Zhenhun Street: I Work from Nine to Five in the Spiritual Realm

So far, it's pretty good. My suggestion is to get more involved with the original characters and get into the main plot of the original. The most important thing! With more scenes and descriptions of guardian spirits, the body of the God of War must be as powerful as the body of the God of War, and like the three Cao, Sun, and Liu in the original work, they must use multiple guardian spirits in battle. You can also add some emotional scenes and use animation modeling to attract some readers, such as Fan Tianyin. You can also write about Sun Zhantian, but you must also retain the character's character background.

It's not bad. It will be much better after finishing the previous Island of Dead Souls and returning to Zhenhun Street. @ `I hope the author will try not to have a female protagonist. Nowadays, many authors are not sure about the emotional drama, which has led to a decline in ratings, and the quality of the work has dropped too much. I hope the author is not absolutely sure, so he should try not to write emotional dramas with a female protagonist, and just develop his career honestly. I hope this book will be better. I will rate it at 9 o'clock as soon as possible [Sending Hearts]

The author has a certain understanding of the history of the Ming Dynasty, and the adaptation of the entire comic is within a reasonable range. It can be regarded as a rare masterpiece. So author, you must persevere [strike hard] [strike hard] [strike hard] [strike hard]

There is a little bit of writing about the protagonist in the early content. After Chapter 10, the plot of the protagonist begins to unfold. The plot design is okay, and overall it is good [Chigua]

It's wrapped, it looks pretty good.

Love to see, love to see, love to see

Not bad, it looks quite comfortable

Very good, add more guardian spirits

A good fanfic worth reading

After listening for a while, I was curious about how many guardian spirits [what]