My World Begins from Lizhudongtian

It's so good. I hope there will be more interactions with the female characters, so as to complete "the great road should not be so small, and the Taoist companions should not be so few". Jian Lai's novel is finished, and it's time for the fandom to appear. I hope to write more and not be a eunuch (Jian Lai-Lan Lai)! ! !

With such a great avenue, there shouldn't be so few lovers It's so well written that I can't cheer you up [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

Except for some typos, but nothing serious, it's a good new book Don't break it, it's good. One more thing, I hope there will be more female protagonists. Since this is a fanfic, there should be no regrets.

This is the kind of fanfic I want to read. Unlike other time-travelers who are afraid of this and that. If you don't have the ability to have the ability and still have to compromise, it is really a waste of a chance to live a new life and a golden finger. There are also those who can't change the original work and can't tear down the CP. Why don't you just read the original work?

Not bad, not bad

Except for the lack of content, this is the best Jianlai novel I have ever read.

Come on, it's very beautiful. I'm already asking for book promotion.

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, very good looking. Doesn't the protagonist have a name? He's always called a young boy? There is more than one person calling the boy, is it chaotic?

The plot line described throughout the article is very good. 1The image of each person and the character of this character have changed, but they are generally the same. Maybe it's just what the plot needs and demand needs. 2. The main thing is that I can't understand the heroine at the moment. There are just too many. My emotional lines are very mixed now. Although in the original work, Chen Ping'an and these characters have some emotional descriptions and lines, here the relationship between each female protagonist and our original male protagonist is written too clearly, and it is afraid that it will be difficult to distinguish and narrate it later. 3. The writing style is okay. It is very close to the original writing style of Jian Lai. It does not write in a very plain way, but the writing has this kind of beauty. If I read this novel intuitively, I think it should be ok to give it a score of 8.5 Or above. As long as the emotional line and the plot line are tightened later, I think it will be very good. Like the author [like]

It is considered an excellent Kenlai fanfic. It can be called a masterpiece at the beginning, but the quality drops a little bit later, but it is still considered a basic work. Because the author is relatively busy at work, it is normal for the quality to drop. It is understandable and I recommend you to read it.

Very well written, I like it! ! Big cheers for the author!

The writing is very good, but I have read countless chapters and why the description of the protagonist is always a boy in white robe. How many chapters is this? Why can't we just give the protagonist a name? It's always the boy's cry. Although I know the protagonist's name is Lin Wuyou. But now that I know why, I still scream like a teenager.

I like it very much, it saved my book drought Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

10 Chapters a day, that's not enough

I think it's a good Jianlai fanfic written in Tomato

This is the first Jianlai fanfic I've read. I feel very good. It makes up for Mr. Qi's regret. I hope he won't be banned.

There are no book reviews, do you want five-star reviews? [Laughing evilly]

I like the plot and description of this fan very much, but for those who have not read the Jian Lai novel, the writing is not very detailed. I suggest the author write more specific details, such as Cui Dongshan. Those who have not read it may not know that it was an old scholar who made it, and they may not know that Cui Dongshan is the clone of the Grand Master of Great Li. The language is very good and vivid, but the specific events are not written in detail, including the origins and personalities of the characters, etc. This makes it a bit confusing for those who have not watched Sword. Come on, author

The writing is very nice. I hope I don't want eunuchs and all the beauties will be accepted, haha.

There are not only fights and killings in the world, but there is not only morality and justice in the world, but also warmth and warmth. Different arenas, different swords. (Randomly) Hahahahahaha. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

To be honest, I think it was very well written. Even if I have never read the original work and only know a little bit about it, I won't feel uncomfortable reading it. Mainly because I don't want to leave any regrets. Come on! Never disappear [crying]

Not bad, good cheers, author

Not much to say, great book

It makes up for all my regrets about Jianlai

Although I don't see much of Jian Lai, I really like the plot.

It looks good, Ning Yao and Chen Pingan must be together [angry]

The best Jianlai fanfic I've read so far is that Lu Zhi really doesn't think about it. She and A-Liang shouldn't have feelings. To be precise, A-Liang shouldn't have such feelings. Just like Qi Jingchun and Xiuhu don't have the love of children, the A-Liang who doesn't have the love of children is the good A-Liang.

Scholars may not necessarily be reasonable, but when they are reasonable, no one can stop them.

Great author! Will Lin Wuyou and Ning Yao go to Colorful World together later? Hope to follow! Don't separate the two places! Mainly, Lin Wuyou's talent and strength are sufficient!

It's very nice, the introduction just spoke to my heart.