Xiao Mingming back as his son (newly kneaded child body) The author also wrote a side story, which is a short story called "Ancient Side Story". The new incarnation system of Tiandao consciousness sent Lao Xie to Xiangyi. When he was seven or eight years old, he worshiped a seriously injured master. Before his death, the master asked Tianji Villa to send Lao Xie to Yunyin Mountain to learn and grow with Xiangyi.

Only then did I realize that I didn't get a score🤡🤡 The writing style is smooth and humorous, and the logic is strong. The author blends Internet memes seamlessly and is just right to be funny. The most important thing is that after the article was finished, I wrote a separate extra chapter of tens of thousands of words, which moved me so much😭😭🥹🥹I will rank this article in the top three of Tomato's Lotus House Two Men🤧🤧🤧

(Stay after reading the first 88 chapters) Although love is unconditional and unreasonable, there are always some people in the world who do not believe in love without reason, and expect and fantasize about fate. Therefore, the Möbius strip appeared in literary works for the first time, and the fate entangled by fate was exposed to the light of day. From then on fate was diagnosed as one of the causes of love. At first, I only thought this book was an ordinary daily farming or funny article. I saw some traces of reincarnation and fate hidden in the introduction, but I didn't take it to heart. Now I finally got my retribution. Before I finished reading the second volume, I burst into tears and my vision was blurred. As the book says, Xiao Xie lacks love and devotion, and is extremely thirsty for warmth. In order to protect this warmth, he can give everything. Even if he grows up in a deformed environment, he can still love openly and deeply. I once classified this as the "debt repayment" behavior of East Asians, where everything including feelings is clearly marked with a price, and then it takes a lifetime to repay it. But now it seems that this view may be biased. This is not repayment, this is love, and it is willing love. The Möbius strip is to displace two unentangled parallel lines into planes, and then entangle the two planes into a loop with no visible starting point or end point. After hundreds of trials and errors, they finally formed such a loop - a loop where they will eventually meet again no matter where they start. They also cannot accept the consequences of losing each other, otherwise the ring will collapse. How could anyone not be able to live without another person? But love is so unreasonable, and fate can only be the cause of the disease. What happens after that can no longer be controlled by so-called fate. No matter how you don't believe in unconditional love, you will always firmly believe that love is so irrational. Huahua loves Xiao Xie, so she cannot calmly accept a world where he is everywhere but without him; Xiao Xie loves Huahua, so she cannot watch Huahua suffer from the nightmare of the past and the catastrophe that cannot be overcome. Destiny's self-righteousness makes them entangled, and they will eventually pay for their arrogance. Like compromising with love.

The mark (can be read again) is long and sweet, and the logic is self-consistent. It tells the story of an ordinary male who has no golden fingers in time and space. If he infiltrates into the protagonist group, he finally wins the beauty. The crazy loyal dog and the fishing beauty are really a perfect match!

It's a great article. The logic is smooth and the relationship develops smoothly. It's really a relationship that builds up little by little. There is no sudden warming of the relationship. It seems that I am a bystander. I was secretly talking about CP in the front. I was shocked when they got together. What happened at the corner of my mouth The whole process was not suppressed, and the tears never dried. The two people cultivated each other's companionship and merged into each other's flesh and blood. The relationship was very sincere. The writing was very good. Two people falling in love is two men falling in love. There are not many double-male protagonists who have the problem of changing one person's gender without feeling inconsistent. Lao Xie was abstract and smart, knew his goal and tried his best. Huahua Xinzi, who had always been loved firmly by others, was still with Xiangyi, and he really made it possible for both Xiangyi and Huahua to be together. Qiao Wanchan's character is very well-shaped. She will be entangled and depressed but she makes decisions quickly and neatly. Even if she is sad later, she will not regret it. She can stick to her own bottom line and principles. She is the best Qiao Wanchan I have ever seen.

Reunion after a long absence, closed loop of time and space, so well written! Huahua has someone who knows her well, and with Xiaoxie's company and early planning, Huahua doesn't suffer too much, which is great! Huahua must live a long life

It's very beautiful. The two characters are well written. They run in both directions. It's both tearful and funny. But I know the ending is good and it's not particularly sad. The author updates steadily. It's obvious that he is a very lively and talkative author. I felt warm in my heart after reading this book [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Nice! ! ! The early stage of abstract sand sculpture and the later stage of sadism. However, You Xie's mouth is still very happy overall, even Lao Di (unburdened amnesia version) is led astray. The closed loop was successful, and it was obvious that a lot of brain cells were wasted. In addition, for book friends who read book reviews before reading the book: Dada originally took the non-CP friendship line (conjugating "father and son"-like bad friends), but ended up letting himself go and writing about the two of them together (I liked it very much, hehe), thank you. The key is that the early interactions were very loving [shy], and both cb and cp were suitable. Later on, I gradually felt that the friendship began to sublimate - one step away from being a lover. So I was very enthusiastic in the beginning, but later I found out that it was love and I accepted it smoothly (this sentence is not about me, I just read the copy before entering.) Also! There is an ancient side story in the big column, which is a parallel world side story of this article. Don't miss it (I almost missed it [I almost cried], but luckily I flipped through it)

It's very beautiful. I recommend it. Go watch it. Lao Xie raised Huahua very well. Huahua had endless money and several warehouses of medicine, and both of them had long mouths. Xiaobao was more likable than the medicine in the drama, and he accepted the truth very smoothly. The abstract man is unpredictable, has many jokes, and the story development is very reasonable. Anyway, look, look, look

A straight male college student who is an abstract academic master grows up happily and sweetly in the Lotus Building. It does not completely follow the original plot, but has a plot that spans time and space. In the end, he and Li Lianhua reach a happy ending of a strong husband and a wife. There is also a linkage to the mountains and seas in the extra chapter. After a while, it still looked good, and I couldn't stop laughing while watching it.

This book is really good. I really like it. The author's writing is really interesting. (Sure enough, people around me felt they were ambiguous when they read the two.) (While reading, I always felt that the two were sending love tokens to each other.)

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh this book is so beautiful! ! ! It's considered one of my top ones [almost crying] Xiao Xie is really good at loving people. He and Hua Hua went in both directions. It knocked me to death. It really made me feel sincere love and respect, I really like it! There are so many things I want to say, and I have been fascinated by their cuteness all the way. They are all good children. Fortunately, everything will be smooth in the future, and I will definitely be happy forever! It's hard to understand why the data in this article is so poor... Even though I don't like abstractions, I fell in love with it. Love and care are written between the lines.

I went to read this. It's a masterpiece. It's so beautiful. It's the first time I'm so obsessed with fan fiction. Boss, write it for me. Readers are like babies waiting to be fed, waiting for your care. Hey.

It's quite interesting. We travel to different time periods and what you thought was your first acquaintance is actually a long-standing acquaintance. This setting is quite novel.

After watching it, I felt that they were a BE couple if they were not together. They went in both directions. It felt so natural. I even cried while watching it. At the end, I thought it was great that they were together [Love]

A very subtle angle and a very cute writing style. It can be said that geniuses love abstraction. Well, this book is genius! Very nice

How come such a beautiful Lotus Tower fanfic has such a low rating? Although the rating of 7.1 Is not very low, it is not worthy of the beauty of this article. Not to mention that it also comes with a super short but super beautiful "Going to Mountains and Seas" fanfic at the end.

Look, it's so funny

Big cheers for the author, the writing is super nice^ω^

It's very interesting, the logic is clear, and the writing is so good (tears), come and have a look!

It's beautiful. It's great. (The illiterate person can't think of words) Woohoo😭[face covering][eating melon][laughing]

The logic of the plot is super reasonable, more reasonable than many writings. I really need to give it five stars. The time loop is really exciting! The follow-up episode is Going to the Mountains and Seas. It's really good. I've written all the things I like. Xiao Xie is really good at taking care of people. You deserve to have a partner. When you meet this kind of person, you will really get extra points. Don't miss this book. It's really good.