Elf: I, the League Champion, Am Not Doing Anything Serious.

Nice! Love watching! Write more! Although I don't know much about Pokémon, it still looks very interesting. The author's writing is very clear and easy to understand, and the overall language is very brisk. However, some of the previous descriptions are a bit complicated and can be deleted, so don't secretly make up the word count! ! !

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking!

It's okay, the quality is above average, not too toxic, just generally refreshing. The plot is okay now, mainly because there are no explosive points

In the end of the blind guessing game, Zhang Xingyao still died. The protagonist relied on the system to travel back to the past, and finally changed everything. Lu Yu no longer needed to be like that, and finally had a harmonious and happy ending. Moreover, the protagonist actually knows Lu Yu's actions, and everything is done to achieve the final goal. At the same time, he knows that we exist and that we are watching the story and just acting it out.

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

Good looking, good looking, good looking😄

The content of this article will definitely make you laugh and not be able to stop. I just feel that a certain water type king is so pitiful, even more pitiful than Wu Song.

I read this book when I was still in my previous life. Come on, keep working hard and hope it will sell well [laughing]

How come this plot is so similar to the human emperor Jiang Li, especially the commentary section, I can't say it's similar, it's exactly the same. Bai Yeling is Bai Hongtu?

To be honest, it's pretty good. I've read some, starting with the finished novel, and then reading the novel "The King of Rocks". Until now, there's only one novel that I think is pretty good.

It is considered to be the best Pokémon novel I have read recently. It breaks through the description of numerical values ​​and is more like an anime. The battle scenes are stronger and impactful. There is also enough humor to highlight the author's ability. I hope the author will update it hard. [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

The plot is very good, and the writing is very brisk and will not be difficult to understand. It is a pity that there are no Pokémon pictures. It's a little bit more refreshing. Every time the protagonist completes a task, an event happens. It feels like the protagonist will get into trouble wherever he goes. If you want to write a funny story, the frequency of events should be less. Personally, I don't like the emotional line. If you write a funny story, the emotional line can easily become a poisonous point, and you still can't decide on a single female protagonist.

Can it be faster? This is enough for anyone to see, and those who don't know think they look down on it [Cool]

This book is well written, but the author is too slow and the data is not very good. It is suitable for those who like to read books. Those who are older need to read it. It is basically non-toxic and looks very comfortable.

The storyline is interesting and interesting, very interesting to watch

It's really beautiful, the author should work hard! (I would like to ask, is there a female protagonist?)

Very nice, I like it very much

It looks good, but I suggest the author add a rating at the top of the introduction. Otherwise, most people won't want to read it until they reach 6:00. [Blow a kiss]

Come on! It's just a bit short, I hope the author evolves! ! !

Good-looking, love to watch, the hope of Pokémon

It fits the feeling of Pokémon very well, and the characters are not broken either.

A very good Pokémon novel

One thing to say, I can see that the author's writing style is a bit green, but I have to say that there is indeed fun in daily life. Since there is fun, then the writing style is not important [laughs]

So far, it's okay, author, cheers

It's awesome, the plot is awesome, the author is awesome, the readers are awesome, I'm awesome too [Like][Like][Like]

Very nice! It fits my fantasy of traveling into the world of Pokémon.

Short and concise, the author has other advantages besides being short.

Pretty good, quite generous

Slight flaws, you can see

Very beautiful and worth recommending