Western Fantasy+Pseudo System+Abusive Lord+Strong Female+Second Dimension
Once upon a time, I also dreamed of writing a travel diary recording flowers and beautiful scenery.
Until that "Unreasonable Overtime Notice" stuck with me.
From then on, my journey was no longer idyllic, only bloody death notices and cruel choices.
Save people? Can. The price is, you will lose one "thing".
"Congratulations, you have obtained the permanent Debuff: Taste Deprivation." "Congratulations, you have unlocked a new achievement: The World Fade." "Congratulations, you have achieved the hidden condition: the social function is permanently offline."
My companions will forget me, my best friends will betray me, and even the wild flowers on the roadside will wither because of me.
I, Lilith, a witch living in a bug. But it doesn't matter, as long as the moaning in my heart is louder than the moaning the world inflicts on me, I haven't lost yet.
——This is the story of a girl who was cursed by the world, who used her own way to stab this unreasonable world in the back.
Reader comments
A fairy tale, and a hero.
Heraclitus said: "A person's character is his destiny." When a girl is forced to embark on a journey because of a book that can predict disasters, the hero's character destined her to embark on a heroic journey. This is destined to be a bitter journey. To save others, you must endure the pain yourself. As a result, pouring out goodwill will be rewarded with malice, but so what, since so many curses have been imposed on oneself during this bitter journey, it doesn't hurt to have one more. When suffering the curse of cause and effect has become a daily routine, there is only one goal - to strangle the throat of disaster.
Book of Disaster Observation
Give a vision beyond fate and the right to change tragedy
Curse is the explanation of cause and effect, and magical reward comes from the repercussions of tragedy.
The most victorious tragedy in three days, the torture of three days' long sleeves, those who are capable and virtuous will take chestnuts from the fire and bear the pain of being in the flames.
Intended to reshape the tragedy brought about by suffering, it is the most suitable prop for this stage. It is better than the sword of the greedy, stronger than the lane changer in front of the train problem, and is the cross of the saint.
The above is my understanding like a rotten apple.
A small question, if the holder himself is the cause of the tragedy, what will be the outcome? How will it react?
The subject matter is pretty good, although there are some flaws in the setting and character details, but I don't want to talk about that today.
As we all know, when a certain aspect of sensation weakens and disappears, other perceptions will become more sensitive, so I just need to work hard to turn the protagonist into a star before her sense of touch disappears (wait, what am I talking about). What a perverted idea, I must have been contaminated (sad
Come on, author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
Also, just reading the previous paragraph didn't feel like a system article. I almost didn't click in when I saw the system label. Fortunately, I came in and took a second look [smile][smile]
It's pretty good, but I feel like I missed a few chapters [face covering]
Author, is Liliran too miserable? I hope some loopholes can be exploited later.
Did I miss something? It looked weird after I rescued the deer.
Although I don't really want to downplay it, I really hope you pick up what you wrote. At the end of Chapter 44, the protagonist drank the medicine prepared by Lina and fell asleep. In the next chapter, Chapter 45, the protagonist woke up in the hotel of the Court of the Sun. The curse was suppressed by the environment. The connection with the previous chapter was just a paragraph, which was probably "After the protagonist woke up, he hid in Tibet with Lina and sold various things to settle in the hotel here." However, I never saw Lina again...
Then Silas suddenly pops up and claims to have attacked the protagonist. In Chapter 47, an organization from the Alliance of the Unknown suddenly pops up. The protagonist suddenly takes out the cloak of silence provided by the Alliance of the Unknown and made by a previous interventionist. Of course, I don't know what this interventionist is or where he came from...
Do you want to take a look at what you are writing (
Chapters 44 and 45 felt like they were skipping a beat, and the cloak of some previous generation "interferer" suddenly appeared later. When?
And Silas, the League of the Unknown
I didn't expect it to be the first one. As the first person, I hope it can give the author some encouragement.
Lilith is so miserable, it's painful to watch😔
I like the process of the protagonist gradually growing up o(＊＾▽＾＊)o♪
Come on, the writing is good
The writing is really good, but who will save the protagonist?
It's very interesting. Kudos to the author.
A very interesting plot, so in the end is it HE or BE? Also, does the protagonist have to resist the curse all the way to the end? And does the protagonist still have to deal with the bug and neutralize the curse? [Think]
Come on, that's why the voice of lies turns into the voice of truth at the front.
I feel that removing the emotions is not enough to torture me. I should amplify my senses and negative emotions to better feel the pain [smile][smile][smile]
A fairy tale, and a hero. Heraclitus said: "A person's character is his destiny." When a girl is forced to embark on a journey because of a book that can predict disasters, the hero's character destined her to embark on a heroic journey. This is destined to be a bitter journey. To save others, you must endure the pain yourself. As a result, pouring out goodwill will be rewarded with malice, but so what, since so many curses have been imposed on oneself during this bitter journey, it doesn't hurt to have one more. When suffering the curse of cause and effect has become a daily routine, there is only one goal - to strangle the throat of disaster.
Book of Disaster Observation Give a vision beyond fate and the right to change tragedy Curse is the explanation of cause and effect, and magical reward comes from the repercussions of tragedy. The most victorious tragedy in three days, the torture of three days' long sleeves, those who are capable and virtuous will take chestnuts from the fire and bear the pain of being in the flames. Intended to reshape the tragedy brought about by suffering, it is the most suitable prop for this stage. It is better than the sword of the greedy, stronger than the lane changer in front of the train problem, and is the cross of the saint. The above is my understanding like a rotten apple. A small question, if the holder himself is the cause of the tragedy, what will be the outcome? How will it react?
The subject matter is pretty good, although there are some flaws in the setting and character details, but I don't want to talk about that today. As we all know, when a certain aspect of sensation weakens and disappears, other perceptions will become more sensitive, so I just need to work hard to turn the protagonist into a star before her sense of touch disappears (wait, what am I talking about). What a perverted idea, I must have been contaminated (sad
Come on, author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] Also, just reading the previous paragraph didn't feel like a system article. I almost didn't click in when I saw the system label. Fortunately, I came in and took a second look [smile][smile]
It's pretty good, but I feel like I missed a few chapters [face covering]
Author, is Liliran too miserable? I hope some loopholes can be exploited later.
Did I miss something? It looked weird after I rescued the deer. Although I don't really want to downplay it, I really hope you pick up what you wrote. At the end of Chapter 44, the protagonist drank the medicine prepared by Lina and fell asleep. In the next chapter, Chapter 45, the protagonist woke up in the hotel of the Court of the Sun. The curse was suppressed by the environment. The connection with the previous chapter was just a paragraph, which was probably "After the protagonist woke up, he hid in Tibet with Lina and sold various things to settle in the hotel here." However, I never saw Lina again... Then Silas suddenly pops up and claims to have attacked the protagonist. In Chapter 47, an organization from the Alliance of the Unknown suddenly pops up. The protagonist suddenly takes out the cloak of silence provided by the Alliance of the Unknown and made by a previous interventionist. Of course, I don't know what this interventionist is or where he came from... Do you want to take a look at what you are writing (
Chapters 44 and 45 felt like they were skipping a beat, and the cloak of some previous generation "interferer" suddenly appeared later. When? And Silas, the League of the Unknown
I didn't expect it to be the first one. As the first person, I hope it can give the author some encouragement.
Lilith is so miserable, it's painful to watch😔
I like the process of the protagonist gradually growing up o(＊＾▽＾＊)o♪
Come on, the writing is good The writing is really good, but who will save the protagonist?
It's very interesting. Kudos to the author.
A very interesting plot, so in the end is it HE or BE? Also, does the protagonist have to resist the curse all the way to the end? And does the protagonist still have to deal with the bug and neutralize the curse? [Think]
Come on, that's why the voice of lies turns into the voice of truth at the front.
I feel that removing the emotions is not enough to torture me. I should amplify my senses and negative emotions to better feel the pain [smile][smile][smile]