The Mysterious World: Barbarians Roam the Sky

It's a potential masterpiece. It can combine darkness and the weird world with great imagination. The writing is good, but it feels a bit slow. If it doesn't fall apart in the later stage, it will hopefully become a god.

Very nice. The writing is plain but the narrative is clear. The setting of the book is very stable. If you keep writing like this. Undoubtedly the best of its kind in Tomato. I hope the author stays calm. Write in a familiar setting. First it was Dark, then Uncle Jiu. Very good. Relying on mature and stable works, as long as the author does not mess around, it will not overturn. If you want to change to a higher map. Tsui Hark's A Chinese Ghost Story is a very good base.

The author writes well [Like]

It's nice to read, but the author's comments and replies are like a human machine.

Barbarians fight Eastern monsters, a very new theme!

It's an interesting combination. It's different from the common world travel. Since the protagonist is an ancient person, it's easier to integrate into other worlds. This writing method increases the realism of the world while reducing the sense of substitution.

It's a pity that this is an aborigine. It would be great if it was a time traveler. A time traveler should be able to know which world he is traveling through and be better able to plan the opportunities in that world. Unlike the aborigines, they can only eat the resources that are brought to their mouths. It's so uncomfortable to watch. Why is the protagonist not a time traveler? I'm worried for him. He can't get many opportunities. If he is a time traveler, he can't be a disciple of Mao Shan and coerce other people. There are always low-end control techniques. After controlling this zombie, it is now the Republic of China. The protagonist is physically strong and not afraid of bullets. He can kill some Japanese casually, cultivate them with blood essence, and then return to his main world. Isn't he a good helper? Or take him to travel to the God of Darkness to absorb the blood of the corpse inside. Isn't that a good helper, and he doesn't know how to adapt at all? Or can't he exchange this zombie with the four-eyed Taoist Priest for other spells? Mao Shan, the psychic zombie, will definitely be willing to spend a lot of money to buy it. If not, even if he can't buy the corpse-raising technique, he can find money to open it. Or hire him, all of which can use the prophet's plot factors to gain benefits

So far, the book is still very interesting and exciting.

It looks good. If you like it, please continue to update. How can I say that the protagonist is neither a time traveler nor a modern double time travel, but actually an ancient native double time travel? It depends on how the author explains the protagonist's time travel to understand whether it is the world's self-rescue or other reasons.

I feel like I can write pretty well, I just hope it gets better and better in the future. Saw 78

It looks good, I love reading it. If you don't believe it, please check how long I read it.

The writing is quite good, the theme made me feel very novel, and the content is also very good, but at the end I felt that the wizard's power was too unexplainable, making the battle slowly become boring, but overall it is a good book

It's very imaginative and exciting, with some minor flaws, but the author handled it well. The writing is average, each world is handled well, and the development speed is well controlled. It is neither invincible nor overpowered. Forage

Why should we stick to the Dark Land?

Okay, okay, come on, author!

Good potential, currently non-toxic

Good looking, decisive in killing.

Really good, beyond expectation

It's quite interesting. It has a western fantasy feel, but your time travel is a bit abrupt.

It feels okay, but is the combat power span too large? It's still Warhammer 40k. Aren't you afraid of being targeted by the Four Vendors?

Come on, author! What I wrote above is wonderful.

It's absolutely fine. It's considered a high-quality book, so you can give it a look.

This book has great potential, The author continues to work hard Five-star praise.

Rare source of information, logical and fluent writing

The plot is exciting and the writing is smooth, not bad.

Well, I like to watch characters from various movies, TV shows and comics collide with each other.

If you are tired of watching modern time travel, it would be good to watch aboriginal time travel. The plot is good, come on

This book is quite nice

It's very interesting, good luck to the author

The plot concept is wonderful.