I was forced to write this because I lost a bet. I'm sorry if it's not good.
The protagonist is the little fish next to Lu named Lin (female). The model is Ama-11. Kelsey's sister had a knife in the early stage and later told the main line #occapology#privateapology
Reader comments
First, let's do some objective evaluation, from my personal perspective of course.
First of all, overall, em... I feel that the content of the first chapter is better. As for the following content... The author seems to have a feeling of "water". For example, there is no need to divide the two parts of daily life and Misha into so many chapters. It can be divided into almost one or two chapters. There is really no need to divide it into so many chapters. My stupid little author [smile][smile][smile]
There is also the issue of word count. The author should really consider adding more words. After all, you write so many chapters and one chapter only has 1,000 words, which is really not enough to read. Moreover, the pace of writing so many chapters is too slow and it is difficult for people to read it! ! ! [Cover face][cover face][cover face]
So I hope the author can get rid of the two major shortcomings of this book, and give a five-star support to the author [Like][Like][Like][Like]
Ha? What is manuscript depositing? Can you eat it? Is it delicious? Meow?
Ha~ Why are you holding a red rope? Don't come here, meow, what are you going to do... You can't do this to me, meow... Ha~
Huh? Do you want to play games with me? Is this so? Meow. Sorry meow~
Why are you wrapping a rope around me?
(Surprise!) Why can't I get up from the stool? Meow!
What are you laughing at, meow! So scary meow! Bad guy meow!
Why did you leave behind your notebook and pen? Meow! Don't go away, meow.
It's a must-have if it's good-looking.
It's pretty good-looking, but when I cut the knife, there was a bit of water in it. At the same time, the timeline was okay, but it felt a bit fast, but overall it looked good. Come on, keep updating.
First, let's do some objective evaluation, from my personal perspective of course. First of all, overall, em... I feel that the content of the first chapter is better. As for the following content... The author seems to have a feeling of "water". For example, there is no need to divide the two parts of daily life and Misha into so many chapters. It can be divided into almost one or two chapters. There is really no need to divide it into so many chapters. My stupid little author [smile][smile][smile] There is also the issue of word count. The author should really consider adding more words. After all, you write so many chapters and one chapter only has 1,000 words, which is really not enough to read. Moreover, the pace of writing so many chapters is too slow and it is difficult for people to read it! ! ! [Cover face][cover face][cover face] So I hope the author can get rid of the two major shortcomings of this book, and give a five-star support to the author [Like][Like][Like][Like]
Ha? What is manuscript depositing? Can you eat it? Is it delicious? Meow? Ha~ Why are you holding a red rope? Don't come here, meow, what are you going to do... You can't do this to me, meow... Ha~ Huh? Do you want to play games with me? Is this so? Meow. Sorry meow~ Why are you wrapping a rope around me? (Surprise!) Why can't I get up from the stool? Meow! What are you laughing at, meow! So scary meow! Bad guy meow! Why did you leave behind your notebook and pen? Meow! Don't go away, meow.
It's a must-have if it's good-looking.
It's pretty good-looking, but when I cut the knife, there was a bit of water in it. At the same time, the timeline was okay, but it felt a bit fast, but overall it looked good. Come on, keep updating.