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It's a lot like fanfiction, but not. The triggering point of view is different, but this book is really well written and is better than many fanfics. The character's personality is not rigidly adhered to the original work, which is quite interesting. However, the characters are no longer so stereotyped. Compared with the original work, this one is closer to us. There is a little more flexibility in the language and psychology of life, which is different from the simple and direct description of the original work. [Laugh][laugh][laugh]

It's really good-looking, but the author could change it a little bit in Chapter 335, because I feel that the sense of CP is no longer strong, but the sense of CP of Tang San and Xiao Wu will be stronger (I finally found a good-looking book, I really don't want to abandon the article, I beg [crying]) No, I said it's weird. Most likely a different teacher was used to write it later. The plot doesn't match up, the names have all changed, and the atmosphere among the people has also changed [sad][sad]

The author of The Moon and the Shy Flower, Like the Falling Fish and the Falling Goose, did you write such a beautiful work because you wanted to seduce a gentle, lovely, generous, handsome and beautiful little beauty like me? The storyline is layered upon layers, and the emotional details of the protagonist are very well described, and you must follow it to the end. [Adoration]

The plot is just right. It seems that the overall direction of the plot is the same as that of the original work, but it is a different kind of story. The protagonist is also very sweet. There is no awkward emotional drama arranged for them early because of Douluo Dalu's precocious maturity. I watched a six-year-old who confessed his love for Tang San before. I really can't stand that book.

If you like watching young couples, feel free to watch it.

The writing is nice, but can you give a preview of the changes in time? Otherwise, the first few chapters of Wangcai will still be Soul Sect, and the later chapters will jump directly to Soul Sage. Dai Mubai was injured in the competition and had to lie down for a month and jump directly to level 58. It's too fast [Petrochemical][Petrochemical]

It's not bad. I see that my relationship is developing a bit faster now^ω^. I feel that when I was still at Notting College, I felt as if the relationship had been confirmed. The talent is also very great, and it is not hidden at all. Personally, it is quite interesting to watch. If what I said is interesting to you, don't read it. The author is ヽ(*´з｀*)ﾉ I'm going, we're already together before we enter Shrek

Come on, author, your writing is good. You must keep writing and don't stop updating!

This novel is as smooth as flowing clouds and flowing water, and every word is exquisite, making people intoxicated and unable to extricate themselves.

Who gets the credit, who gets the credit?

I can't even lower the corners of my mouth when I see it.

The corners of my mouth are already shoulder to shoulder with the sun

Long live the two male protagonists, the author must make sure to update it to the end [Sending my heart]

Nice! (It's so beautiful that I don't know what it is. I don't know how to describe it anymore. I can only send you the most sincere words.)

It's really super good-looking, but I want to ask if Liu Erlong and Xiao Jiu are 4i [Love]

It's super good. You can tell by just reading my review of that book. It's just too short. I need to read it again.

The male protagonist is really cute

Like like like

Why did you stop updating?

It's better to lower your rating, or you'll be banned.

It's not like a fanfic, it just feels like part of it is from the original novel, and the rest is like a brand new novel

It's beautiful and so sweet. But can it be changed back to Tangsan?

Good looking

This is the best Douluo fanfic I have ever read, none of them [shy][shy]

It's beautiful, the story is clear and detailed, and then there's the special redemption

? ? ? Protagonist male or female Is the protagonist male or female?

Oh my god, so pretty

The plot is good, keep up the good work

I like it so much, I like it so much! ! !

Well~ Anyway, I enjoyed watching it♥(｡￫v￩｡)♥