HP: Kiss Me at the Edge of the Abyss

Nice! Edmund must be 1 😫

The writing is better, as long as you get through the first and middle stages. The punctuation mark "!" Is used too frequently, almost in every sentence. When describing Mr. Sri Lanka, he almost always has a "black robe rolling". When he went to work as an assistant to Mr. Sri Lanka, he kept describing Edmund's machine-like approach, which would be more uncomfortable. In summary, there are some places where punctuation marks and words describing characters are used too frequently, but it is not a big deal. Overall, it's good. The character design is not OOC. The protagonist's character really pokes me. He is slow to get along with Sri Lanka and his personality is not that kind of sunshine. In the early stage, he didn't trust relationships very much and felt that relationships were a burden, but he gradually understood it later. I also enjoyed reading the ggad part. It is the only one among the Professor Snape fanfics that I can keep reading. Also, the author needs to update it quickly!!!

The writing is very good and the character of the protagonist is also very good. There is basically no OOC and then asking who is on top and who is off [currently working on draft] [currently working on draft] 😘

Good-looking, the protagonist has a distinct personality Si Youwen, the emotional line is too slow (ꐦ ´͈ ᗨ `͈ ) Please update, I haven't seen enough It's only the first year of school now (when will I be able to eat good food?)

In just the first few chapters, the protagonist's character portrayal is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. He is the kind of powerful, ambitious, and situation-aware protagonist that I like 😳❤️ I look forward to the development of the story and the author will provide more updates 💕

The writing style and refreshing feeling of this book are really amazing, especially the part about swallowing the system. Shuang Fei originally thought it would be a similar system book, but he didn't expect that it was the first time he read this kind of setting!!! I must update it all!!! 🥰

The writing is very good. What this author wrote was truly written with the true wisdom of each character in the Harry Potter series. Every action is unnecessary. Write out the essence of the character. The original image of the character is not weakened or beautified. The original image of this person is written out. Putting the classmate here does not seem superfluous, as if he was originally here. The writing is very good. Logical and rigorous.

Again, best wishes. The protagonist has a vivid character. I hope that even if he is aware of his feelings, he will face them head-on. He will still be an existence that is not blocked, is still an existence that is not troubled, and is still an existence that is not afraid. Fear is human instinct, and courage is the hymn of human beings. There is no dead end at the feet of a brave man, but there are cliffs in front of a coward. He is the author's biggest protagonist, and also his own protagonist [sending my heart][please give more updates][please give more updates]

To be honest, this is the first time I have seen such an amazing article. The pace of the article is very comfortable, and the character control is also very precise, without feeling OOC at all. The quotation design at the beginning of each chapter is also eye-catching. All in all it's well worth a look! (The author will update more, it's not enough to read)

When I saw it, I thought it was pretty good. I don't know what will happen next, but now I think it is a well-written and beautiful book. As for this book, I think you can give it a try and ignore other people's comments. What you feel is best is the best. As the saying goes - taste, you have to taste it to know if it's salty or bland. What others say is their subjective imagination, which is a combination of some subjective prejudices and their own language modifications. This statement can be applied to any article. #Want to be by your side, Severus