Feel-good power fantasy + female protagonist + semi-crew-following mode + not mindless wish fulfillment + hidden mastermind
He is the absurd figure on the Marines' wanted posters with the codename “Calamity Child God,” yet a bounty of only 50 Berries, dead or alive.
In Whitebeard's eyes, he is “a monster brat who can make me go all out”; to Kuzan, he is “the number one headache at Marine Headquarters.”
His usual routine: drink AD Calcium Milk, snack on sunflower seeds, ride a divine dragon, and watch the show while making sarcastic comments. When the mood strikes, he might clear the area with Conqueror's Haki or casually save a soul that was supposed to pass on, such as the Going Merry's spirit.
The Straw Hat Pirates' “mastermind behind the scenes”
On the surface, he is the crew's pampered little brother; in reality, he is their ultimate safety net.
As he watches his companions fight with fiery passion, he leisurely offers his critiques from the sidelines: “Luffy's Gear Second is wearing him out. We need to find a way to help him recover. Zoro's sense of direction is hopeless, but his swordsmanship can still be refined...”
He secretly steps in at critical moments: quietly protects Robin at Enies Lobby, scares Moria off with a single sentence at Thriller Bark, and effortlessly breaks a deadlock with a “tournament.” His presence makes the Straw Hat Pirates' adventures a little less tragic, a little more carefree, and... a lot funnier.
At his side is Ao Kong, an Eastern divine dragon who loves orange juice, calls himself “this dragon,” possesses unfathomable strength, and yet is always slacking off.
The items in the System shop are an incredible assortment, from Great Grade Swords to compound slingshots, from Rejuvenation Pills to Human Emperor Banners. Su Rui can always produce the most unexpected “gift” or “solution.”
Witness the Going Merry burn? He secretly uses the Human Emperor Banner to collect its spirit, waiting for the right moment for it to be reborn aboard the new ship, the Thousand Sunny.
Can't stand seeing his companions suffer? He kills the Invisible Man ahead of time, protecting the peace of Big Sis Robin.
It's okay to read fan fiction for fun. It's much better than those stories about Luffy's deputy captain who can actually be a dog. If you must develop step by step according to the timeline, just read the comics and anime! It feels a bit like Pirates fan fiction from the past. Great support for the author [plus one on the bookshelf][already planted]
The pacing is a bit messy, there are no characters, and the plot is not connected at all. I was fighting with others just now. When I was fighting with one of my own, Nami held down the enemy, and the enemy was gone. [What]
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It's okay, but the protagonist's sense of presence is indeed a bit low. He has a lot of strength that can't be used. It's better to lower the strength from the beginning, fight together, take risks together, and then make up for the regrets. That's actually fine. It's not like being a babysitter all the time.
How to say it! I was given invincibility but suppressed and didn't use it. Then you might as well eat the whole fruit and throw away the system, so that you can still play slowly. What you are doing is really messy. There is also a one-eyed man inside!!!! How come Zoro has one eye before he even reaches Shampoo Land?
The pressure is so fierce! Then don't make such a big mistake! A maxed-out physique is like useless
Hiding one's strength is greedy for life and fear of death, and the more you look at it, the more awkward it becomes. Isn't the purpose of fan fiction just to show off and have fun, and there's no point in hiding it.
One pendant.
Wait a minute and yell. I just arrived at the first workshop and everyone needs to revise and relax.
The author writes well, keep up the good work💪