Hug Junior Sister's Thigh, and Let Dad Break His Bones and Ashes After Repaying the Debt

In the book review, the author himself said that he failed to control the word count in the first volume. For example, the part about Liu/He's past that is related to the main plot is not as much as the supporting characters' jokes in the previous chapters. It must be that he realized the word count problem and could only push the main plot quickly. There is really nothing we can do in the fast food culture. Although the daily routine is good, the hot spots are too far apart. If you add the wait for updates, at least for me personally, I really can't stay here. I hope the author will deal with it later and optimize it as he said. The plot outline and writing style in Tomato are indeed very good.

I've finished reading it. The writing is very good. There are so many adjectives and metaphors that I'm not used to them (I'm not very good at eating tomatoes) [face covering]. The plot is also very good, but there are too many supporting roles. There is no need to write a lot of plot for each supporting role. I feel that the plot is a bit delayed. [Make faces]

I will bring you wonderful stories

The brushwork is sophisticated, meticulous and very beautiful. Five-star praise is given.

The writing is smooth, the plot is twists and turns, the story is exciting, and the characters are vividly drawn. A little bit over the top

The logic is clear and reasonable, and the content is exciting. I also want a junior sister like this

Gripping, straightforward and not to be missed. Looks good, give it a try

It's great to watch. The character of the male protagonist makes people feel comfortable. The descriptions of different characters in the article are also very distinctive. I love it.

If you want to live a decent life, you must hug your thighs as early as possible. Looks good, give it a try!

As an old bookworm, I really like this novel Wonderful novel, very readable

I sincerely recommend it, the relationship is in place, it seems to be very satisfying so far, and I look forward to the follow-up [please update]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Good writing and rigorous logic It's pretty good to watch, and it's okay to kill decisively, but I hope the male protagonist won't be too contrasting, otherwise it will sound like a domineering female lead and a spoiled wife.

This is so pretty, right? The plot develops with ups and downs and is wonderful

I don't see any obvious poisonous points so far. The characters' emotional descriptions are delicate and have their own characteristics.

The writing is good, there is nothing nasty to complain about, it is a classic article about cultivating immortals. I don't know why there are so few readers. Maybe most people in Tomato like cool articles?

The plot is compact and natural, rich in content, and beautiful to watch Come on, great writing

Good luck to the author. It's so well written. I love reading it. It's a novel I love to read, it's very good

I like the character design of the protagonist who kills decisively, it is very touching. Wonderful plot, worth watching.

A good novel. The more I read it, the more I like it. It's great. Well written, I love reading it

The characters' personalities are vivid and vivid, each with its own merits. The novel is well written, and the junior sister is very interesting.

The author has precise control over the rhythm of the book, creating a wonderful artistic conception that touches the soul. The characters are flesh and blood and beautiful.

The author's writing style is smooth, his emotions are delicate and full, and he has a strong sense of empathy. The storyline is compact and the content is gripping.

The writing is excellent and the work is amazing and beautiful. I give it a thumbs up. The plot is well constructed and compact

The writing is beautiful and smooth, the plot arrangement is unique and original. The plot is surprisingly good

The writing is pretty good

Very nice book

The writing is very good and the characters are delicately drawn [like]

Good, good, good, very good, very good, very good, good, good Also, since when did this book become so popular? Just kick me. If it becomes popular, I will be a veteran [cool]

I haven't seen such an interesting novel in a long time. It's really well written. I love reading it.