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A New Fanfic That Really Brings Out the Content of Naruto and Has Excellent Writing Style ~
Is there any new Naruto fanfic on Tomato that has novel, strange, surprising content, smooth writing and connotative content? If the number of words is less than 30w, please avoid it~Please give me some advice~
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Looking for High-Quality Naruto Stories
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Looking for High-Quality Naruto Fanfic, Thank You.
Personally, I like Tsunade and Hinata.
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The rhythm is pretty good. There are so few Naruto fanfics out there. First give me a five-star review to encourage you. Come on
Ranked among the top three Naruto fanfics I've read! ! ! The author is very skilled. He does not blindly follow the original work like many fans. He generally follows the main line while having his own ideas. Many plot innovations such as the Land of Waves and Orochimaru's Konoha Collapse Plan are very good innovations. He does not blindly follow the plot. Then there is the protagonist's system, which is unconventional. It does not blindly give the protagonist various original abilities like many fans, such as Sharingan, Byakugan, Eight Gates and so on. Instead, it breaks out of its own system, uses the second-generation template very well, and writes its own style. Finally, there are no messy emotional lines. Many authors of Naruto fanfics are addicted to food. They don't have Jin Yong's ability and want to write Wei Xiaobao. It's almost impossible to see. The author's writing is very good. There is no woman in his heart, and he is a natural god with swords drawn. Although I don't know if the author is good at describing the emotional lines, but so far, it seems that he has been very successful in avoiding the emotional lines and writing a character like Tobirama Senju. To sum up, this book is undoubtedly a masterpiece and highly recommended! ! !
It's weird, abstract, and interesting. I only watch Naruto and don't play Naruto. Naruto memes are very popular. This book combines the unique abstraction of Naruto players. It is a very interesting Naruto fanfic. It is not too boring to read so far.
Very pretty The protagonist looks like Tobirama, Tobirama's template, Tobirama's Flying Thunder God and all kinds of forbidden arts, Yin seal + strange power + Chattanla + infinite Flying Thunder God + Palm Immortal Technique, the protagonist of the underworld mechanism [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile]
I hope Sakura can become a passerby and not have so many plots Because Sakura's character is too bad
Recommended Overall, the flaws are not hidden, it's wonderful, and I'm currently at the end of the game when Gaara is taken away and dies. First of all, the protagonist, a civilian, was judged by the system to be like Tobirama, and then he had various skills, which was the growth part. Then he grew up, and was in the same class as Naruto and the others, and formed Class 7 with Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke. Beware of spoilers below Hand-killing Zabuza, based on this achievement, he got the opportunity to study the forbidden book, and he could use Flying Thunder God on the surface. Participated in the chunin exam, used water escape to make other ninjas look like they peed their pants and eliminated a group. He rescued Xiang Ling from Kusakure Village and brought him back to Konoha. Xiang Ling came under the protagonist's command and destroyed four six-path puppets. He used hydrogen escape to vaporize Obito twice in ten minutes. Together with Metkai, he fought against the first and second generation Hokage. Jiraiya came back to fight against Kakuzu. After sealing the first and second generation, he channeled Bunta under the care of Jiraiya. He pretended to be the second generation to trick Tsunade but was soon discovered. He directly flew to Raijin + killed Kabuto with great force. The first or second generation Hokage was reincarnated as a teacher, obtained the formula of Tobirama Senjutsu auxiliary medicine, learned the Yin seal from Tsunade, and negotiated with the Raikage Eight-Tails as an envoy. Other Daimyos of the Land of Fire followed suit, practicing senjutsu and trying to use the yin seal to store senjutsu. Come back and fight Nagato Obito. Anyway, it's okay. Keep your body and pray that the author comes back.
I want to see Death Er meet [smile]
Man, What can I say, I can only say that it looks good, and it's not that the Flying Thunder God is also a ghost, eating operations, eating awareness, eating backhand, eating reaction, eating information, eating judgment, eating without back, eating physical strength, eating coordination, such a thing in the world can be said to be in the underworld, I will do it with my own hands... [Laughter] [laughter] [laughter]
The plot is relatively smooth and the characterization is pretty good. There is no deliberate fraternity or indecisiveness about the characters in the original plot, and the killing of hostile forces is decisive but not abrupt. (I have a small suggestion: kill Orochimaru, after all, the third generation created by the author is not bad)
Although the title is a reference to mobile games, novels with mobile games are generally not well written. But this book is uncharacteristically written in a very realistic and delicate way. There are many points worthy of praise. The settings are also very rigorous.
The author did not follow the trend of writing conspiracy theories, which are more popular, but chose to write his own thoughts. From this point, it can be seen that the author truly loves Naruto and does not follow the trend.
The third generation of this book is very well written.
It's a very nice Naruto fanfic. I must keep writing. Ignore those anthropomorphic **s. What you write is really good. Come on, come on, I'm just waiting for the update to eat [love] [love] [love]
The anchor shouldn't forget his roots, right? For now, keep this pace and write slowly. 8.1 Points guaranteed, the upper and lower limits are quite high hiahiahia
It's good to watch😋. When I first started watching it, I kept watching the protagonist wandering around as a chuunin. I didn't think it was good to watch. I didn't expect that it would become a movie level later on, and it might become a movie if it grows up a little. The plot is not too bad.
Yes, the whole process is non-toxic. This point has surpassed most novels. It is worth reading. The plot insertion is not too boring, the strength is well grasped, and the combat power is not overwhelming. In summary, it's a Naruto fan fiction worth reading.
This is the most comfortable Naruto fanfic I've ever watched. There are cheats, but it's not particularly strong. It's a quick conspiracy theory that doesn't cause trouble, and the main character has a high emotional intelligence, can talk, and has a sense of humor. Except for Tsunade's part, everything else is handled very well. The main character is also constantly training to become stronger.
One of the few Naruto fanfics that you can read with your mind and feel comfortable. The writing style is delicate and interesting. No one can tell you a good book, only you can understand it by reading it yourself. Finally, the author will update it soon [angry]
Can Ino be made the heroine?
Praise and support the author.
Okay, good, good
Good luck to the author
I have an idea to let the protagonist Izuna reincarnate to fight Uchiha Madara [laughs]
Judging from the current development, I can give it four and a half stars (maybe up to five stars) The author wrote it with the brains of Tomato (although the description of the three generations is a bit exaggerated in my opinion) The other characters are okay, not particularly flat or stereotyped. I hope that I can continue to maintain or improve my creative level in the future (don't fall down)
Not bad, but it's a pity that I saw it too early. If I watch it after it's finished, I'll be really happy
The writing is very good. Although there are flaws in working as a nanny during the Chunin Exam, the flaws are not hidden. We can look forward to a wave of food and grass.
The subject matter that can kill two people is very good, and the advantages of the written plot also cover up the slight flaws. Come on
Nice looking and rhythmic. , The protagonist has his own consciousness and his own unique thoughts and personality charm. [Like] It can be said to be a masterpiece of Naruto
The writing is quite good. Is the heroine a phosphorus?
It seems that I couldn't shed my tears back then [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]