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Transformation, a masterpiece, partial to a hundred, excellent writing style, top-notch writing style in Tomato Transformation, the description of women's clothing and body is perfect, and the description of female degeneration is zero. First of all, the characters are well-shaped and they are flesh-and-blood images rather than stereotyped images. The battle scenes are well-described, the side profiles are well-described, the characters' appearance is well-described, and the cut scenes are well-described. The plot of the magical transformation has grown step by step. The heroine is invincible. Her daily life is cute and lively. The supporting characters have also grown up step by step. The writing is very good. Compared with Lu Yunmeng next door, the writing style has been upgraded to a higher level, and the characters are more fleshed out. If Serena is the cute little princess on the run from Krypton, then Lu Yunmeng is the ruthless heroine. Each track has its own merits, but the plot of this book is more refined, at least it has a strong sense of immersion, and you will have the joy of growing up with the heroine! Must collect!

She's a female author, and I said it in such an ambiguous tone with Tony [laughs awkwardly]

I want to see the Superman suit, why isn't there [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing] [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh] [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile] If you don't have a Superman suit, you won't change it. Wear your fancy clothes every day.

The essence of a novel is to tell a story. The story can be simple, absurd, or even boring, but its essence is to make one thing clear. Many online novels have deviated from the scope of storytelling, and are more like emotional catharsis, and the story has become secondary. Even if some writing looks good, the story is still not explained clearly. First of all, the writing style of this novel is very delicate, and he is willing to use pen and ink to describe some scenes. What is even more rare is that he is really telling a story, the story of Superman's growth in the Marvel world. I hope the author can update this novel completely, because I have already seen some foreshadowings. I hope that in the subsequent articles, these foreshadowings can be connected together to give everyone a unique story. These authors.

Looking at it, I wonder why this Superman was restricted by Serpent and Shield. None of the Superman in DC and in the main league have been so aggrieved.

Ronan's car enveloped half of Qaidam (it did not cause gravitational tides). How big is the temple? Carol can cut right through the temple Fiona's adjutant can break up with Carol twice (and is also psychically shocked by the superstar) Carol and the heroine are close to 55 The heroine has a hard time carrying Ronan's car Fiona's adjutant is almost as powerful as Kalami Then how fierce will Wu Muhou be in the future? Thanos evolves into Uncle Da? Or surpass Uncle Da? Krypton is reborn in Marvel, whose turn should it be now?

Is there any General Zod in the author's book? It would be a little awkward if General Zod doesn't appear. Bye bye, let's bring out Lily. I don't know why I like so-called emotional dramas [vomit]

Is there no plot about Gwen anymore? What's the point of sexual transformation?

This book is very nice and has no problems, but there are still many people who gave it six-star good citizen reviews. Here are some of the bad reviews they said. 1. Writing style: It is said that the writing style is too long and the writing style is not very good, but in fact it is because the author is an idiot. A long paragraph seems to be very long when put together. 2. Time travel: Many people say that the protagonist does not look like a time traveler but a local, but in fact the author mentioned this issue at the end of the first chapter. If you have any questions about this, you can go back to the end of the first chapter and read it again. 3. The protagonist is not like Superman: Some people say that Superman always suffers from shortcomings in terms of momentum and language. That is because the author wants to write a growth-type article. The shortcomings in the early stage are just the bumps on the road to growth. Even the real Superman has suffered many shortcomings. Finally, come on, author! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Very good looking Xingzhuanwen Baihewen The Marvel Adventures of Pretty Supergirl Justice Superman The author's writing is very good. I hope the author can keep updating.

Marvel Universe Clear Stream! The heroine has super upright views and uses humor and strength to protect love and peace! Five-star recommendation!

It's pretty good to watch. Although the plot is a bit off, the subject matter is particularly good. I recommend it. It's just that the protagonist is portrayed a little bit as innocent as a child who has not yet left society. I don't know if it's excessive or something. I hope it can get better.

Kryptonian plug-in social animal daily life! The journalist lady tried to be a good person on the Marvel set, and she burst into tears with laughter!

Okay, okay, support the seedlings, and make a wish that the heroine is Gwen

Good looking, my type

What should Superman be most proud of? Is it strength? Not kindness and justice

The description of the group portrait is great! ! Each character is unique, highly recommended! !

The plot is good, the story is rich in content, and it has some fun moments. I recommend it! !

It's really Lily, she kissed Gwen in Chapter 19 of Volume 2

He has a good personality and can combine civil and military skills. It's best not to follow the plot, otherwise the power will not be in vain.

It's great, it's great, the plot is involved but not overly magical. It has superhuman abilities and a girlish character. The drama is well written. Keep up the good work. I hope the combat power won't expand too fast. I'll write a few million more words, haha.

It looks good, I like the character of the main character very much

Seeing that it looks good now

Come on, your writing is pretty good.

Points will be deducted for leaving the dog on the spaceship! Labradors are very clingy and sensitive dogs and will become depressed if left alone on a spaceship.

This is one of the best books of its kind that I have ever read. I have read more than 100 pictures in one day.

It has a movie-like look. There are no poisonous points in the plot so far, and the plot is more reasonable.

The writing is not bad, the descriptions are very delicate, and the characters are well drawn. Come on.

It is recommended to read this book as Orven, a native with a heart of light who knows the plot, a game of order of the God of the World.

I'm a little curious, can Superman snap his fingers without getting hurt?