Picking up Wives Everywhere, One Piece, Two Pieces, Three Pieces

(Only personal feelings, discussion content) If the author does not accept comments, But @ deleted the post, his tone was calm, and there was no accusation or similar emotions. I have read about 40 chapters of the first Small World so far. Not much thunder point. And a few pictures of the third world (this is the key point) that feel like the plot line It's a bit loose, and the main line is not very clear (except for the original plot protagonist, the enemy is not clear). The love line develops slowly, probably because of the setting. There is obvious progress around Chapter 40. It's a cool article about scumbag abuse, but if you don't kill it with your own hands, you can kill with a borrowed knife. People, but there is a little bit of foreshadowing ahead. The rhythm of the first small world was not very good. 1. The article is written slowly and in detail. If you like to read it quickly, read with caution. 2. This is not a love at first sight story, but those who like delicate emotional development can read it. 3. Gong is a bit delicate but strong in front of Shou. 4. I feel alienated from the protagonist, maybe because I really don't have any inner feelings. Narrator, the alienation here refers to being like a fairy but not a mortal, having the heart of a gentleman, having no particularly intense emotions, being plain and smooth. The gentleness stands out, and generally speaking, it doesn't feel like a human being (this seems a bit unpleasant [face covering]) (personal experience) Since it is some praise of the author: It's okay to write a life line in a big way, it's very delicate and gentle. Xin. It can clearly highlight the attack, and is very soft and moist. Not allowed to write novels Yi, the author is great (as far as I know, the author's second book), Can insist on writing down. The author is very cute, and so are the characters. The rhythm of the third world is obviously better. I hope the author can write better and better, and keep up the good work. Of course the premise Pay attention to your body.

I don't want to say anything more, just a five-star review. It's really super sweet! Generally speaking, novels are either sweet with a bit of sadism, or sadistic first and then sweet, or sweet first and then sadistic. It's rare to see such sweet novels! I just don't know if it will be cruel later [sending my heart]

I was the first person in my village to read novels on Tomato, and they heard that I read a lot of novels. The whole village was shocked. The village chief came to my house and told my dad that I was crazy! My partner divorced me and told me that I couldn't survive this life! Faced with a lot of pressure, I insisted on reading it! Finally, the novel continued to be updated... I opened a chapter of the novel with excitement and a trembling heart, and I felt like my eyes were going to be blinded at that moment... Such appearance, feel, and quality! It's only because I don't read enough. There are no gorgeous words to describe it. As soon as I proudly stood at the entrance of the village to ask for it, the villagers were stunned and time froze for a moment. Everyone stared at each package motionlessly. Just like the green eyes of a wolf at night, they glowed horribly! 15 Seconds later the whole village was boiling. Said it was great! So beautiful! Said it was so worth it! Some people even screamed at the top of their lungs and jumped into the well if they didn't show it to them. I was so scared that I quickly put away my treasure and ran away. So pretty! ! ! ! ! ! Ahhhhhhhh! ! ! ! !

It's very interesting and has no flaws, except that the first small world is a bit long, but the writing is very good and makes people want to read on. I hope you will do better [please update] It's too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good

It's so pretty🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘Yes God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist, I am so cute that I cry From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 So cute that tears flow out of the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😈 So beautiful 🥰 God is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor 😎 It makes me realize that God does exist, I am so good that my tears will not stop, and from now on, the world will no longer be short of water.

It's very beautiful. The relationship between Su Ling and Feng Xu is very beautiful. I look forward to the next development of the plot. I hope the author will be more careful and don't give up.

From my point of view, the plot is extremely delicious and not procrastinating. The young couple are also very happy and interact very cutely [Blow kiss] This cross-book novel is not an ordinary cross-book novel. I think Xiao Su is also a badass haha ​​[laughing] In short, there are no shortcomings. I highly recommend it ~ It is not easy to find such high-quality novels on Tomato [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

I feel like the writing of the third small world is getting better and better. Lingling is really a gentle, gentle, loving, aggrieved and coquettish little fox. She especially likes to tease Xiaoxu. Xiaoxu is a bit arrogant. Let's call it mutual love. In terms of love, Lingling has always been the guide. I hope that in the future, we can see Xiaoxu's enlightenment faster and more proactively, and the setting of the small world will be more novel and more interesting to watch.

It's super pretty. Plot: Very good-looking, not sad at all, not frustrating, and resolved very quickly Emotions: Progress quickly without lacking delicacy Very beautiful | Su Ling × Feng Xu Shuangjie dotes on each other, the two strong people go in both directions, they express their love loudly, it is super beautiful.

It's a very sweet book. When I read the first small world, I thought it was a bit too long. The fast-traveling novels I read before were all fast-paced, but when I read the second small world, it was much better. The characters are super engaging. Although the third small world has not been completed yet, overall, it can only be described in one word: cute! I really like reading cute books. I hope the author will update [Bird Food Master] [Shy] as soon as possible.

It's very good to watch so far, I'm so happy watching it [adoration][adoration][adoration]

What else is there to say? The five-star review has given rise to [Adoration]. Personally, I prefer the fast-traveling type of novel. This book is really super invincible and very good-looking. The plot is not cruel and very sweet. Su Ling and Feng Xu are so cute.

Ah ah ah ah ah, it's so beautiful, why is it a serialized novel? [Crying] [crying] Damn, do you know how difficult it is for me to find a novel that suits my appetite [crying] [crying] I allow 24 hours of non-stop coding.

The third world is good The early stage was pretty good, but after I confessed my love, I seemed to be a different person, which was quite disappointing.

Super sweet, goes both ways

I read this book from the author Dada Fenmao. The writing is good and it's super beautiful. Sweet Love made me feel soft.

So sweet, how can two babies be so cute?

After waiting for a long time, I'm back again. It's so beautiful that I can't describe it in words.

It's so sweet and reassuring, if you shed a tear, I'll slaughter a city

It's super cool and beautiful, I especially like the character design! !

It's nice to watch, but there's no timbre that I often hear behind it (intelligent reading) [crying] [crying] [crying] No, no, no, I'm so used to it

I like it so much, I didn't even skip a chapter [full]

It's so beautiful, but I caught up to the end before I knew it and couldn't get enough of the author.

It's quite interesting. If you like sweet stories, you can read it.

So sweet, so beautiful, I like it so much, (*^▽^*)

Looks good! Looks good! Looks good!

Super good-looking, full text, sweet and non-abusive, recommended on duty

It's sweet and reassuring [sending heart]

It's so good, I love watching it and want to watch it again.

It's pretty cool, keep up the good work!