Picking Your Feet************

It gradually changes at a glance, but the process is a bit slow. This slowness is not due to the slowness of the time span, but the reading fatigue caused by too many similar descriptions. A large number of similar exchanges, action descriptions, and thought descriptions will not highlight the pain and persistence of the protagonist. Instead, it will feel like it is emphasized for the sake of emphasis, and the purpose is too strong. In addition, the single perspective is one of the reasons for reading fatigue. And another result of the single perspective is the lack of conflict, which makes the plot seem flat with no ups and downs, other characters are not well portrayed, and too many questions are left. If you want to solve the questions and only use the protagonist's single perspective to narrate the story, it will be very slow, and the effect will not be as good as multiple parallel lines. But there are also merits. There are not many poisonous points in the plot. The main character is tortured, but there is a redeemer (Xiaoya) surrounding the protagonist, which relieves the sadistic mood to a great extent and allows some readers to accept the fact that the main character is tortured. And the angle of transformation is very new. I have only read one similar transformation novel, and I am worthy of recognition for my willingness to explore it (and the abuser in that book was even more cruel than yours. At least Xiaoya can always accompany the protagonist. The redeemer in that book only appears once in a long time, which is suffocating to read). Then there is the description. Although there are redundant issues, it is still very detailed. It can be seen that the author is writing seriously. Finally, Lai Jia, the above is just my own feeling. I don't expect resonance, I don't expect the author to listen to my opinions, and I don't accept refutation.

I really like reading about the process of transformation novels. The more detailed the descriptions, the better. This is the most interesting book I have read besides The Balance Plan [face covering]. It gives me a sense of transformation and transformation. Unfortunately, The Balance Plan has been discontinued. You have to persevere, author. You remind me of a science fiction novel I read when I was a student. It was a novel about space, parasitism by butterflies, and a detailed description of the incubation process. [Thinking], has anyone read it?

This is definitely the most shocking novel I have read recently. The author clearly describes the desperate process of how the protagonist is alienated, objectified, and disciplined. The pace of this novel is slow, and the protagonist's psychological description takes up most of the space. At the same time, the details are good. The protagonist's struggle with pride and dignity is the biggest highlight of this novel, which requires some patience to interpret and empathize. Although there are some minor flaws (for example, in the chapter of chocolate poisoning, the protagonist's memory of his wife's grape juice and garlic soup would have been more tragic if there were echoes in the early stage), but the flaws are not concealed, and it definitely deserves full marks. I recommend it to all book friends who like serious literature. PS: It's a pity that I can't see the version before the deletion. It's a pity [crying]

The plot could be enhanced. This gradual process is very interesting, and the characters are also very clear. The only shortcoming is the language skills. Some places are repetitive and confusing, which affects the senses. It can be regarded as a rare high-quality article. I hope the author will continue to work hard! [Please update]

The description is very detailed, and the changes in the mental process so far are quite reasonable and realistic. I hope that the specific background and macro purpose of this set of genetic engineering can be explained soon. After all, it is largely illegal. [Laughing evilly] Author, can you roughly explain whether this is a good ending or a bad ending. [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

If possible, it is still highly recommended to delete the setting that looks like Dilireba. This will make the reading feel much better and avoid a lot of unnecessary trouble.

It's very interesting. It's the first time I've read this kind of book. But the author has a little suggestion for you, that is, the cover. Otherwise, change it to something similar to the two-dimensional style. Your cover's AI drawing looks a bit awkward. [Eat melon]

It's well written and true, just like the real thing It's just that the update is too slow, one chapter a day, and the number of words in each chapter is 4,000 to 8,000. All in all, it's just one sentence, it's good to watch and I love it ദ്ദി(˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧ Author update soon [smile] The content has been greatly changed, Shen He's floating wood is gone If you have read it, start from Chapter 7

The rare subject matter coupled with the relatively high-quality writing made me unable to describe the reading experience for a while. That kind of indescribable depression and excitement, with a hint of familiar yet strange experience... Then I had an epiphany! I remember that feeling! The last time I had this feeling was when I was playing the plot mod called "The Trouble of the Dragonborn". The feeling of being extremely materialized and treated as a so-called "exquisite plaything", and the insignificant traces of emotion and resistance suppressed by a huge boulder, it was amazing. I had anticipated in advance what would happen next if the protagonist had to escape. In addition to the deception or deus ex machina, the protagonist could gain superpowers. But the author probably wrote it casually. The few chapters before and after the superpower were comparable to a bull's head and a horse's tail, and there was almost no transition in the middle. Just like the climb up a mountain before the superpower, there was a slow rise with transition and smoothness, and then to the superpower. In the end, it did not reach the top of the mountain and slowly descend as expected. Instead, what came into view after reaching the top of the mountain was a cliff and a vertical slide. I slid directly to the bottom of the cliff and then sprinted forward as if walking on flat ground. Compared with such a short transition and such a fast pace, the previous article can be said to have been written in another AI, and the description of zombies and supernatural powers was not as good as it was. The so-called "digging" level, the writing style is so low that it can't even be considered as foreshadowing, it seems to pop up suddenly (just like "I woke up from a dream, everything is restored to the original, hugging my wife and daughter and sighing about the sufferings of the world", "It turned out to be a dream"), in just a few chapters, it has completed "meeting new characters" and "changing new vests" and deliberately downplayed the protagonist. "Cat girl elements" (foods that could not be eaten before can be eaten immediately after the superpower comes, and the protagonist's previously trained flexibility, explosive power, and agility are almost not described), so high and low, it is staggering. The author still chooses to hold his neck and not make changes despite such obvious feedback in the chapter comments, which is even more embarrassing.

Author, are you sure this was not written by AI? [What]

It's good to read, but the writing is a bit awkward in some places, but it's innocuous, and it still doesn't stop it from being a good book [Blow a kiss] How on earth did I manage to write 6-7 thousand words in one chapter? I felt like it was almost done when I wrote about 2,000 words [crying] I don't know how to write. A lot of things have been changed, so it's already a new book. Except for the main line, there's no trace of the past [what]

The only shortcoming of a very good book is that there are too few. Once someone reads this kind of book, they will be attracted and immersed in it quickly. However, this state can only be achieved when reading continuously. When catching up, one will unconsciously read the book for pleasure because reading one or two chapters is not enjoyable enough. However, after reading the book, it is more difficult to immerse oneself in it. There are a lot of repetitions around chapter 150, including repeatedly recognizing relatives and then going back in history to jump to the world line. It also needs to be re-examined after major changes. In addition, it feels like it has lost its flavor since jumping back to the country. Suddenly it feels a bit bland [face covering]

The beginning is good, but in the middle, AI is used. I emphasize several points over and over again. It looks like it was generated by AI keywords.

It's good to watch, but the transition to the end of the world is a bit stiff. I look forward to the follow-up. Don't change your marriage, otherwise it will be a waste of the psychological foreshadowing of the protagonist, and the inner transformation is too fast. There should be some twists and psychological shadows caused by the previous events, plus a scene of overcoming psychological problems in the heart would be better (personal opinion)

Although it makes me sad to read and think about a period of time when I had a master, it is well written. Good luck to the author.

It feels like a new track, at least on Tomato. I haven't seen a novel of this type yet, so you can give it a look. What I like is the heroine's unwillingness to admit defeat from the beginning, her struggle to survive, and then, later on, she will slowly degenerate into the best collection for a better life. Or should he escape, retrieve his original memories, return to his original home, and reunite his family? Or in the end, he even forgot his original name and became a soulless puppet, or he gradually made the prince fall in love with him, became the princess, passed on the family line, and finally fought back. Anyway, I am looking forward to the subsequent plot development.

There are still very few subjects like this. It turns out that the laboratory process of transforming from a human into a cat became boring after it was deleted. I have no idea what the plot is about.

Although I'm not very adaptable to a new type of novel, it doesn't stop me from finding it quite interesting. Moreover, the author's writing is definitely full marks. There is really nothing about the description that makes it difficult to read. Also, would you like to ask, will there be another male protagonist (female protagonist)?

666, After raising it for half a month, I came back and saw, where did it come from? [Smile]

There is a big problem with the age portrayal of the daughter Linlin. For a 15-year-old girl who is 1.7 Meters tall, the behavior in the book is seriously inconsistent with her current age and height. She is not a little girl who is 5 years old and less than 1 meter tall. I hope the author can pay more attention to these details and insist on finishing the book [laughs] The latest update is a disaster. Are you sure it was written by the same person? Some time ago, it was review time. Linlin fell ill and went to the hospital. The cycle repeated. Recently, I get up in the morning, have breakfast, go to the studio or the company, and then keep catching thieves, one after another, and keep threatening the protagonist. I can't figure out how big the hatred is and how big the resentment is? Guang Linlin has discovered that the protagonist is her father countless times. Is she trapped in an endless dream loop?

Damn, why haven't I seen everything changed in two days? Isn't it interesting once I enter the palace?

😡Why did a Weishi suddenly pop up later😡 This one can't be criticized. The author really listens to advice.

Damn it, you secretly tricked me into reading pornographic articles [Punch]

This is the most hardcore transformation process I have ever seen👍 It has been basically revised and it has become a new book. You can read it again [face covering]

Five stars, to be honest, this is the first time I have seen such a strong sense of self-masculinity that will not degrade for a long time. Although it's a bit long to say, I believe that the female will eventually abort. After all, this is what I watched when I transformed. What I feel now is that life is half a piece of memory. It's awkward to watch the main character's thoughts. What I'm more curious about is the genetic issue. Can the protagonist's genes be combined with human genes? It feels like it's divorced from the online novels I know. Now it is a long and far way home. A far-fetched obsession. I also read this novel wrongly. I thought it was a romance novel. Now it seems like a novel of self-redemption.

I have been reading it for several days, and I think this book may be on the verge of being reviewed or removed from the shelves. I hope the author will take his time writing it. And the author's writing style writes the transformation process of the protagonist very well, with both warmth and ruthlessness, making people feel that almost every character is flesh and blood, especially the protagonist and Xiaoya, these two characters are the ones that impressed me the most.

Tomato's rare fine chaff, although I am a newbie in online writing, but the writing style is good, the story is also very delicate, and compared with the common hard twists, the portrayal is very good. I just started reading it, so I'm sure I'll follow it. If the author runs away, remember to give him a place to go [send my heart]

The writing is pretty good, I would like to ask the author about the sexual orientation of the main character after he turns into a cat lady [thoughts]

Why did ohnb change it again? This book has been rewritten many times.

Author, can you send me the previous version?