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Nice! Edmund must be 1 [crazy]

The writing is better, as long as you get through the first and middle stages. The punctuation mark "!" Is used too frequently, almost in every sentence. When describing Mr. Sri Lanka, he almost always has a "black robe rolling". When he went to work as an assistant to Mr. Sri Lanka, he kept describing Edmund's machine-like approach, which would be more uncomfortable. In summary, there are some places where punctuation marks and words describing characters are used too frequently, but it is not a big deal. Overall, it's good. The character design is not OOC. The protagonist's character really pokes me. He is slow to get along with Sri Lanka and his personality is not that kind of sunshine. In the early stage, he didn't trust relationships very much and felt that relationships were a burden, but he gradually understood it later. I also enjoyed reading the ggad part. It is the only one among the Professor Snape fanfics that I can keep reading. Also, the author needs to update it quickly!!!

The writing is very good and the character of the protagonist is also very good. There is basically no OOC and then asking who is on top and who is off [currently working on draft] [currently working on draft] [blowing kiss]

Good-looking, the protagonist has a distinct personality Si Youwen, the emotional line is too slow (ꐦ ´͈ ᗨ `͈ ) Please update, I haven't seen enough It's only the first year of school now (when will I be able to eat good food?)

In just the first few chapters, the protagonist's character portrayal is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. He is the kind of powerful, ambitious, and situation-aware protagonist that I like [Shy][Love] I look forward to the development of the story and the author will provide more updates [Sending Hearts]

The writing is very good. What this author wrote was truly written with the true wisdom of each character in the Harry Potter series. Every action is unnecessary. Write out the essence of the character. The original image of the character is not weakened or beautified. The original image of this person is written out. Putting the classmate here does not seem superfluous, as if he was originally here. The writing is very good. Logical and rigorous.

The writing style and refreshing feeling of this book are really amazing, especially the part about swallowing the system. Shuang Fei originally thought it would be a similar system book, but he didn't expect that it was the first time he read this kind of setting! ! ! I must update it all! ! ! [Adoration]

To be honest, this is the first time I have seen such an amazing article. The pace of the article is very comfortable, and the character control is also very precise, without feeling OOC at all. The quotation design at the beginning of each chapter is also eye-catching. All in all it's well worth a look! (The author will update more, it's not enough to read)

Again, best wishes. The protagonist has a vivid character. I hope that even if he is aware of his feelings, he will face them head-on. He will still be an existence that is not blocked, is still an existence that is not troubled, and is still an existence that is not afraid. Fear is human instinct, and courage is the hymn of human beings. There is no dead end at the feet of a brave man, but there are cliffs in front of a coward. He is the author's biggest protagonist, and also his own protagonist [sending my heart][please give more updates][please give more updates]

Nice! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] But there are too few, the author will update more [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] To review, up to now, the characterization is basically not OOC. The protagonist's character is clear and charming, and the character is very interesting. The writing style makes the reader immersed in the situation, very delicate, and the more I read, the more interesting it is. It is very refreshing and can be absorbed, and the IQ is the whole process. Online, the rhythm is sharp, the protagonist is strong and ambitious, and he assesses the situation, etc. However, I lack language and cannot describe it in many words. It is just very interesting and worth watching. I sincerely recommend it. I hope the author will write more interesting plots and more and more people will watch it. The literary talent is very beautiful, the writing style is very delicate, and it is really worth it.

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, too little is not enough, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Out-going-from-in-from there out there out out out of the way (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ)

When I saw it, I thought it was pretty good. I don't know what will happen next, but now I think it is a well-written and beautiful book. As for this book, I think you can give it a try and ignore other people's comments. What you feel is best is the best. As the saying goes - taste, you have to taste it to know if it's salty or bland. What others say is their subjective imagination, which is a combination of some subjective prejudices and their own language modifications. This statement can be applied to any article. #Want to be by your side, Severus

I like it so much, cheers for the author!

Very interesting. The content is also very good. I hope the protagonist is 1

God, how long has it been since I gave it a five-star rating? I don't remember it myself, and I haven't finished reading it yet, but I can't wait to give it a five-star rating. The decisiveness of this writing style really makes readers feel immersed in the situation and bring their own emotions. This is definitely a good book! How could I meet a chef who writes so well! Lucky for three lives

I can't help it! It's so fragrant—it's not tied but it's really exciting. It's a brainy insider. Of course, I really like the summary of each chapter. Xiangxiang (it's just because of Nott, so it's a bit strange not to have Nott. Will there be a link about Xiaoduo and the protagonist in the follow-up) Fire Tongs Liu Ming (Start the meal!!

Holy shit, holy shit, holy shit, it's super beautiful and touching, and the author's writing is very good. I can't stand other fanfics now. Does the author dare to update 100 chapters? It scares me to death [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

There were so many exclamation points in the early stages that it was a bit torturous, and the protagonist had an inexplicable sense of man and machine. Personally, I didn't think Teacher Si had a bad temper, and there were too many descriptions of him being angry. Other places are pretty good

Well, yes, even though I only watched a little bit, I personally think it's really good\(//∇//)\ How to say it? Although I only read the previous ones, I can clearly see from the first few pictures that the protagonist is very carefully written and the person is very thoughtful. I just feel that it is very special and I can't describe it. Anyway, I personally like it very much.

How come I tied it in one breath [almost crying]

The author wrote very profound things in many places, which made me stunned one at a time [laughing and crying] Well... Who made me fail the Potions class? [Working on draft]

I look forward to their subsequent stories, to the clenched wrist bones and searing kisses under the abyss in the future, to the unexpected fall and rush, domination and control, surrender and sacrifice.

I have followed it until now, and I think it is really interesting to follow, and the writing style of Dada is really very good. I really love Dada. The beginning is a summary or a famous quote. I think the writing style of Dada is really good. I really like it very much. Most of them are for love. , This is an inspiration that can be written so well, it's already very good, very good, don't give up Da Da Da, it's okay, it's okay, you can write slowly, that is, wait a little longer, although I really want to watch the back, Da Da must also have a good rest (o^^o) [Blow kiss] [Flow kiss] [Blow kiss]

The black dragon hiding under the undercurrent

The protagonist's character is pretty solid [laughs] Cold and reassuring(●'◡'●)

It is different from other HP fans. It has a very special concept. The protagonist's character is also unique. It is different from other Slytherins I have seen. I highly recommend [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]

The writing is good, the characters are well created, the characters are not directly pointed out, and typical examples are used [Like]

So far so good! Currently, I am still focusing on the career line, and I can't imagine how a male protagonist with a human-machine sense can start a relationship line [Thinking] Looking forward to it ~

The current update is 39 and I see 39, which is not bad and worth reading.

Wuhu, I met another book I like to read [Adoration]