Transformation Adds Points! from Fat and Round to Perfect Heroine

A good Wenzhao Gong artist route. The protagonist is a high school student and then embarks on the road to conquer the only world. She knows a little bit of everything, of course just a little bit, but this is even better than Lin Yuan Xianyu next door. Wow hahaha

Yes, I have seen something similar to this a few years ago, but I rarely see a gender-changing version. This can be regarded as a major selling point of this book. I personally hope to be single and can accept ambiguous feelings, but I hope the ending will be single.

The article is well written, but is the pace a little too fast? The plot connection is relatively smooth. I suggest a single main plot, with career as the main focus, and Lily as a secondary plot, or a side story, whether to marry or not (after all, the author himself said not to marry)

Come on, it feels good, there aren't too many loopholes. I feel like you didn't explain the attributes well. Then try to shoot as few short plays as possible and write more songs, novels, etc. Don't even shoot short plays. Take some shots. Others

I gave it four stars instead of five, mainly because I have only read a dozen chapters. The author's writing style is so good, even though the plot is cliche, including transformation, rebirth, copying the work, and copying the song. . . But this force is very strong! I have a feeling that I will definitely be able to give it five stars in the future! Okay, I've finished reading it, it's a very good story about rebirth and transformation, changed to five stars. However, there are still some shortcomings. According to the current progress, the protagonist has already integrated singing, writing online articles, and directing. Oh, and the vest of the otherworldly version of the milk tea sister has been exposed. Maybe there will be performances and other vests in the future. Online writing is time-consuming. Well, the author understands this better than me. A person's energy is limited. Even if energy is not a problem under the influence of the system, the time is also limited. After all, there are only 24 hours in a day. Writing web articles can be weakened or simply abandoned in subsequent character design. Singing, directing, acting, and poetry are basically enough.

I think it's great that the author uses wonderful descriptions to create impressions on readers in various pretentious places such as music learning that are difficult to describe in words. I would like to recommend this book for this reason. The development of the entire story line was poorly planned. It gave me a feeling that I knew what was going to happen next, but was eagerly and even anxiously waiting for the expected results. After the arrival, new needs appeared that made me anxious. The whole film looked very tired and uncomfortable. On the one hand, I hope the author adjusts this writing style. On the other hand, I recommend readers who read it for the first time to read it. After all, you can't guess what will happen next, so you won't be anxious.

Why was it suddenly taken off the shelves? The author's book didn't involve anything sensitive, right? And there's nothing wrong with sensitive comments!

It's not bad, but the author's choice to start with a fat heroine is a bit bold. Nowadays, most of Tomato's mainstream transformation stories start off with an attractive appearance, so not many people read it, which is probably partly due to this. However, looking back, the writing is still pretty good, and there is nothing cliché about it.

Shooting a video to participate in the show really feels unnecessary and not fun enough! I accidentally remembered a novel about women wearing clothes from a few years ago. I forgot the title. The background seems to be in the United States in the 1960s and 1970s. The protagonist writes books and accumulates capital. After that, he becomes a god in scientific research (capital), hangs out with various young ladies, and stages the simple and corrupt capital of the United States. Capitalist life, the business war inside, is even more unpretentious. If you dare to cheat me, well, then my C4 is not at a disadvantage. My security team is hungry and thirsty, and will retaliate when it comes. All kinds of black technologies will be used to dominate the United States. One word is cool, and the combat power is overwhelming.

It looks good, the pace is fast, there is nothing wrong with it, but some areas need improvement. Good cheers, author [sending my heart][sending my heart]

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I really like the subject matter. The wording is not fancy, but it's more about daily light-hearted writing, and there are cries between girls, especially the two untitled chapters that make me laugh like an aunt. It's a pity that there is no similar plot of cries later.

The author has no longer traveled back in time. Now re-recruit volunteers for rebirth, choose any one of the systems: the divine system, the academic system, the heartthrob system, the entry and gossip system, the dog-licking system, the cow-horse system, the stall system, the outrageous system, etc.

So far, it is a very qualified and refreshing novel. The only drawback is that the description of the relationship with women is a little out of touch. As a reader, I think the "half-hundred" content these authors refer to can be reduced to an appropriate amount, which serves no purpose other than exaggerated humor.

Yes, old bookworms can read it and recommend it!

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The writing is very detailed and realistic, the characters are very special and the plot is very thoughtful. However, I can't understand the technology behind it. I am so uneducated that it makes my head beat [crying with laughter] [crying with laughter] [crying with laughter]

It looks good, but it's just too little, of course for me. As for whether it looks good to others, I don't know.

It's so urgent... There are too many branch lines... It makes me feel anxious.

You can allocate experience cards to subjects, be evaluated as an academician in the future, wear academician uniforms and issue graduation certificates to students on the stage, and you will be up to your standards in a moment.

It's good-looking, maybe because not many people have discovered the new book. I'll stock up for a while first, I hope it doesn't become too much later! ! ! You can change your marriage or become single [Send Heart]

The rhythm is very good ah ah ah ah ah ah ah

It's okay. After my career is over, I can write a couple's story at the end. It's too rare now. I'll give it four stars.

It's quite interesting, but I'm not interested in the recent werewolf killings.

Come on, it looks great. And hurry up and get rid of that rich second generation. I feel annoyed and look uncomfortable [laughing awkwardly][laughing awkwardly][laughing awkwardly]

I don't know what you think, but I love reading it anyway, but the updates are a bit slow. I hope they can be faster, maybe twice a day.

It looks good, I have to look good

The author gave me full marks and I really enjoyed reading it.

It's to my liking, the plot is compact, and there's nothing toxic about it so far

It's nice to read, but the time arrangement in the book is too tight. I feel like it would be better to spread out the time a little bit.