Otto Starts Harmoniously, and Beria Becomes Sworn Brother

When you look at the protagonist, you become a local, and you feel like you don't know anything.

Dear author, I like to read embarrassing stories. Can you update it more? I think it's quite interesting, so I'll write more to the author. My requirements are not high, 100 chapters a day is enough, and each chapter only needs 4,000 words. I believe the author will definitely agree (ᐡ ɞ̴̶̷ . ɞ̴̶̷ ᐡ) I feel like this author is a bit lazy and the updates are a bit sparse. The author is great, can he update more? 100 Chapters is a bit much, so let's just do 50 chapters a day.

Haokang, by the way, author, since the historical trajectory of Belial has been changed, Zero must grow up, which means that if you want to obtain Plasma Spark Slash and other forms, you must defeat Belial, but Belial has not darkened, so author, how would you write this plot? After reading some book reviews, I would like to give the author some suggestions so as not to become a negative teaching material for complaining about tokusatsu fanfiction videos. , The first point is that many people reacted to the fact that the protagonist's way of transferring energy is to cut his arms. Even if it was changed later, the early poisonous point of saving Leo's mother in the early stage can easily make readers unable to stand this chapter and just quit. There is still time to change this small poisonous point and the chapters related to this method again, even if it is not. If you have time to write a new chapter, you still have to change it, otherwise it will be easy to lose readers. The second point is the problem of the heroine. I saw someone wanted you to write the protagonist and accept Mary, Camila and Megumi. Not to mention Mary and Megumi are already wives. Except for people with special hobbies, there shouldn't be a normal man who likes second-hand cars, right? Then let's talk about Camilla. The portrayal of Camilla in the stage play and the unpopular fan comic Dark Evil Hero is quite full, and she is still nostalgic for Tiga. In the stage play of Tiga Tliga, she and Tiga are completely like an old married couple. It's ooc, and Carmilla is the same as those fan fiction characters that write Carmilla as the heroine are still ooc. The portrayal of Dekai TV and the stage play is completely pathological. In the stage play, Triga and Triga are yanderes and finally get along with the person they like. The relationship between the newlyweds will not be liked because the character creation surpasses Triga. That person, so the heroine can be Linglan and Gerry Qiao. There is no CP in the Austrian series (and Beria's CP can be Lily from the comic Dark Evil Hero. Geed's birth time should still be in the time in the original drama or after Zero's fight. If he appears, it can be arranged that Belia accidentally wears it when the little golden man and Belia fight. The universe he crossed over to and then met Lily just like the original plot ended at the end of Eddie TV, which just happened to explain how the protagonist came to the world of the Three Heroes. The protagonist and Beria fought the Little Golden Man, and the protagonist stole the Golden Man's ability to travel through time.) The third point is not to create huge poisonous points in the subsequent novels. I am looking forward to this novel and hope to be seen.

The author's writing is quite interesting. I want to ask when the heroine appears. Why don't you accept Ma Li? And the middleman Erina is so beautiful. Should you accept it? If the author sees the comments, please reply.

I almost wondered if I saw too many female leads. Don't know? Even if he didn't let the woman he originally went to have a child, he would still be named Taylor. Correct which brother doesn't need to do this?

It's very similar to a novel I've read before about traveling into Belial. At that time, I regretted that it was taken off the shelves. I vaguely remember that the author had opened a new book about Ultra Nursing Home, but it was discontinued. Author, that can't be your trumpet, right?

It looks good, the main character needs to be invincible

Not bad, right? I gave it five stars because I feel it is quite similar to the I Can Copy Skill I have seen. Well, and why does Tartarus appear? In fact, I feel that if Tartarus didn't appear, I would still be a normal passerby, which is pretty good. But if Tartarus appears, I always feel that there will be something bad. Impression

Aren't you afraid of giving the protagonist a concussion?

I came here to review this book like an arrow [shy][laughing evilly]

I have read a novel with the same plot before, "Dai Bei", but I can't find it now. I miss it very much.

Very well written

Beautiful, so beautiful

A good Ott text!

Do you have the original picture on the cover?

Personally I think it's better

This book is very beautiful

Doesn't it feel weird to keep calling Su Chen and Su Chen? Ultraman Suchen? ?

This book is very nice.

Awesome

Not bad, very beautiful

[Thinking] It's quite generous. The protagonist has the attributes of a fun-loving person. It's interesting.

Very good, good, come on✊

Has potential, looks better

Okay, ok, ok, ok

It's so beautiful. Come on, author.

Okay, not too violent, no conspiracy theories, looks very comfortable