I Transmigrated into the Genshin Impact World and Became Furina?

After reading it, it's not bad. There are a few elements to mention: ① I don't think there is anything OCC about the characters in this novel, that is, they are out of character. It is true that according to the game plot and ordinary people's thinking logic, many game characters are seriously OCC, but this is what is unexpected. However, if you want to react, you have to read sixty or seventy chapters, but readers cannot read for so long. Naturally, the whole process is OCC ②This novel is more like one of the endings that Fukalos might have had if the travelers had not appeared, if the outsiders had not appeared, like an if line ③Assuming that the novel ends in more than seventy chapters, then ① and ② are true

This book is different from ordinary novels: generally speaking, readers need some exciting points in the text to support them when reading. The most classic one is to show off and slap in the face. But this book, at least the first dozen chapters, describes the panic and powerlessness of an ordinary person turning into Funina, which is not very satisfying. It is true that the behavior of ordinary people is roughly the same, and the description is very real, but readers usually do not buy it because it is boring. That's fine if the author is completely immersed in his art, but if you want to get more readers, it's better to optimize. 👍

I have long wanted to read a book about One Hundred Years of Solitude. Although it was less than a hundred years ago, it was still a few years ago. The only person I could talk to in the tension all day long was myself. I couldn't take off the role. What I wanted to read was this mouth.

In my opinion, the title of the novel is more about attracting readers' attention. The work is written about Funina's every day in it, Let me see Fu Nina's loneliness every day... I don't know how to describe it with my knowledge and literary talent, but I summed it up in three words Very nice

Nice. As someone said in the comment area, this book is more like the if line of the traveler who did not come. Although the servant character is not quite right, the author's writing is still good, and there are remedies later, which can be regarded as some explanation. Well, it's quite frustrating anyway. If you don't like original characters appearing, read this one.

The writing style is much better than other fics, and it allows people to get involved in the story.

This book is a bit messy in the early stages, but it's still okay, and the subsequent plot is very interesting and exciting.

The possibility of destiny shines brightly in your writing

Very pretty, I like Fu Nina like this

Very nice! The characters are described in detail and the plot is closely linked.