Many Children Bring Happiness, Old Friends Will Give You Big Gifts at the Beginning

After reading Chapter 48, I still see the familiar routines of Patriarch Ye, such as giving away daughters to two families at the beginning, befriending the daughter (Yun) by making elixirs, and collecting daughters by scattering elixirs. But there are different plots, poisonous and weedy, and the poisonous point (by my standards) is that the main character is too virgin. For example, in the first chapter, the person the main character helps plans to send the girl to rob the family property. The main character does not pay attention to her whereabouts and is plotted. The advantages are that part of the plot of the sect is okay, and the beginning of the plot is satisfactory. Observe again [explore]

The writing is good so far. It is recommended that the system be strengthened in the future so that the protagonist's harem can consume lifespan to strengthen their cultivation talents, as well as the mortal residence. It should be changed. It is best to change it to one with good spiritual energy and a guardian formation. It is best to have a small secret world. It doesn't have to be too good at the beginning. You can use the system to upgrade. There are many other small ideas, so I won't go into details. The author did overlook some things in the follow-up, and the details should be written well. For example, if it says that if the clan is exterminated, you don't have to collect the loot? At least it is still a peak foundation-building family, and there should be a lot of follow-up resources.

There are endless spiritual stones to spend. Instead of buying spiritual stones for formations, you have to spend a hundred years of life to exchange for formations.

There are many female protagonists and a harem. The novel is well written. Novel, okay. It's just that there are too many divisions within the same realm.

Keep it simple, it's too easy and there's no resistance

It's okay so far, but I feel like this world of cultivating immortals seems to be a little too prosperous. The Dan Pavilion, which specializes in Qi refining period elixirs, actually must have a Foundation Establishment Pill, and it cannot be an ordinary Foundation Establishment Pill, it must be a high-grade Foundation Establishment Pill. This is quite difficult. In other novels, once the Foundation Establishment Pill appears, it is something that casual cultivators and Qi Refining families rob. In this novel, ordinary Foundation Establishment Pills are actually bought by casual cultivators who do not have any spiritual stones. [Cover face]

The male protagonist is ruthless enough to dare to use the life of the system to buy things, and he even wins.

There is something interesting to write about

It's indeed a pretty good piece of work, keep up the good work!

An interesting book

Very good, good-looking

It's very well written.

Very nice looking

Real, objective, multi-dimensional description.

Good-looking, very good-looking

This book is okay, but the content is exciting enough

Hope to see the end, looking forward to it

The writing is otherworldly, fun and down to earth, keep going

The plot is pretty good and not too draggy. I hope it will be the same in the future.

Drooling theory so far

It's super pretty, so give it a big thumbs up.

The writing is good, and it is quite interesting to read. There are not so many poisonous points. The only thing that is a little poisonous is that the appearance rate of the later system is a bit low, the gap between spiritual roots is not obvious, and the rewards are not obvious.

Ugly by birth but beautiful by thought.

The system is not very powerful.

Good, good, good, good

The plot is reasonable and interesting!

Too much for the fairy