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The author's writing is very good, and the emotional development and other aspects are very natural. The part that poked me the most was the part at the end of Chapter 27, "Conan has comrades beside him, and she, Mao Lilan, is not alone. Let us move forward in our own way." This passage really poked me. I really like this feeling of walking side by side and growing together. Come on!

Highly recommended! ! Why is the rating so low! Hateful! None of the characters are OOC! It's neither Conan nor Xiao Ai, there's no meaningless female rivalry, and there's no deliberate belittling of Red or Black. It really feels like the original. Everyone is normal, and Qi Lan's psychological description is very natural. This book does not have sudden changes like other books. Just as the author said, "If Xiao Lan suddenly changes, it would be so sorry for her feelings for Shinichi." This sentence really poked me. The new CP is just that we want Xiaolan to live another life, not just to ridicule her previous efforts and intentions. Her love can be obtained by anyone. The setting of the male protagonist is also very interesting. He is not just a "black player", he is very lively and even a little bit funny (Xiaolan and he got along very well in the early stage, and the two poor little guys helped each other) After I tied it, I felt that the author is a very soft and delicate person with upright views. He perfectly captured the essence of Xiao Lan. Xiao Ai is also a very good girl in the book. She will worry about Lan, and her relationship with Bumi makes me feel soft [shy] I support the author and hope that he can continue writing. The current style is very relaxed and pleasant. No one is mocked, and no one is blackmailed for no reason. I can say that this surpasses 99% of Conan fan fiction. Come on! ! ! Twenty a day is not a dream! You have to challenge your own limits! ! ! [Shy][shy][shy]

Please read it more [Crying] It's so good. I wrote about the sister Xiaolan I liked when I was a child. She would be scared but would never flinch. The hero and Xiaolan get along like accomplices, but more like a little girl feeding stray cats and Sangbiao. Why does Sangbiao call you Mimi? [Laughter]

I rarely read fanfics about Xiaolan by Famous Detectives, because many of them feel one-sided to me. They are either soft and need to be held in someone's hand or they will break, or they are inexplicably powerful and just like venting their anger against the world. In short, they are more or less OOC. But Xiaolan in this book is different. She is kind but not a virgin, innocent but not stupid. She has the tenacity of a woman, strong and powerful. She is a bit like the sun, but she can warm others conditionally. It's very powerful. It reasonably improves and extends the character based on the original work. She is Xiaolan named Keli, and she is Mao Lilan herself. It's really good to read, and it's like opening up a new world. So far, there are only a handful of fanfics I've seen written at this level.

It's so well written that it actually takes into account Xiaolan's transformation and the protagonist's redemption at the same time. It's also fun to watch. People like Kudo Shinichi who can't learn to think from other people's perspective should just live with his cases for the rest of their lives [Like][Like][Like]

The relationship between Xiaolan and Qingze will not be too abrupt. I feel that the emotions mentioned in it will bring some inspiration to girls who want to fall in love or are in love, and establish a correct view of love. I hope every girl can be independent, self-reliant and confident. Thank you for the author's writing, it's really beautiful [adoration][adoration][adoration]

It can be called a better Conan article. Worth a look. If you are used to reading fast-paced and refreshing articles, but want to adjust your emotions with delicate emotions, you can try it. The portrayal of Xiaolan in this article is close to the original work, extremely restoring the character image. At the same time, Xiaolan's growth line has been added. Those who are dissatisfied that Xiaolan has always been treated as a vase or something like that can choose to take a look. Furthermore, the setting of this article is quite novel, and the author's writing style is also able to control this writing method. Qingze's and Xiaolan's are more friendly to daily literature lovers.

New readers, please don't hesitate to read this book because of the connection between Conan and the cabinet. This is really the best Conan fanfic I have ever read. From my impressions as I read it, this book actually has little to do with Conan. It's nothing more than borrowing the basic character and story background of Conan. The plot development and character structure are actually not Conan at all, and Aoyama cannot write such fine chaff. Other fanfics often focus on the plot of Conan's original work. The plot is also a combination of cases and life. Most of them use the God's perspective to solve the case instead of Conan and enjoy Xiaolan's garden instead of Conan. To be honest, it is nothing more than a replica of the famous detective. The most comfortable thing about this book is that it didn't even try to use the plot of the original novel to illustrate the story. It is about redemption, the two-way redemption of Aozawa Xiaolan, and the character setting of the original Conan that Aoyama cannot understand in his life. The characters are based on the original work but are higher than the original work.

I can't stand it anymore. The author has eaten so many episodes. The writing is so good. The characters are vivid and lifelike. Everyone's personality is quite full. Finally, I support the dismantling of Xinlan. Long live the dismantling of Xinlan. Our Xiaolan is such a good and charming person. She deserves full love. Ah, I love watching young lovers being ambiguous. It's so cute. I keep watching with the corners of my mouth raised. , Oops, I really can't help it, the wrinkles at the corners of my mouth are about to laugh out loud, I like this feeling of gradual, smooth and natural relationship. I used to think that I didn't like watching Conan fandom very much, but now I find that as long as it's good to watch and eat, I love everyone. Qingze is definitely a member of our flower-growing family. Only after receiving compulsory education can he keep himself from being brainwashed. After reading this, it's hard for me to watch Xiaolan with other people anymore. I always feel like something is wrong, so can the author give me more food?

It's pretty good. The characters of the male and female protagonists are both good, and the plot is basically smooth. The highlight of the book review is that the love between the male and female protagonists is unequal. The female protagonist is the male protagonist's redemption, and the male protagonist compromises time and time again. I just hate the female protagonist who sacrifices herself to save and tolerate the male protagonist under the guise of redemption. The comment section said that this is a female novel. In fact, this type of redemptive love story with a female protagonist abuses women. The author's introduction is right. She is the female protagonist's mother, so isn't it normal not to abuse Lan? What's more, after Lan realized his mistake and corrected it, he started to favor the male protagonist.

The subject matter made my eyes shine. I like the original male protagonist x Xiaolan. It's hard to find delicious food like this. I can only read one book. Now comes the author's super delicious book Moreover, Xiaolan doesn't have OOC, and the character of the male protagonist is also very interesting. I like it very much, I hope the author will continue to write more

The writing is good, and it is a relatively new angle in Conan literature. This special angle is generally not easy to write, but the author handles it well, the relationship between the characters is also handled relatively well, and the personality and personality of the main characters are well controlled. At the same time, there are many descriptions of personal inner thoughts, but because the characters are well controlled, it will not cause reading fatigue. In terms of plot control, it can be said to be excellent. For example, the timing between the end of the first exchange between the two and the beginning of the second exchange between the two is neither too long nor too long. There is a light and dark line design in the plot, with the main plot and daily interspersed with appropriate tightness. Summary: It can be said to be a good book. The outstanding advantage lies in the excellent characterization and original character design. Other aspects will basically not be below the level. Worth a look.

The writing is very nice. Although this is my first book, I am a newbie but not a novice. Maybe an old author is wearing a vest? It was natural to finish reading it. You can even detect his love for Xiaolan. Just, recommended.

It's great, the emotions are so delicate, and it describes Lan who can have other choices in my heart. I think she can also fly freely. It's me who has become the Bai Yueguang in everyone's mind. It's amazing. I've been looking for something like this for a long time, and finally I found the second one written so well by Lan. I'm so touched. Who can understand me? [Please update] [Please update]

I've finished reading it. It's a good read, with two lines and two perspectives. After more than 80 chapters, there are some surprises (or frustrations). After all, the heroine is Xiaolan who has not turned into a black red-cut gray core, and the male protagonist is a real wine with a black-cut gray core (at least we haven't found a way to release the boss control yet, it is a real wine) It is very rare for a novel that does not pay attention to the well-known Mingke reasoning and main plot, and mainly focuses on the growth or redemption line of the male and female protagonists. Generally speaking, the bias is more obvious, but on the premise that most of the characters are not particularly OOC, it is a kind of alternative cuteness. Conan's character has a certain degree of buffoonishness (maybe it's my personal feeling), but overall it's still biased towards the original work and tries not to smear it, which is rare, so if it seems to be okay, I'll be extremely cautious when it comes to fans, and the rest is a matter of opinion. The character image of the male protagonist is relatively well-shaped. At first, I just thought that the subject matter was quite novel (especially if the cp is a single female protagonist Xiaolan, which is even more novel), but gradually it became more and more surprising (since this kind of pseudo-wine character design of Mingke became popular, Mingke fandom finally has [not] [emphasis] a fake fun person who jumps repeatedly, the character of the wine side is interesting, but he is busy with redemption, and is fully satisfied to wipe the butt of the red party protagonist group) The male protagonist is a cute cat. After getting over the initial portrayal of a middle school boy and a domineering figure, you will find that he is unexpectedly a guiding lover who is opposite and complementary to the female protagonist. As for some of the daily interactions between the male and female protagonists, the author's writing is really enjoyable. Xiaolan has also gradually grown up with the help of the male protagonist under the gradual expansion and pressure of the environment. I hope that they can become a young couple who understand each other's true colors but will tolerate each other even though they are prepared by the author. The following are specific points containing spoilers: Under the premise that the body was exchanged and the method of switching back (suspected of emotional synchronization?), The male protagonist had no system to help Conan gain benefits, and Xiaolan's kung fu was not up to standard and could easily be exposed, Xiaolan didn't think too much in order to save Conan, and almost unconsciously dragged the male protagonist into the water, and tried to find the male protagonist's family members to communicate with him when the male protagonist clearly showed that he didn't care or even hated it. In fact, I personally feel that this is within an acceptable range (after all, it is consistent with the character, and Xiaolan also gave Conan a social death penalty), but the polarization in the comment area at that time was very serious (whether it was too biased towards Lan, ignoring the feelings of the male protagonist, and blaming everything on the male protagonist under the banner of Xiaolan's angel. Or, knowing Xiaolan's character background, but still scolding Lan because of the male protagonist's grievances), it seems that it is easy to make people angry. In particular, the two characters are well written. They are not created to pamper CP/become CP's tools, but are "accomplices" who work together to progress and redeem themselves. But the author also said that the heroine will gradually grow up in the later period and get rid of this "innocent" state. Moreover, the setting of a third-party accomplice who is neither black nor red and the way of getting along with CP really won my heart, and the writing is indeed good, so I trust the wife who can write novels that attract me.

Currently following the latest chapter, let me share your feelings. The first thing that bears the brunt is the delicate description of emotions, the advantages, and the good reviews. Secondly, it's very cool to dismantle Xinlan. After all, I can't stand Xiaolan, a simple cabbage, being taken over by the macho Xinyi Gong who is full of careerism. In the end, the plot arrangement was quite appropriate. Although there were no high points that made people burst out with emotions, it gave me bitter and sweet feelings from time to time, which is indeed worthy of praise. Next, I will talk about some things that I think can be improved. From the perspective of a male reader, please correct me if there is something wrong or inappropriate. First of all, Xiaolan's character design is very good, but I think it's not good enough. The reason is that since Xiaolan still has a good impression of Shinichi in the early stage, she should not pay too much attention to Qingze, and should not behave more than between friends. Otherwise, she will just eat from the bowl and look at the pot. This is not fundamentally different from the heroine Bundo in the harem. Furthermore, many times because of Shinichi's safety (even if they change bodies, they are involuntarily), it is difficult for Qingze to do it. This makes male readers who take on the male protagonist's perspective very uncomfortable. I think this kind of behavior crosses the line for Xiaolan, who is emotionally firm and dedicated, and does not conform to her personality. To put it bluntly, if Xiaolan was dedicated, she would not give Qingze hope. Secondly, after reading other readers' comments, I discovered that the relationship between them is indeed unequal. Xiaolan is Qingze's Bai Yueguang, the only one. Qingze is a more suitable second choice for Xiaolan, and Xiaolan has family and friends. Qingze has really been a turtle boy for Xiaolan many times, and he has made too many concessions for her. Finally, it must be written clearly whether the protagonist is Qingze or Xiaolan, or whether they are equally important like the title of the book. At present, I feel that Xiaolan is very close to the original work, but what kind of character Qingze is is wavering back and forth. You say Qingze is kind and naive. He can survive the organization and make everyone fear him. He must have killed a lot of people, and they have all killed people. When killing the target, there are always a few times when innocent people or relatives and friends of the target are indirectly implicated. You say Qingze is a bad person. Qingze decisively rescued a child when he encountered one. He did not kill Xiaolan after changing his body for the first time to avoid future troubles. He also tolerated Xiaolan's many dangers because of his old love. I think the Tengu codename should be given to Qingze. In fact, I feel that Qingze is far less loved than Xiaolan. In fact, Qingze without Driftwood must be more lacking in love than Xiaolan. Otherwise, Xiaolan's actions that put him as a killer in crisis are enough for Qingze to kill other people (treating other people in the same situation) until Qingze is soft. It wouldn't be a high score for a male channel. The first 28 chapters were very enjoyable, but after that I felt a bit frustrated. But in a female channel, I think I would give it 5 stars, just because the main character is Xiaolan. If Xiaolan is happy, I'm happy. = In a male channel, if the male protagonist is happy, I'm happy. My personal opinion is shallow and based on my feelings. It may not be objective in some places. I hope you will bear with me.

It's really good so far. The characters basically have no OOC phenomenon. They are similar to the original comics/anime. Xiaolan's character is also reflected very well. It can be seen that the author really understands and loves the character of Mao Lilan very thoroughly. The male protagonist is also well described in the article, and the character is very full. I hope this book can continue to be written, and I don't think that other Conan novels have been interrupted due to various reasons or have unclear endings. However, it still depends on the author as to how to write it. It's not my turn to point fingers, so what I want to say is that this book is really good. I like it very much as a reader. Cheers, author [blowing kiss]

A particularly good book, with delicate and changing feelings. I finally saw Xiaolan as a human being, but it is not very friendly to mourning fans. I am a neutral but prefer Xiaolan. If you like Xiaolan, you must read it! ! ! Really well written She wrote about Xiao Ai's little thoughts about Conan, but Xiao Ai also It's not written as a simple vicious mistress, in my opinion The character design is not too bad, more like Xiao Ai A sense of superiority, probably because as everyone talks about God A common problem among talents, in my opinion, it has not really reached its peak yet. Huan, the point of wanting to fall in love is just a sense of superiority. After all, Xiaolan is the protagonist, and she has no interest in most of the red characters. It has a special highlight, which seems to me quite objective. Yes, but readers who prefer the red square will hate it, That's it, but Xiaolan's writing is really very good Well, this book is not the traditional protagonist of Black. Fang didn't describe much, just like the author said, This half is mainly about love, with a little bit of growth. I think the novel about transformation is very good, Xiaolan is really Very good There are also stories about the conflicts and feelings between Maori parents. It's very well written, very reasonable, and very helpless. Hey, after all, love is not the solution to everything. Separation is very important for two people. It can express love better for people, and it didn't mention Mao Toshikogoro's pervert attribute is more inclined to describe a The role of a father, I think this is great

This book is very well written, and the emotions and plot are very smooth. I have read a lot of fanfics before, most of which are about Xiao Ai and Mariko. The male protagonists are detectives, rich second generation, and police officers, but they are all too bland after I haven't read them. Most of them follow the plot, but most of them are the same about Xiao Lan. They were all reduced to background. This book made me see a different Lan. It was also said later that Xiao Lan shouldn't use her identity as the protagonist to save Conan. Different people have different opinions. People can't become ruthless all at once and they don't really look at the problem from the other person's point of view. I also apologized later, not to mention Lan who is an angel in the first place.

The emotional changes of Lan in the author's big pen are very delicately depicted. There is no OOC. Lan also bravely expressed her thoughts. However, in front of her family, it was the protagonist who helped her speak. Lan is really a little angel. I feel sorry for her. The protagonist's portrayal is also good. He says that he is not a good person, but To some extent, he helped to enlighten Lan. There was also the scene where he taught Lan how to ride a motorcycle at night, and the emotions shown when he woke up and saw the sunflowers that Lan had placed at home. (I was almost knocked to death.) (The above comments are my personal opinions and do not represent the opinions of the public)

Compared to some other [Talan] fanfics, the male protagonist uses various methods to steal the limelight, frame up, compete in ability, IQ, EQ, etc. To grab the attention of the female protagonist Lan, and then the female protagonist Lan hesitates before the two. This Mao Lilan can re-recognize the true face of a self-righteous detective from the perspective of a bystander, completely break off the old relationship with Gong, and then naturally develop a relationship with the protagonist, which is really great. Like [like][like][like][like][like]

Wow, what a great perspective, I love it. Finally, someone has come to portray a strong and brave Lan. It's really popular that Qingshan portrayed the original wife like this. The author must definitely write it down! !

One of the best Conan fanfics so far. The protagonist is very natural, and the character is very consistent with the black camp. CP aside, the emotional description is very similar to the writing method on the female channel. It is definitely not the first time for the author to write a book. The rhythm of the plot is very well grasped, and the character motivation is also supplemented very well. Very perfect, the relationship and conflicts between the protagonists are also very eye-catching [facepalm] [OK] Apart from Duan Ping's generally low IQ, there are no major problems. The top celebrity Ke fandom is really not kidding [facepalm] By the way, I have worked directly from the first chapter to the current update progress. The author will update soon! (Raised for three months) [Punch out]

I like Ran-chan. Ran-chan here is no longer just a one-sided person who can only scream and call the police. She has her own thoughts and can be sad, but her unique shining points cannot be concealed! ! ! Angel Lan is really good. She will admit her shortcomings and change herself step by step. Lan is also slowly becoming a better person.

It can be said that this is the best Lan Mingke fanfic I have ever seen. I really believe that this kind of love is what Lan deserves. Kudo cares about justice and cares about passing Lan, so they are not suitable. In this book, Lan has someone who can face it with her, who will not let her stay out of it. The male protagonist is also a teacher and friend, allowing her to grow step by step, and in the end she becomes a person who can take charge of her own life. This is the Lan in my heart, the courageous, kind, innocent and smart Lan. The author describes Lan's feelings before letting go of her in such detail, as well as his gradual love for Qingze. At that moment, they were no longer just characters in the book, but living people. I can't express my excitement. What Qingze can give Lan is something Kudo can never give. Kudo's feelings are too self-righteous, and Qingze's self-esteem is so low. These are two completely different feelings, but after the relationship was confirmed, the silver-haired cat stopped all his minions towards Lan and revealed his true Qingze. When I saw two people finally getting together after going through hardships, the feeling was something I had never felt when reading novels over the years. In the past, I wasn't very excited when I saw the male and female protagonists together. I could only say that they were finally together. But this book is different. I really rolled on the bed because of their emotions (bushi). As for other characters, they seem to be just like the original work. Their behavior and habits are not OOC at all. I prefer Gin. I don't smear or whitewash Gin. I write according to his character. I can feel that the author loves every character. This is a truly good author. The best book of the year!

After more than half a month of tying the score, I suddenly remembered that there was no rating yet. Xiaolan's emotional changes and growth and transformation are described very delicately. As one of the few Conan fans with Xiaolan as the heroine, she can be called the fairy grass among fairy grass. The male protagonist Qingze has a super suave personality, and he still retains his bright and shining soul despite being in the quagmire. He is a typical beauty, strong and miserable. The relationship between Qingze and Xiaolan is also well written, and Xiaolan is suitable for a leading lover like Qingze who has a mature view of love. The most rare thing about this novel is that it doesn't want many novels to be exciting in the early stage but weak in the later stage. Instead, it gets better and better in the later stages. Now I am looking forward to the final climactic plot of the red and black showdown to see how Aosawa Xiaolan creates an ending that belongs to them. Come on, author, don't let it end 🌹🌹🌹🌹 While I was chasing the article, I searched many other fanfics on Tomato with Xiaolan as the heroine. I watched one article after another that was originally labeled Xiaolan as a single heroine, and began to have affairs with other female characters. Until later, it was completely changed to the label of harem novel, which simply deceived people into killing them. Therefore, the value of this Xiaolan fanfic in my heart has been rising. It is very, very pure love. Whether it is the emotional drama, Xiaolan's personal spiritual growth, or the family drama, it is worth watching. The beautiful qualities of Xiaolan in the original work are written very well🌷🌷🌷Qingze is also my favorite man in 2025 Lord, putting aside the ability to strategize, the concept of love is so rare that it stands out from the crowd... In short, those who like CP are in luck. Qinglan's CP is very tense. Whether it is the ambiguous relationship before or after the official relationship, each has its own attractions.

It's super good-looking, with upright views and vivid descriptions of emotions, so I was curious and read the low-scoring reviews. Some people said they were dog lickers... And it felt like they could only accept the harem story that the heroine suddenly came to post... In reality, people like this can only daydream about having a boyfriend/girlfriend. But the author should put it on a female channel. Most of the male readers of Tomato can only accept the female protagonist taking the initiative to post, and the female protagonist cannot resist the male protagonist at all...

Not bad. It was the first time I read Mingke's article about Xinlan's CP. I thought I wouldn't be able to accept it. But I found that I accepted it well [learned]. Xiaolan's emotional transition was quite natural. I felt that the author's writing made sense. When I read it this way, I immediately felt that Xinlan was not good. I also love Qingze's character. [Send my heart] I just love to see Qingze look like he's dead. The contrast between his arrogant appearance and his image is huge. I want to see him keep retreating for Xiaolan and lowering his bottom line [please take a closer look], but it's not enough. I beg the author to update more. I want to see when they will be together [crazy] I hope they can get everyone's blessings [love] [love] [love]

I stayed up all night to finish Chapter 254. The God of Gods. Approved by a ten-year-old bookworm. I rarely write book reviews. This book is qualified in all aspects. By the way, as a person who has been in many relationships and experienced real-life Shura field splitting, the emotional description in this book is completely above the standard in my opinion, and the author's understanding is not simple. I also suggest the author to grasp his own feelings and not to be misled by readers who don't understand love. People who really understand are too lazy to go to the comment area and criticize. That's why there are so many criticisms and don't need to be ignored. Now that I have read the latest chapter, the author's writing control, rhythm, and emotional description are all impeccable. Come on

The one I have seen most resembles Xiaolan's, and the writing is very good, and it can be well introduced, and this cp is already super, super good compared to others. It is now from 8.5 To 9.1, Which is super awesome. It will be higher in the future, but it is a bit short now. Come on, author, it will get better and better.