The Third Book by Longgong Mozun

It's very good. Although the description of emotions is a bit rough, the author's crazy will makes up for this part very well. There are indeed some mistakes, but what's the problem? Let's stop talking about your anger after the 3 o'clock plot. The following 3.4 Plot has just ended. As powerless players, we have no big solution at all. We are full of grievances but have no way to vent. So it is reasonable to say that I don't care. Anyway, let's have fun first.

So good, so to my liking. I just like this kind of killing and killing. But when will it be pushed to the main line? I want to see the protagonist kill and kill in the main plot.

The writing is good and beautiful, just be more restrained and don't just kill. Or be more subtle, otherwise it will be easy to be blocked, come on! 👍

It still feels very good. What you wrote in the front is pretty good, but what are you writing next? I don't understand. It can only be said that it is one heaven and one earth. Getting more and more curious.

I don't know, I'm just commenting

It looks good, but the punctuation is a bit awkward.

Okay, okay, you can clean my eyes

It looks so cool, come on, author Great, the author is back to the main plot now, and it's much better than those who started with Star God's combat power and historical strategy. You gain Star God combat power at the beginning. What kind of Star God is that? Why can you become a new god? I don't know how to just abandon my brain, but it's different here. Here I succeeded in becoming a star god by relying on the red in my heart. This is a real person who has his own persistence, his own requirements, his own ideals, and his own beliefs. Instead of just going to pick up girls after gaining Star God combat power, then what have they become? Great writing, cheers author.

Fortunately, it's the quotation marks that make me so uncomfortable. Everyone else's is "XXX" but his is ''XXX''

Not bad, I wrote a long novel 👍