Demon Slayer: Tokito, Your Sister Is Called Yi Niang!

Super pretty! One of my favorite Demon Slayer videos (the other one is Chinatsu-chan ✪ω✪), whether it's character interaction or fighting scenes, it can stir up emotions. The rating will definitely go up, wow, the emotional line with Fugui Yuyu is also very interesting~(￣▽￣~)~

Really pretty, 👩 👚 This novel really surprised me! The storyline is rich and varied, and the characters have distinct and unique personalities that make you want to keep reading. The author's writing style is beautiful and smooth, and the words are filled with a strong artistic flavor, making people immersed in the wonderful story world. In addition, the plot twists in the novel are unexpected and endlessly memorable. Overall, this novel is a great read and I would recommend it to my friends. 👖

A very nice fanfic! I really like Qingying's character! Very female protagonist. There are a lot of fighting scenes in the article and less emotional scenes, but it's so sweet! ! And the writing is not bad, and the moves' names are very nice. Anyway, I love [Love]! ! !

Hmm... This book is quite interesting and interesting. The CP between the heroine and Yiyong is quite sweet. The deputy CP is also very sweet, and there are several couples (Snake Love, etc.) There is a happy ending, the only regret is that the lord and his wife died and did not survive to the end.

First, let's look at the overall structure. The framework of this fanfic is very well built, and the combat description is also very popular with me. It not only fits the style of the original work, but also does not fall into the cliché of "brainless cheating" style cool writing. The character creation is always online. Especially Immortal River, he carried out his energy from beginning to end, hahaha! The interactive description of the emotional line is full of pink bubbles, and the atmosphere is full~ Although the beginning of the relationship between the heroine and Tomioka Giyu is indeed a little abrupt, but other than that, the overall look and feel is very comfortable, and it is a fan work that I personally like very much.

There are so many extras that are very touching. There was just one chapter in the middle that almost scared people to death, but the rest was great. The author's writing style is very good and delicate, and the description of the characters is also very vivid. Don't hesitate to read the comments outside, come and take a look.

Overall it's pretty good, the pace is a little fast, but it's pretty good. Except for the lord and Mrs. Tianyin, everyone basically survives, and no arms or legs are missing. It's great that the author, as a high school freshman, wrote this, but there are still shortcomings. 1. The mix of Chinese and Japanese, and the accent, looks weird. 2. Ignore the full concentration and common use. This is a method that can improve yourself in daily life. Ignoring it is a mistake. 3. Masaki, Giyuu and Qioto should have known each other since they were studying under Mr. Rinlong, and it seems that Masaki was selected in the next session of Giyuu and Qioto (? I can't remember clearly). Zhen Ye was ignored in the early stage, and appeared in a later place, and it appeared as the CP of Qi Rabbit (not really counting, it is ambiguous). This is not quite right. I don't care whether it becomes CP with Qi Rabbit. The main reason is that the time when Zhen Xi appeared was not right (this can be regarded as a small mistake) (? Don't scold me if I'm wrong🙏) 4. Confusing breathing techniques with sword skills. One is basic skills and the other is skills. If you mix them up, it will not work. It will be a big mistake. 5. The relationship between the protagonist and Yiyong develops very quickly. It develops in leaps and bounds, not step by step. It can be improved in the future, but the writing is not bad. 5. The last one is my own feeling. Maybe I feel wrong. I apologize first, don't scold me. It's just that when I read it, I always feel that some sentences are strange, but I can't tell what is strange. It is very similar to what ds would say when I role-played with ds before. It has a faint strange feeling of human-machine, because I chatted with ds quite a lot, and I always feel like I have seen some sentences when I see them. Sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry, maybe I feel wrong, you can ignore this (sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry) So overall I think it's pretty good. You can take a look. Come on, teacher💪

I think this article written by the author is very good. The details, expressions and movements of each character are very well written. What surprised me is that the emotions of Yiyong and Qingying are very well written. So I think this book written by the author is very good, so I gave it five stars. I also ask the author to read it for himself! ! ! ! ! [Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][Laugh][Laugh][Laugh][Laugh][Laugh][Laugh]

Goodgood's writing style is very delicate. It is one of the few demon slayer stories that I can read. It is more funny, but the writing is very exciting during the battle! The emotions are also written very smoothly, not OOC at all. I like the author greatly [like][like][like][love] I finished reading it today, yes. It looks very good

The fighting is well written, and the emotional line is a bit abrupt, but it doesn't hinder the fight. The ending is happy, but the author's description is a bit funny in some places, which is good, and neutralizes the serious and tragic atmosphere.

It's nice to watch. It's nice to watch. The author's writing style is very interesting. If you like reading in a happy style, don't miss it. The plot is quite enjoyable and very comfortable. Ah~ I'm very comfortable. [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it]

The author really writes well. He added a few Internet terms, which are not evil, but also very foreign. It is very fun, not deliberate, and does not conflict. The modern words create a contrast with the Taisho era. It is really good.

This is a good-looking book. I particularly like the heroine. She is not ridiculously strong, but she is stronger than most pillars and can save a lot of regrets. What stood out to me the most was the extra chapter at the end of this book, which allowed people who followed the original plot to see the world line that should have happened, and then suddenly understood everything the heroine did. This kind of writing is actually awesome! !

It's so beautiful. I hope there are more emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists [laughs][laughs][laughs]

It's super, super good-looking, haha, so funny. It's perfect for our Demon Slayer fans~

It's okay, easy to read, but the writing style is more average, and there are more Japanese homophones. The heroine is not a crusher, but she is equally matched. It's okay. The love line starts a bit too suddenly. Ignoring this, the later stage is still quite sweet.

It's still pretty good to watch, as long as you don't mind the heroine and Giyuu falling in love, and it's a completed story. The writing style is very relaxed and funny, and it's also very clean and neat, without the feeling of procrastination or superficial writing. Moreover, it's really Demon Slayer, not Hashira Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba.

It's good to watch. The heroine is Ye Zhu, who is super strong. The plot is flawless. It would be nice if there were more descriptions of the relationship between Yi Yong and Yi Yong. I feel that it lacks a little description of falling in love with each other in the early stage. However, the emotional line in the later period is well written (no spoilers, the heroine knows how to penetrate the plot). , Became the sister of Muichiro and the others, and then turned the tide. She was super talented. Everyone did not die even if they opened the stripes. Thank you Amana Juyo, and the people and ghosts who died later and the surviving pillars also gathered together in the cloud and found that the heroine saved them. It was amazing and worth watching.

The writing was quite good. The protagonist traveled through time and made up for many of Demon Slayer's regrets. The emotional line was also well written. I just feel like I'm a little bit bookish. There seems to be a fixed nine nine pillars. Four more pillars? (Or am I remembering it wrong?) I remember that the earrings I gave Tanji were not the original ones from Yuanyi? It's a bit strange how the earrings on the heroine's back came to be. Or maybe I missed it, when did Giyuu Haruhide's relationship begin? The earliest one seemed to be when he overheard Giyuu saying that Giyuu was crying and burping, or was it the words he said to Shang Er? The emotional line at the back is pretty good

In fact, I want to give it three stars, because I am a protagonist person and I feel a little unbalanced when I see that the original protagonist's scenes have been reduced. However, I went round and round and found that you really gave a lot to the author... And it is not a heartthrob, and the characters are not OOC. Except for the emotional line that is a bit abrupt and the original protagonist's scenes are a little less (compared to other books, it is much better), it is good! Recommend!

It's really beautiful. I've already read it once, and I will definitely read it twice and three times in the future. I highly recommend this book to those who want to read Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba. I burst into tears when I saw the ending. It's really very beautiful, and I highly recommend it.

The author's writing is really great!

I love the article written by Teacher S! ! ! Especially the combat aspect is written in great detail. Mr. Cantaloupe, I will follow you for the rest of my life🥳🥳🥳 Is it my problem, or Teacher Hami Melon's writing is progressing too fast👁👄👁I see that the other two creations are still ambiguous, and the teacher has already started the final battle👉😨👈I am very curious, what will the teacher write later? Teacher, please write more, don't be tired, and don't take a break😈

Good-looking, really very good-looking, no matter how you say it, it's good-looking, um, it's very good-looking, this kind of good-looking is very pure, pure is very good-looking, just good-looking, to make up the number of words, I will make up the number of words, and then I will make up the number of words, and then you will find that I made up the number of words, that's what you mean, um, it's very good-looking

Nice! I laugh every time Bulk Japanese appears, but I have a small suggestion. I hope you can check it systematically or learn Japanese next time. There are some oral errors in some places, and the author has greatly changed some places. It looks good! The description of the action and environment is very interesting and vivid

The protagonist Shitou Qinyin in this book is very powerful. He turned into a pig faster than his younger brother Shitou 51 Wolf. And I also like the settings of these characters in it. Thank you to the author for praising such a good book.

The plot is very funny, with a lot of laughs. Moreover, it has changed a lot of regrets. The one I remember the most is Tomioka Yoshiyong. His good friend Tomioka Tutu did not die, so Tomioka Yoshiyong now has a lot of words.

It looks good, I love watching it, I still watch it ('▽') Fugui Yuyu, why are you so cute~~~~~

Who knows the sense of redemption one can feel while listening to Red Lotus and reading this novel. The author's writing style is delicate and solid. It is based on the original work but not inferior to the original work. He brings out everyone's characters well. He also uses Western-style English and Chinese-style Japanese to provide funny clips.

The plot is good, the ending is satisfying, the heroine is super strong (Immortal Kawa and Iguro can't defeat each other together), it's great! CP is brave and proactive in relationships (which I really love). Finally, she is no longer hesitant and coy about a weak heroine! Marvelous! This is my second review. It's good-looking and cute, but the portrayal of Saneya Immortal is too arrogant, and his speech is too unpleasant. In fact, this guy is a gentle and eldest man. I repeat, his speech in the article is really too unpleasant.