When I woke up, I traveled to the continent of Teyvat and became the Water Demon Goddess Funina!
Faced with the crisis in Fontaine, the expectations of the people, and the burden of "playing god", how should I, the fake water god, deal with it?
It is necessary to maintain an elegant image while secretly solving the predicted disaster - this gorgeous drama must not be misplayed!
But... Are there really that many time-travelers in the world?
Reader comments
After reading it, it's not bad. There are a few elements to mention:
① I don't think there is anything OCC about the characters in this novel, that is, they are out of character. It is true that according to the game plot and ordinary people's thinking logic, many game characters are seriously OCC, but this is what is unexpected. However, if you want to react, you have to read sixty or seventy chapters, but readers cannot read for so long. Naturally, the whole process is OCC
②This novel is more like one of the endings that Fukalos might have had if the travelers had not appeared, if the outsiders had not appeared, like an if line
③Assuming that the novel ends in more than seventy chapters, then ① and ② are true
This book is different from ordinary novels: generally speaking, readers need some exciting points in the text to support them when reading. The most classic one is to show off and slap in the face. But this book, at least the first dozen chapters, describes the panic and powerlessness of an ordinary person turning into Funina, which is not very satisfying. It is true that the behavior of ordinary people is roughly the same, and the description is very real, but readers usually do not buy it because it is boring.
That's fine if the author is completely immersed in his art, but if you want to get more readers, it's better to optimize. [Praise]
I have long wanted to read a book about One Hundred Years of Solitude. Although it was less than a hundred years ago, it was still a few years ago. The only person I could talk to in the tension all day long was myself. I couldn't take off the role. What I wanted to read was this mouth.
In my opinion, the title of the novel is more about attracting readers' attention.
The work is written about Funina's every day in it,
Let me see Fu Nina's loneliness every day...
I don't know how to describe it with my knowledge and literary talent, but I summed it up in three words
Very nice
Nice. As someone said in the comment area, this book is more like the if line of the traveler who did not come. Although the servant character is not quite right, the author's writing is still good, and there are remedies later, which can be regarded as some explanation. Well, it's quite frustrating anyway. If you don't like original characters appearing, read this one.
The writing style is much better than other fics, and it allows people to get involved in the story.
The possibility of destiny shines brightly in your writing
This book is a bit messy in the early stages, but it's still okay, and the subsequent plot is very interesting and exciting.
A very good second creation, jumping out of the original plot area, and extending it into a very good work
Very nice! The characters are described in detail and the plot is closely linked.
It's really well written
Looks good! Come on!
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
The book is good to read... But author, have you really passed the plot of Fontainebleau?
It's okay, is this a parallel universe? I don't know, I'll explain it later.
It's so beautiful, why did I only see it now?
This is very beautiful, even better than I expected. Come on!
After reading it, it's not bad. There are a few elements to mention: ① I don't think there is anything OCC about the characters in this novel, that is, they are out of character. It is true that according to the game plot and ordinary people's thinking logic, many game characters are seriously OCC, but this is what is unexpected. However, if you want to react, you have to read sixty or seventy chapters, but readers cannot read for so long. Naturally, the whole process is OCC ②This novel is more like one of the endings that Fukalos might have had if the travelers had not appeared, if the outsiders had not appeared, like an if line ③Assuming that the novel ends in more than seventy chapters, then ① and ② are true
This book is different from ordinary novels: generally speaking, readers need some exciting points in the text to support them when reading. The most classic one is to show off and slap in the face. But this book, at least the first dozen chapters, describes the panic and powerlessness of an ordinary person turning into Funina, which is not very satisfying. It is true that the behavior of ordinary people is roughly the same, and the description is very real, but readers usually do not buy it because it is boring. That's fine if the author is completely immersed in his art, but if you want to get more readers, it's better to optimize. [Praise]
I have long wanted to read a book about One Hundred Years of Solitude. Although it was less than a hundred years ago, it was still a few years ago. The only person I could talk to in the tension all day long was myself. I couldn't take off the role. What I wanted to read was this mouth.
In my opinion, the title of the novel is more about attracting readers' attention. The work is written about Funina's every day in it, Let me see Fu Nina's loneliness every day... I don't know how to describe it with my knowledge and literary talent, but I summed it up in three words Very nice
Nice. As someone said in the comment area, this book is more like the if line of the traveler who did not come. Although the servant character is not quite right, the author's writing is still good, and there are remedies later, which can be regarded as some explanation. Well, it's quite frustrating anyway. If you don't like original characters appearing, read this one.
The writing style is much better than other fics, and it allows people to get involved in the story.
The possibility of destiny shines brightly in your writing
This book is a bit messy in the early stages, but it's still okay, and the subsequent plot is very interesting and exciting.
"Good-looking, cracked wall recommended" [love][love][love]
It's different from what I thought at first.
Very pretty, I like Fu Nina like this
A very good second creation, jumping out of the original plot area, and extending it into a very good work
Very nice! The characters are described in detail and the plot is closely linked.
It's really well written
Looks good! Come on!
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
The book is good to read... But author, have you really passed the plot of Fontainebleau? It's okay, is this a parallel universe? I don't know, I'll explain it later.
It's so beautiful, why did I only see it now?
This is very beautiful, even better than I expected. Come on!
Have you changed the settings? [Think]