The Villain in the Book: I Became the Heroine's Bai Yueguang

Brother, just one more chapter. I'm dying. Please. Brother, just one more chapter. I'll never touch it again. Please. Brother, really, just one chapter. I swear I'll never touch this thing again. I really can't stand it anymore. Brother, I'm tossing and turning now. Brother, I'm begging you. Just one more chapter. Brother, please add one more chapter. I'm about to die. Please, brother. I feel like there are ants on me. Climbing, I feel like my whole body is shaking and I can't breathe. Please, bro, just update, just one more chapter. I won't touch it again. Please, bro, really, just one chapter. I swear I will never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it anymore. I can't sleep now. I beg you, bro. Just one more chapter. I can't do it anymore. Please, bro, I can't stand it. I feel like there are ants crawling on my body. I really can't bear it anymore. I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep. Brother, please update another chapter! ! ! 😭

It's well written, and there's nothing wrong with it except for the slightly poor processing of some logical details and the Riddler. You can get it to around 9.3 On Tomato, let's see how the follow-up goes.

The writing is a bit good, but maybe the AI ​​embellishes it too much and is not coherent enough. Words that are too gorgeous are not good either, so the novel must have a novel style.

Damn, this book is very descriptive of my heart, and the emotions are written very delicately. After reading it, I didn't even feel tired at work.

Come on author, the writing is good, don't interrupt or eunuch [sending heartfelt wishes]

It looks good, I love watching it, I like watching it, come on, author [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Looks good, I hope you don't become a eunuch

The story is exciting, keep it up and look forward to it

Yes, it's best for the protagonist not to use a sword

A very good book

It's okay, I personally think it's pretty good-looking, but there aren't many people around [eating melon]

The plot is good, I hope you don't become a eunuch, come on

To put it nicely, the writing style is delicate, and to put it poorly, it is wordy and the number of words is low. But I am still very optimistic about this work and give you 5⭐ I hope the author can work hard

It's good-looking, I won't say much else, just be brave and resourceful, and there isn't much to complain about. Leaving aside the previous chapters, at least it's okay to see this.

The author writes well, please confirm the relationship quickly

It looks good, I'm looking forward to the next one

It's beautiful, I love watching it, I watch it every day Very well written, a bit like the style of a great god

Okay, the plot is relaxed enough

So far it's pretty good

Very well written, looking forward to the follow-up

This kind of book really cannot be buried

You can still watch it. It's considered a newcomer's work.

Except for the strange development of the previous relationship Everything else is very good

Okay, family members can watch it. The main thing is authentic [eating melon]

It's still pretty good. Come on, the author is great.

The description is quite detailed and the logic is online.

I really like this kind of group portrait. It's mainly the main point of view of the protagonist. It feels like an anime.

The rhythm is quite tight, there are no bugs, and the writing is quite smooth.

The logic and emotions are relatively smooth and not too abrupt. The writing style is delicate and not bad. The story is well written, and it can be seen that suspense reasoning is used as the driving force of the main plot. Although the first volume is not as good as Lao Qian, the story has Qian Yanqiu's style. The first story of the second volume is more like Lu Xiaofeng. The twins' conspiracy is not foreshadowed and is rather abrupt, but it is innocuous.

Good looking, fluent and logical writing