A Woman Wears a Man's Hat and Chases the Heroine, I'm Serious!

First of all, I want to say that it is very beautiful, the subject matter is novel, and the writing style is also very good. It has connotations in many places. However, let us talk about the shortcomings. First, there are too many psychological descriptions of the protagonist. The psychological description is normal, and he is also a woman wearing a man's body. I can accept a little more psychological description, but there is too much psychological description. In the early stage, I wrote about the protagonist's conflicts, and in the later stage, I wrote about the protagonist's desire to get close to the heroine. There is a lot of psychological description. The plot seems to be dragging, but also monotonous and boring (many people have reported that the protagonists don't have long mouths) Second, I know that the protagonists do have great charm, but there is no need to create some abnormal suitors in order to highlight the charm of the protagonists. (For example, in the scene where the protagonist is surrounded by girls in the botanical garden, a distinguished guest has a cold face, but those girls still dare to come forward? I believe that some people do dare, but not in such a large number. When you go to eat Malatang, since you are already a young lady, the description is like a crazy girl, which is not good, okay) Third, I really don't think it's very sexual tension for the protagonist to say that he wants to hug, kiss, and crush the heroine. I feel like a beast in heat. I can understand those normal physiological phenomena, but it feels too cumbersome to talk about his thoughts and restraint every day. Just say it once or twice (and it has a very deliberate feeling, as if you want to create this image. When you say that he wants to protect him silently, where is the silence? You should let the readers discover it for themselves, rather than deliberately telling it) There is still a lot of room for improvement in this book, keep up the good work. This book is really good. As long as it is improved a little bit, more people will definitely like it!

The subject matter is very novel, and the female protagonist likes the female protagonist. But when I looked at it, I felt that the female soul was suppressed by the male body, and it was difficult to see the female character traits in her, which made me feel a little uncomfortable.

It's good-looking. The male protagonist doesn't dare to admit his love because of his father. The female protagonist mistakenly thinks that the male protagonist doesn't like her. It's full of tension. Especially the female protagonist's coldness and brokenness but her inner strength and bravery really touched me.

It's so beautiful, both babies are adorable, hehe, I hope Sui Sui will be able to work hard soon, defeat the scumbag, and rescue his wife. Maybe there was a misunderstanding between the two babies at the beginning, which made everyone feel bad, but I think there is a reason. Sui Sui's family reasons make it difficult for him to determine his feelings for Xia Tian, ​​and he just wants to let go. Because of this, it also reflects the depth of his feelings for Xia Tian. Xia Tian also subconsciously avoids sudden warmth because he has been deceived. Readers have a God's perspective and may find it difficult to understand the two babies, but if they were to think about it in their own shoes, their hearts would be so unsettled. (Personal opinion after reading, sorry if I am offended)

Oh my god, it's this top-notch pulling feeling. Qin Sui's love is very obscure, and it feels a little crazy. She surrenders to Xia Tian willingly. Xia Tian is also very smart and sober. She is not the kind of brainless heroine. She doesn't have many tricks, but she is a little bit sadistic. She has a slightly longer mouth at the back, which makes me feel more comfortable. The only shortcoming is that there are too few more [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

It's so good-looking and will be updated soon. There are too few good-looking women wearing male BGs [Blowing kisses][Flowing kisses][Flowing kisses]

Reading it in the middle of the night is really touching, so sweet, I want to sink into their feelings. This is a good book, the feelings are very delicate, a person who wants to take summer as his own, but chooses to let the summer stars hang in the sky forever. No, it was never the freedom I gave her, but she is who she is. I love her, I love her as much as I love summer.

What to do? I feel like I'm in love with the heroine, how could she be so miserable? How could that man named Li destroy her? (The person named Li seems to be a book wearer, or someone who has awakened and knows the plot) Stop abusing the heroine, it looks so heartbreaking. She was supposed to be like a little sun, always innocent and cute, without suffering torture, but she became like this because of that surname. Lin Lin is so miserable. I hope she can find her own freedom and not forget herself while being with the male protagonist. Author, you must first give Lin Lin freedom, and then let them fall in love with peace of mind and no worries. (I think Lin Lin is right. How can she be so cute? She has such a good personality. Lin Lin wants to be at the top.) Moreover, the male protagonist and Lin Lin originally ran in both directions to redeem themselves. When the male protagonist was originally a girl, he was afraid that he would become a domestic violence victim because of his father. He felt like he was seeing the sun for the first time. He wanted to touch Lin Lin, but was afraid that he would hurt her. Moreover, he also has flaws in his character. Although he looks cheerful, he is actually very anxious because he is afraid of ruining everything like his father. He also wants to touch, According to Lin Lin, she should have been happy. She was cheerful, upbeat, innocent and cute. He is the kind of character who is goal-oriented and very tenacious. He is working hard for his goal, but everything is destroyed because of meeting that person named Li. However, from the small details in the article, it can be seen that she still hopes to move towards the light, she still does not want to fall, and she still has the right to pursue happiness. How can she be so cute? She had always wanted to stay away from the man named Li, and even if she was hypocritically entangled with him, she had always moved towards the light. Both girls are very good babies, they are slowly and nakedly meeting each other, it is so cute. You must hold each other hostage to the top (You must climb to the top very calmly and then be together.)

Big cheers for the author! Hurry up and update it. It's not enough to watch. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is too delicately described. The male protagonist's feelings for the female protagonist have reached their peak, but they have always been restrained. The two of them are so matched. ! ! The author is great, the pace is too slow🥹, I want to see the life of the young couple together

When can we be together openly and sweetly [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Yes, yes, but isn't Qin Sui a bit too masculine? Who still remembers that there is a female soul in his body😭❓

To be honest, this subject matter is quite new, and I didn't understand why the score was so low before, but now that I see that there are about 80 chapters left, I really can't stand it anymore. If there was a conflict for the first time, I think it was okay, but it was indeed a bit long. So the reader may have walked most of the way by that time, and then this is the second pull. I don't think I can stand this either, because the two of them are really grinding, and neither of them has a mouth. [Crazy][Crazy][Crazy] (I'll give it four stars first, then I'll read two chapters and think about it)

It's really good to watch, I really want to fast forward to the time when they were in love, but now I'm so embarrassed, I just won't open my mouth. Hateful! Quickly admit that you like the heroine. [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

This book is really beautiful! ! ! I've always wanted to find a book like this! The content is also very good, allowing me to see Qin Sui's devotion to Xia Tian! Very pious! It's like treating a god. Moreover, Qin Sui is very attentive to Xia Tian and takes his feelings very seriously! It really hit me hard! What tenderness! The detailed description makes it feel like being in the sea is very romantic. I highly recommend everyone to read this book. I have recently been seriously tired of reading, and I accidentally discovered this excellent book. It may be a little confusing in the early stage, but it is really worth reading in the later stage. Just put your mind aside in the early stage. It's really beautiful! You will definitely not suffer from it! I hope the author will greatly update Chapter 99999! ! ! I watch them all! ! ! ! ! [Blowing kiss]

Please encourage me first, I haven't finished reading yet How can I put it, they are a bit short-tongued, um, but if the author asked them to open their mouths quickly, that is, to speak quickly, and then hurry up and get together, sweet and daily, I wouldn't mind the previous lack of long-mouthedness - Okay, it's sweet now. I'll change the rating back and keep it up. Keep it up. Just keep it long.

It's good-looking, but it's okay later on, but I think it's okay to write romance directly. At the beginning, the description of Sui Sui didn't want to be about girls, whether it's psychological description or anything else. However, the text is very delicate and overall it is very good.

Nice! I like this kind of pure love! It's still a girl wearing a boy, that's great, only girls know how to cherish girls! Marvelous!

Wow, did you know? I think the best parts of this novel are at the beginning and at the end. The middle is actually quite good, but in the middle and later stages, I feel very frustrated, because I think this kind of emotion is quite frustrating. The heroine regards Xia Tian as a god-like existence, right, so he will be particularly willing to dedicate himself. Although I was not very comfortable when I read it, I still finished it, but at the end Hou is actually very good-looking, because I think how can he only abuse one person? When I read this novel, I felt that he has been abusing the heroine alone, because he likes to focus on describing the heroine. Then in the later stage, he finally started to abuse Xia Tian. At that time, I said that I had earned back my frustration, and then I thought it was really sweet, especially Lin Xiaoye. Oh, Lin Xiao also combines the advantages of his mother and mother. I think the best part of this book is the heroine's paranoid and persistent feelings towards Xia Tian. It's really because the author describes it very well. This part is simply amazing. When describing the heroine's feelings, I still feel a little aggrieved.

This is purely for the title and simplicity, but I would like to remind you not to read it as a simple romance novel. Below I will call the protagonist who is a woman wearing a man's clothes the male protagonist. As a spoiler, the male protagonist did not dare to believe in love due to family reasons in the past. In addition, in the beginning, it was only to protect the female protagonist. The article starts from 3 Starting around Chapter 0, dozens of chapters have been developed around the misunderstanding of whether the male protagonist likes the female protagonist, and the author prefers that the male protagonist can be read as a boy. In the paragraph about 40 of Chapter 73, there is a comment "You can watch it as a boy because the growing environment is hell." This comment has a screenshot of the author's like. There is a small part of the writing that is a bit awkward (this is not a big problem). The main reason is that if you just want to read a simple love story, you can not consider reading this book, or choose to skip it when the plot develops around chapter 30.

A very, very, very nice little sweet article [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss] Both characters have very cute characters[Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss] Can the author write 500,000 words a day and scare me to death[Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

It's a story about a very good girl who has the soul of a very handsome boy, and then gets trapped in a mission to get rich. In fact, I can understand it, who makes Xia Tian also a very good girl [shy] But the tension in the early and middle stages, I really can't stand it, even if my name is very appropriate, I can't stand it. But with this in mind, I had to give it a try and continue reading. The writing is getting better and better, so keep up the good work!

It's very interesting to watch. I like it very much. The male protagonist is sick, but he restrains himself and takes a long time to realize his feelings. I broke down after watching it. But when I saw the back, my [smirk] In fact, in general, it is easy for the male protagonist to fall in love with a stubborn soul because of his lack of love. The female protagonist is also good. She is not crazy at all. She has a strong psychological endurance. She also wants to take revenge and has ideals and ambitions. A very good ending. I thought I would always be a male, but I didn't expect that I would also have a female identity. WC, it's great [laughs][laughs][laughs]

There were crying and laughing along the way, partings between life and death, and moments of happiness. The one thing that remains unchanged is the love between them (here we talk about whether they are better [shy]). The story is over, but the love between them will not end.

，[][][][][][][][][][] No swordsmanship, very sweet. The male and female protagonists are very distant and have mouths. [Laughing and crying] Even those who can't stand a little abuse can watch it [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] Come on, book friends [laughing and crying] I don't want to trick you, but I have to remind you that it's a bit sadistic🤓 Anyway, I can't watch it. Bye bye [laughing]

This book is super beautiful! The heroine Qin Suisui was bound by the sudden wealth system and was tasked with making another heroine happy, so she turned into a boy Qin Sui to attack the heroine Lin Xiaxia, and then a series of pure love and a little bit of abuse ended badly. Highly recommended!

It's so pretty! ! ! ! The emotions are described so delicately! Don't make the protagonist's inner activities too real! The storyline is also full of ups and downs! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

This is the pure love I want. I was also anxious to shut up in the middle, but their past is the main reason for them to shut up. They are really sweet together. I like them very much when they are dating. It is so sweet. I almost forgot that Sui Sui fell in love at first sight. This is more lily, although mentally she is a girl. This is a double heroine. As long as the girl really knows what the other person wants and needs instead of blindly confessing that I love you, I like you, I want to be with you and have a family.

Such a beautiful book only has so many ratings. From now on, I will declare Long Live Pure Love! 👁️👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅 👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👁️

I really like it after reading this and I feel like nothing else can compare to it😘😘😘. Of course this is my personal feeling. The writing is super good. I like it 4️⃣❤️❤️❤️Please update more hehe It looks good at the front, but not so good at the back. I actually like this book.

It's very interesting, although it's very rough, but seeing the delicate emotions between Xia Tian and Qin Sui slowly rising, I feel it's worth it. I feel sad and hope that the author will make more updates. It's super sweet now, and I've become a fan of the palace directly.