After Traveling Through the Interstellar World, He Has Always Been Ranked First on the List.
穿越星际后靠肝常年霸榜第一
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Explore more →National Ability + College Life (Ability University) + System
Top Group Portraits, Academy, Genius, Battle Competition
Urban Superpower + Academy + Daily Life + High-Energy Explosive Battle (Please Be Spicy😭
By the way, don't be systematic, don't be systematic, don't be systematic (say important things three times)
The Hero Is the Eldest Son in the Family, and He Can Cover the Sky with One Hand. Please! ! !
I want to see the male protagonist be the first child in the family, a very important one, and then marry the female protagonist.
Which Books Have Influenced Your Tastes?
Don't post it again, don't post it again, thank you for your recommendation, but there are really too many comments (`Δ´)! I can't see anything else
Help! ! ! ! ! I Was Fascinated by 2 Interstellar Novels! ! !
Please, is there any good interstellar literature?
Group Portrait, Group Portrait, Group Portrait! I Need High-Quality Group Portraits
I want to read a book like "Spring Comes Again on the Branches of a Sick Branch". Geniuses from all over the world gather together to fight against invincible opponents and create brilliance in their own time.
The Academy Has National Competitions, Martial Arts, and Supernatural Powers.
Single Female Protagonist, Urban Superpower, College Entrance Examination, Sweet and Burning, One Body Can Block an Entire City
If You Want to See Cards, You Can Make Cards or Royal Cards.
Don't let Chinese mythology break up, don't let it be a system, I really can't stand this kind of thing
Looking for Academic Novels and Testing Your Talent at the Beginning
Just awesome
Ranking of the Top Ten Articles About Strong Women (9.0 or Above)
I'll start with "Rebirth of Ace Girl", this one ranks first in my heart
Isn't Shuangwen Just Showing Off His Holiness in Front of People? If He Is Unhappy, Then It Is Shuangwen. It Is Called Poisonous Wen.
Is It so Difficult to Have a Female Channel Without CP That There Is No Masterpiece?
No CP, no CP, no CP! ! ! Similar to "Binded to the famous minister system, I disguised myself as a man in ancient times"!
I Bet There Aren't Any Articles That Are Hilarious and Cool at the Same Time. If You Don't Agree, Let Me Argue.
I don't really want to see something like hiding my identity.
Interstellar Writing! It Can Be a Military School or College for Strong Women. Get Whatever You Have at the Bottom of the Box.
Are There Any Non-CP Heroine Novels Similar to Yu Xunge, Shang Yechu, and Qi Xu?
I want to read a book similar to "She After 208 Actors in One Year (Shang Yechu)".
What I Want Is a Group Portrait, Not a Group Favorite, Not a Junior Sister and Senior Brother.
I want to read a book like "Sister, stop pretending, the whole sect will be strict with you". Not men and women, men and women, not males competing, not females competing, but a group of men and women from the same sect or different sects cultivating immortality.
Interstellar, Military School Literature, the Kind with Competition and Military Exercises, Super Flammable
Magicians, Colleges, National Competitions, Geniuses in All Departments, Please Ask Quickly!
Laughing to Death, There Isn't a Good Article in Starcraft, It's All About Food. If You Don't Agree, Come and Argue.
It's all the kind of mukbang. What else? Damn, eat potatoes or something. Also, make the food that the Chinese people used in the past. Then compare it to those restaurants. It's ridiculously expensive and not delicious.
Interstellar + Mecha + Military Academy + League + Group Portrait Text
I want to read a book similar to "Star: Mecha Master, She's a Little [Social Fear]". This kind of article is really nice. I like it very much. Articles with group portraits are also fine.
Interstellar+academy+psychic Power+genius+group Image
I want to read a book similar to "The Strongest Fighter in the Stars".
The Ceiling of the Heroine's Combat Power, Absolutely Invincible, No Cp
They are all invincible, what kind of partner do you want!







































































































Okay, there is no brainless villain, and there is no special frustration. The only current bright villain, the scumbag father, is also a background in the plot (except for the purification part), so I can basically finish it in one sitting and comfortably. Is it that some parts feel like they have been modified by AI? Or maybe not. Anyway, it's a little awkward. If the author is willing to modify it, maybe the whole thing will be smoother and more beautiful, but if he doesn't want to be fearless. Well, as soon as I finished talking about today's update, a few things popped up... It was obvious that the protagonist was still aloof, but the guy who made the final decision looked like an equal but was actually arrogant. The protagonist seemed to want to argue with them about what to prove... But this matter is not over yet, I will take a look. It's finally over, but I skipped reading. Judging from the latest chapter, the main role of this group of people seems to be to let the protagonist get in touch with the experience of a senior, and understand some things about being a commander, and lead to the main plot. Secondly, the female team members can just lead the heroine who wants to go to the city in the sky... Well, it can only be said to be a very traditional kind, a slap-in-the-face tool man who is not a villain but the point of entry is uncomfortable? When I think about the fact that there may be a bunch of these Mu Qiang admirers in the city who don't even have the basic courtesy to respect others (I feel that although the author has been emphasizing that Fu is very polite and respectful, he is actually not respectful at all in his behavior, otherwise he wouldn't have said he would take care of it before bringing his teammates here? Letting teammates look down on people means that this man actually looks down on people, which is very pretentious). I lost the desire to continue reading. I hope someone who reads that part in the future can kick me if they find that such people do not appear again. Thank you. By the way, there is no investigation and no right to speak. How are these characters shaped? Because I didn't read them carefully after their uncomfortable appearances. I just skipped to read them. So this can only be said to be my own personal feelings and is not objective. Because the result was not very comfortable (I can't say it's better or worse), so I lost the desire to read the article. This does not represent the author. There are too many problems with this article. People like Bu Lei, who look down on others when they appear, and will treat the supporting characters differently in the future, can be read. (I personally find it difficult to accept this kind of person. If they don't pay a price in the end, I can't accept it. Maybe it's because to me, the heroine is much better than them. It makes me feel that they are arrogant, rude and funny, and makes me feel that they have no arrogance at all.)
I give it three stars. The plot is very smooth and makes people want to read. However, the characterization of the heroine feels weird. In the early stage, I thought the heroine was a cute, strong, and sober person. Later, when she went to high school, she was described as cold, tall, and not angry. This sudden change personally feels a bit awkward. If the writing is better, I believe the plot can be written better. Also, the description of the fighting scenes is not very amazing. If it is written too much, it will be very cumbersome. Other than these, everything else is very good and great. I look forward to it.
There is no brainless villain, there is no brainless attack on the heroine, the heroine is very talented, and the girls get along with each other warmly. Sometimes the heroine really seems like a middle-aged and stinky child, so cute and cute [Send heart] I finally found an article about card flow that suits my taste, go ahead, go ahead, go ahead, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, [laugh] [like]
Super good-looking, a story about a growth-oriented heroine with no cp. She doesn't pretend to be a pig to eat a tiger. She is a genius. Don't look at the F-level at the beginning. She will be upgraded quickly. She takes the genius route. The pace is fast. The heroine is an all-round talent. There are no mindless taunts or slaps in the face. There are no male or female taunts. There are many female bosses. The classmates get along well with each other, the heroine is regarded as a genius when she enters the academy, and the classmates are struck by the genius every day: Aren't you a wind type! (The heroine is an all-rounder, and the college subjects are also all-rounders. Wind was used a lot at that time). My classmates admired "Wind Perspective: How to Use Other Elements to Play Support"
I came in from the introduction that said the heroine upgrades very quickly. I didn't read many books below 9 points in the past, but this one is really worth it. There are no flaws. The heroine is very stable, neither arrogant nor impetuous. The author also works very hard to explain his point of view clearly. It can be seen that the author of this book is really attentive. Although I haven't seen much of it, the plot is very engaging and the innovations are great. For similar articles, either the writing is not good or the plot is not good. This one can definitely score above nine points. Let me take a look again.
The Headmaster is a woman, the Archon is a woman, and the Star Master is a woman. The protagonist team is all female. The college entrance examination live barrage also said that there are more strong women recently. There are many women at the forefront of the college entrance examination. It was really surprising to see one person after another with identity appearing with the pronoun "she". The heroine has a big dick, she is pure and cool without any abuse. A little bit of abuse in the past life, not much space. I also died in the high school entrance examination and found out that I had an advanced version of the famous sword. In a sense, they are quite united, but those who seek division are suppressed. All powerful except healing. No cp for all members. Pure business brain. There are also women as villains, it doesn't matter. It shows that women can reach the top wherever they go. How nice x There are male villains, but they are not as high-status as the female villains, nor are they as strong as the female villains. My beloved daughter enjoys watching it. It will be over when the heroine officially becomes a god. What follows should be a side story. I don't like watching the thief's extras x
This is the real female pornographic article, the female strong article! ! ! The author respects the heroine very much, and also has a sense of love for her, without using any strange words. The heroine's tricks all the way are all highlights. I saw some people say that this is not good, but isn't it true that the male protagonists in many male videos are also like this? Those authors don't respect women yet. Serve food first and then eat. The writing style of the author of this article is also very good. The logic of the article is very clear, without too many modifiers, concise and capable. I really like her writing. There are a lot of female characters in it, and I saw a lot of comments saying that they love men, but this is not clearly shown in the text. Including the top three in the competition are all girls, and during the competition, reporters also specifically emphasized that for many years the winners in the competition were basically girls. It can be seen that the author actually has a strong sense of loving his daughter. Then there are those who say there are too many male characters. There are actually quite few appearances and highlight moments for male characters in this book. The heroine's teammates are all girls. They all work very hard and pay for the college entrance examination. Everyone has their own plans and will do their best to do it, uniting and loving each other. I hope the author will not be affected by those negative reviews, you are the best. This book didn't collapse even when I saw the heroine's character at the end. The author wrote it very well. And I hope everyone will not be affected by these negative reviews! ! ! I want to fiercely defend my little author and the books I love. It's a pity that I can't post pictures in the comments. I clicked on the negative reviews and looked at the home page. Some people specifically wrote negative reviews for books written by female authors, and it took only 0 seconds to guess the gender. Not to mention that some of them return my daughter to me.
Oops, not enough, not enough at all 👀. The heroine has a cheerful and sunny personality, but hides her tenacity. In order to practice her skill proficiency, she races against time. Every success is inseparable from the heroine's silent efforts. There are three gangs of heroes. The heroine's childhood has completely abandoned her since she entered Bauhinia like the heroine. ◔.̮◔✧? There is no follow-up description. Sometimes the friendship we have from childhood to adulthood is also very precious. When you are at the top of the list, you will also want someone to be by your side, not limited to family and friendship⁄(⁄⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄⁄)⁄Also, please update quickly [ANG][ANG] What a pity. The first 72 chapters are very exciting. From Chapter 73, when Fu invited the heroine to join the team, the inexplicable plot started. As peers, Gui is the same age. The heroine is a freshman and Fu is a student who is about to take the college entrance examination. Just to create a series of plots in the hive, the arrangement is not appropriate, learning to command or for... If you know Zhen Yu, you can have a hive command competition with your mentor, Director Fu Qing. Don't say that the high school student is better. He is just about to graduate and has not achieved any results at home or abroad. He is really unable to accept this part of the plot. I give four stars because the first 72 chapters are very exciting and worth that score. Come on, author, I will leave.
From the author's words, I felt the simplest feminism. There are no stereotyped descriptions of appearance and body shape, and there are no stereotyped female villains. The heroine and countless supporting heroines jointly create countless magnificent journeys and a world full of fantasy. Every female character has her own soul, which may be light, heavy, or chaotic. By opening up the force field of destiny, everyone may be able to create their own world. The cause and effect of fate is because the author gives them unique souls, and they meet and collide along the lines to create the grandeur that belongs to young people. The heroine Qi Ning is the first character that makes me feel that she has never changed throughout the whole series. She will be angry because the stars are extinguished, she will feel powerless because she is weak and incompetent, and she will be in pain because of the betrayal of the so-called rational balance. But these malicious intentions imposed by "fate" never broke her will or changed her beliefs for a moment. Destiny shuttles back and forth in the timeline, and she is always guarding the self that fulfills her ideals. Perhaps this is how the soul of the most primitive teenager, who has not been repeatedly cut by the established rules of society, bursts out with unlimited vitality called "rebellion", "unyielding" and "arrogance". If you have a grudge, take revenge. Our Ning is such a strong woman! I am very lucky to encounter such a shining soul in Tomato again and again. Thank you author.
It's easy to get into the book shortage. Growth + card making + academy competition The pace of growth is just right, and the overall reading experience is very relaxed. There is no slap-in-the-face and no nerve-wracking plot of humiliation. All plots serve growth. I feel like it would be a good group portrait book if it could deepen the plot of the companions. The heroine's single-line growth is currently a bit monotonous. If the plot continues in this direction, there will be a period of fatigue and boredom. The plot before the high school entrance examination has always been at a very comfortable pace. In the middle, I participated in an event and competition, and the timing was also very comfortable. Not long after entering high school, I went to compete again, and in Da Changzhang (40-61), I was the first in the female protagonist league to shine, save people and score points, and have some plots of the iron triangle of buying cards. After reading the first few chapters, I couldn't get enough of it, the plot was a bit tired. The content before this felt relaxed (the activity competition after the high school entrance examination was actually a bit tiring, but it was not so serious when it was inserted in sections). And the heroine's character portrayal feels not very obvious. For example, other books such as "Weak and Scheming", "High IQ Heroine", "Vicious Mouth and Soft Heart", "Trash Lies Flat", etc., Unknowingly made the characters deeply rooted in people's hearts while reading. Feel the feeling you want to create, but without any memory characteristics. For example, after seeing the latest chapter 65, my impression of the heroine is that of a growth-oriented heroine, which is gone. The plot keeps pushing the heroine to grow, but the heroine has no personality charm or character traits that make people remember her. Supported by his family, his shop goes smoothly, he is nurtured by his school, he is coaxed by his golden fingers, and he ranks first in the competition. Very relaxing but nothing memorable. Ps: The above only represents personal feelings. That's a long way to go. I wish your creative journey will be prosperous and you will achieve great success again!
I have read the third volume now, and this book is really well written. First of all, the female characters are highly praised, and the male-female ratio is very comfortable. For this reason, I will still buy it even if the plot is a mess (the plot is very good). Women in strong female channels must be strong. The setting is also very interesting. The setting of this card spirit is really good. It is like a cute creature. Every time I see it, I feel very good. The setting of this card is really cool! ! Every time the heroine uses it, I feel very visual, including some of the heroine's innovative operations, which are also very novel for me to watch. The female protagonist is so daring and the author is very motherly! ! (From what I've seen so far) Shuangwen player closes his eyes and enters! ! The plot is also very complete. In the early stage, it can be seen that the author has prepared the ground for the heroine. The heroine's own actions have also established the "Liver Emperor", and there are constant upgrades in the game. Including the scenes with the female supporting characters, they are not human-like. You can see the heroine's character from small things. The fighting scenes are also written with ease, showing the excitement of the fighting scenes. In fact, the competition is quite difficult to write, but the author handles each game well. From the plot point of view, through the advancement of the plot, the heroine has a certain say in the upgrade, and slowly leads to the main line of "creating a beautiful world". Including the foreshadowing in the early stage, the answers to the past and present in the following chapters, and the recovery of hidden clues, the overall plot is both letting go and picking up, so the plot is really complete! ! ! (The following is purely subjective) But there are also some things that make me feel very disconnected. For example, the heroine's baby does level up very quickly, but it makes me feel like a max-level boss has come to slaughter the novice village, which makes my teammates' upgrades feel unrealistic and not very exciting. The heroine just has special abilities. Being able to challenge people who are many years older than her when participating in a competition is very unbalanced for me. The heroine is really strong. She gave me a sense of déjà vu from the beginning. There is no threat on this road. Even if a full-level boss comes, I can still fight her. She doesn't look like a person from the beginning. From being an ordinary person with no special powers, through competitions, through the blessing of barrages, and through the praise of third parties, my stereotype has been deepened [crying]. This leads me to watch the female protagonist compete or encounter tasks. From the beginning, I know, "The female protagonist will not lose", "These people "It doesn't matter if she's very powerful or not, the heroine will challenge them every minute." "Huh? Should I be nervous for the heroine in this part, but I know she is invincible?" The heroine became "invincible" to me too early, leaving me completely incapable of participating in many of the exciting plots. And I think that in this world, the heroine is very vocal. It's not that she is unworthy or anything, but she has given me a feeling of attention since she was a child. She is indeed excellent and has the capital, but there must have been geniuses in the past. It gives me the feeling that the heroine is the only genius in this world. There was no talented person that could attract the attention of the public before. Only the emergence of a heroine suddenly made the general public pay attention to the fact that there is a genius. Although it was indeed written about the previous college entrance examination showdowns (?) In the early stage, others appeared, but later on I had no impression of them. Maybe it was to pave the way for the democratic election of the heroine as the commander-in-chief? But it gave me the feeling that the stakes were high from the beginning, so I took the attention the heroine received for granted, and thus ignored it, "Yes, the heroine has obviously done a lot, and she really deserves this reputation. She not only plays competitions but also has a shop. It should be normal to have such fame." All in all, the shortcomings of this article do not hide its beauty. I like it! ! Super female controller, don't miss it if you like the upgrade stream! ! !
After reading it, it's okay. There are some words about disobedience to women. The proportion of female characters is okay, but there are also quite a few male characters. It's still male-oriented, because it's the same author as the wardrobe book and Shu Huang has finished listening to it.
I like this type of novel very much, and the first volume is also very good. In Volume 2, the roommate's contract beast disappeared, and the roommate suspected that it was her mother. The heroine broke into the house of the roommate's mother (a relatively powerful person) at night without saying a word, and fought with her. The roommate's mother was defeated. The heroine and his roommate began to search the house, but nothing was found after searching all the places. The heroine wanted to She used her ability to see all the behavior of her roommate's mother within three days. The other party retorted, why should she look at her own privacy? The heroine forced it to find the contract beast, but she didn't see any clues. She saw some private scenes, which was a bit embarrassing, and then left without saying a word with her roommate. I want to say that this section is too nice and nice. The roommate's beast is lost. The heroine in the description is more anxious than the roommate. There is no previous description of how close they are to each other. Moreover, this part seems that the heroine is rude, and I can't stand it anymore.
There are many female characters, I am very satisfied, the content is also very enjoyable, and the author also realized that the seniors, boys and girls, but did not change them all, but this is not important, as long as the author can realize it, it is a good thing, which means that the next book will be better
There is no CP for strong women, all female characters are created online, the heroine upgrades and slaps in the face, the showdown in the arena is written passionately and smoothly, the growth line is complete and makes people cry, and the early stage is full of high energy. There were a lot of tears, especially the past life chapter, which was very touching. The heroine's family and friendship are described very well! The character design also stood up. The only pity is that I feel that the heroine becoming a god and returning to Venus to meet her family and friends should be the most perfect ending, but more than a hundred chapters were added later (it is about the affairs that the heroine has to deal with after becoming a god, and most of the chapters are about the story of the heroine in an interface related to time) It seems a bit procrastinating and redundant. After the happy reunion, it actually feels more like a side story. A long sequel dilutes the sense of satisfaction, leaving it a little unfinished and lacking in stamina. If you read too many novels, you will have an illusion or common problem, that is, the happy ending should be regarded as an extra story. Extra stories that are too long will make people less interested in reading. But I still respect the author, the writing is great ദ്ദി ˉ͈̀꒳ˉ͈́ )✧
It's pretty cool. There aren't those old clichés, the villain is provocative, the protagonist is selling her own copy of the card, and I feel like I'm at a loss. The main reason is that the author made other characters say that I took advantage, which makes me feel like I'm at a loss. I can obviously sell it for more money, but that's a loss of money [crying]. The writing is pretty good. [Adoration]
Looks good! It's evened. Woo hoo. I really like the plot in the Beehive: I like these sentences very much (minor spoilers) ---- "The value of life cannot be calculated. Commanders, in particular, must not regard individual sacrifice as an efficient option." "We only saw the competition for resources and the power of the alien species, but ignored the plight of the people in the scene. The art of command is not only about weighing the pros and cons, but also about protecting beliefs." (Good blessings only cost a small price.) ---- Boss, you must risk your life and sleep and food to update! !
I haven't watched much of it, and the setting is novel, but I feel like it's lacking in many places. It may be because of the heroine's invincibility and crushing style. As for the youth group competition I've watched so far, I feel particularly uncomfortable. When fighting the heroine, I couldn't feel the strength of the opponent or the heroine at all, and I didn't feel the passage of time in the chapters I read. As a result, I always felt that a big chunk was gone when I read it. I hope the fights can be written in more detail, and the heroine's superpowers. Why do you tell others about your detailed superpowers? You can talk about copying, but if you talk about it in detail, doesn't it reveal your trump card to others? Moreover, we have just met each other, and there are also card powers. Just tell me the name of the power. When talking about diamonds, someone with a brain will know that there will be clubs later. This is my feeling after watching these few. I will continue to watch, and there will be follow-up reviews.
What can I say? The plot setting is good. It was good until more than 60 chapters. Except for the occasional awkwardness and sudden passion, everything else was good. But then it started to go wrong. It escalated quickly. The first year of high school overwhelmed everyone in the high school. The overbearing president came back from the card-making style. The heroine's sudden emotion must be strong and confident. Too anxious. If the staged upgrades are well written, the plot develops step by step, and the details of the relationship between the characters are more than 8. Few points. It can be recommended as a hot recommendation. I am eager for results.
To quote the author Dada: "I saw many comments saying that the protagonist's path was too smooth and the story was too bland and lacked some twists and turns. But there is no way, I really don't want to let her suffer a little grievance, I don't want to let her go through those heart-rending hardships, so I can only let her grow up rapidly and shine all the way. Life is already full of too many regrets and inability to control oneself, too many things that cannot be achieved and powerlessness. So I want to give my heroine a preference in my writing and give her a happy ending. She is omnipotent, she is always strong, and she will never stop. She is brave and kind, resolute and gentle, and is what everyone yearns for. Well... That's what I yearn for anyway. "This is the heroine of this article! The strength of the heroine is the ideal type that I long for. She is beautiful. There is another point (added at 2026.07.24 02:02) "Women are of course the first" although it is not very accurate, but I think I can still express my thoughts!
In fact, it is good to watch. The heroine has a role, and there are some cool points. The overall plot framework is also very good. The plot is online. One star is deducted mainly because the writing is a bit immature, which still needs to grow. Moreover, in many places, there is a feeling of exaggerated words that are very similar to AI. I feel that the author is working hard to shape it, but he may not be able to come up with a name or an idea and just throw it to deep. Seek to make the transition, because I am very sensitive to the tone of deepseek's lover character, so I can't stand that part at all. I hope the author can make some improvements in this part. Sometimes there is no need to fill the whole book with exaggerated words. The accumulation of too many gorgeous words will reduce the desire to read the book. I look forward to the following stories [Sending Hearts]
It's very good, I feel like it shouldn't be rated 8.7. Some people say that the protagonist Goldfinger and the protagonist's halo are too powerful, but life is full of suffering and suffering. I really like watching this kind of movie. The author's character structure is very good, I really like all the characters in it
It's good-looking and good-looking. I'll praise it for having no CP. I'll praise it again if it's cool (◍>◡<◍). It's not a pure production but a concrete representation of the power in the background of the power. The background of the world is unique, and it's a relatively novel category in card writing. The shortcomings are probably that the descriptions of skills take up a lot of chapters, and the fact that the protagonist thinks that the BOOS skills that appear in the competition are what she knows based on the memory of the previous life of the game she participated in. The author does not explain why here, which makes me feel a little strange. It seems that the heroine is too conceited. Overall it's pretty good, I hope the author will make more updates.
It's a cool story with a fast pace of upgrades. The character design is a little lacking but the setting is cute. One question is why the pinyin is placed above the assessment brand and the fireworks above the championship winner as "title". Isn't the setting the best in China? The pinyin naming method is entirely because it is easier to introduce in the English system. Shouldn't the best people in China speak Chinese all over the world, or Chinese would look more gorgeous... Maybe the heroine was too young in the early stage, and she spoke and acted quite simply... I felt that the pace of the article was still a bit off. Let's see what happens later. Is the description okay, but the problem is that the characters are not alive and only the words show off their skills.
The heroine travels through time, cards, growth-type abilities and comprehensive abilities. The heroine just keeps upgrading her levels and upgrading her abilities. There is no mess. There is just a dead team to invite the heroine to join the team. Apart from those few chapters that I don't like to read, the heroine forms her own team.
The imagination is equal to the writing power, and the future is promising. I am quite optimistic about this author. Now that I see it, I think it's pretty good, the thinking is pretty good, and the worldview structure is quite successful. The writing is quite enjoyable, but the current writing style is indeed a big problem and is a bit immature. There are too many straightforward descriptions but not enough details. For example, the principal of the junior high school devalued himself for more than ten years for a dream [face covering]. It should have been a very bright setting, but in the end the bright spot was not written. There are too many people here who use similar and superficial methods of describing their thinking and logic, which makes the character creation appear to be rough. Also, there is no tension in the battle scenes at the moment... I will continue to see if it gets better in the future. If it does, I will give it a five-star rating.
It's okay, the plot is smooth, and it's quite enjoyable to read. I just feel that the world of this book is full of women, and there are few male important characters. They are all women. It looks almost weird like some novels where they are all men and there are not many women. If it weren't for the novel plot, I really can't stand it. Overall, it's great. Come on, author [Love]
It's a cool story. The heroine doesn't have any hidden talents (she has a special skill), and her leveling up is not too slow (it's written that she practices abilities that gain a lot of experience), and it's pretty smooth. There's nothing bad about me being scolded like a lump in my throat and feeling like I'm sitting on pins and needles. The tension between being a commoner and a son of a family and a son of capital has not been written yet. Especially in the early stage, the scumbag father divorced and became a son-in-law. There is no mention of the entanglement (good review, capital who thinks highly of himself will not be distracted, the heroine only worries about his own strength, and a society that values strength will clear the way for the strong)
Beautiful and novel. (The following is my personal experience) Personally, I prefer the feeling at the beginning. Of course, I don't mean to say that it's bad later. I like the feeling at the beginning because I personally think the character of the heroine is cold, aloof, mature and powerful. The feeling at first was a very friendly and novel feeling, but then the feeling disappeared from the first time the heroine went back in time. After that, it felt very sophisticated and very web-like. Doesn't web-writing mean a bad thing, but a sense of copying similar to similar novels? I can't describe the feeling. Perhaps the author had studied other similar works during that time, so he had this sense of replication and sophistication. It just feels a bit faded at the beginning, but it still looks great, keep up the good work! We are all trying to become more sophisticated, more nimble, and more diverse in order to live a better life, but sometimes we forget the original youth and innocence.
After reading it, I felt a little bit reluctant to give up. This work has shortcomings but the advantages are even greater. I don't understand why the score is so low. Is it because the card type is not popular? The author's writing style is okay, but the handling of the characters' emotions is not deep enough, but it can still be seen that Da Da has devoted a lot to this book. What I like the most is that the plot is novel and not cliché, and many of the twists are really surprising. The author perfectly explains this for a female-driven novel about strong women. I enjoyed watching many outstanding female characters, and there is no plot to charm men. Seeing that many people are dissatisfied with the heroine having many golden fingers? My suggestion is to read it before speaking. Maybe the author is not good enough, and some parts of the connection {only a little} are not natural enough, but it is already great, author, come on! I like the heroine Ning Ning very much. I can feel the author's love for the heroine's baby. I believe more people will like her.