Instead of Being a Champion, You Have Become a Gangster Godfather?

The author describes it very well, with a clear mind and pragmatic style The only thing is that it's too hasty. Kyuubi gave it too early but the plot was too rushed. As a result, Gengar, a potential champion who fell from the sky, had to be added. Very nice. I would like to interrupt and ask which version of the game the author is playing, whether it is an official work or a fan work. I have played the fan's Ultimate Emerald. The Rainbow Rockets inside are even more oppressive Red Flame Pine Water, Shui Wutong, Kuiqisi, Shinji, Ayin, Akari, Vladali, Zaobo And all their cadres, as well as their members Rainbow Rockets are really scary.

The writing is very close to reality. It would be better if a few legitimate daughters from the Junsha family or the Joy family could be recruited as helpers. The writing is very good, but the traffic is not very good. You should find some women from big families. Eating some soft food is also a shortcut to improve your strength.

It's pretty good. It needs to be slower. It would be better to improve the writing style. There are a lot of repeated words. Come on.

At present, the biggest problem seems to be the turn-based combat system, which does not have a strong sense of fighting and dynamics, and can be fatal with just one blow. We hope to improve the diversity of combat, increase the integration of skills, and diversify the overall game.

Very nice and in line with my opinion

Author, your writing is great, keep up the good work The author of the Pokémon series is well-deserved among the top three (in fact, I think it is the first). The plot is very novel, not cliche at all, and the writing is also great.

Very well written, keep it up.

It's a good book. I hope the author will keep writing.

What time will it be updated? The plot should be as exciting as possible. The heroines can also come out. The last few chapters have been weird, the protagonist has a spiritual seed planted in his head and is controlled by his life and death. This thing is repeated in the new chapter, and the battles before and after are not well connected and abrupt. No, has the author changed?

Does the author also play Spanish Rockets? The plot is somewhat similar to that of Spanish Rockets.