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The cunning author Ka Wen Ka is very good 😡 😰The emotional scenes are a bit ordinary and the descriptions of daily life are okay. They look like villains, but in fact they are good old guys with a little bit of evil. Also, the system's presence is a bit too low. I haven't seen a few skills so far 😰😰😰

This book is definitely worth recommending with five stars! As soon as you turn the first page, you will be firmly grasped. The author's writing is like delicate moonlight, illuminating every detail in the story clearly and warmly. Whether it's the protagonist's struggle and growth, or the little touches hidden between the lines, people can't help but feel heartbroken, laugh, and cry along with it. When I closed the book, my heart seemed to be filled with something, a feeling of reluctance at the end of the story and a sense of relief from the harvest. This is not only a good-looking book, but also a friend who can understand you and provide you with understanding and strength when you need it. I have put it on my list of books that I will read twice and three times, and I highly recommend it to everyone who is willing to calm down and read the story - believe me, you will definitely fall in love with it.

The writing is good, but I just don't know if you have played Genshin Impact? When the plot begins, Paimon has been traveling with the Traveler for two months. The lines at that time were, Traveler: I don't remember how many years ago it was, I will find a way to find out. When I woke up, I was wandering alone, and I found out that I met you two months ago. Paimon: It was thanks to you, otherwise I would have drowned. Also, the place where Paimon was fished out is in Guyun Pavilion. This is already common knowledge. You can find out by just searching. After all, even the terrain is different.

The writing is quite smooth, and the daily routines interspersed with the main plot are well written. Disadvantages: 1. The system has almost no sense of existence. It is only mentioned at the beginning that it has the function of extracting three skills in each anime, and the specific extraction logic and cost are not described. 2. In Chapter 8, the protagonist's psychological change to make up for the regrets of the original work just after meeting Amber by chance was too abrupt. The Queen finally saved the protagonist, but the protagonist lived in the winter for a year and didn't regard those colleagues as real people. Hey, the time traveler's arrogance and loneliness combined with Qingmei's inability to beat Tiansheng can't it? Hakisaku... You guy. 3. The relationship line progresses too fast. It doesn't take long to skip the friend stage and go to the trial stage. In addition, the recent update contains very little information in each chapter, and is full of descriptions of scenery and demeanor with a large number of modifiers, which is suspected of being polished by AI. As a newcomer, it is already very good to write this first book. Come on, author, keep your own pace.

It's a very nice new Genshin Impact book. The author corrects his mistakes when he knows they're wrong, and he's also very active (I put this activity in the update, thank you [Chigua] [Smile]). It's worth reading, but the cover is a bit ugly. I suggest changing the cover to maybe more people will read it [Chigua] The review is early, I should have waited until the author finished talking before commenting [laughing]

The plots of Mondstadt and Liyue are quite good. I like the fun-loving humanoid protagonists, but when it comes to Rice Wife, it's very abstract. Discussion of the novel with Shenzi takes up too much part, and the main plot has not been entered for a long time, which gives people a sense of inexplicability. In addition, if the heroine chooses Amber, she will have very few scenes, because Amber does not have much plot in the game. Then I saw that the updates were getting slower and slower, and the reminders for updates were getting less and less, and I felt that updates were about to be discontinued, hahaha. But I still hope the author can work harder. Hey, at least I enjoyed watching Mond Liyue.

Didn't Qin know that Fengshen was in Mondstadt when she rescued Barbara earlier? This shows that Fengshen knew that there was a powerful fighting force like the protagonist in the center of Mondstadt, but he did not step forward to stop it. The senior management of Mondstadt should be able to deduce that there is a high probability that the protagonist knows Fengshen and is on a friendly side. So why does Kaia test the protagonist [what] in the middle of the night? When the protagonist's combat power is super high, he didn't kill Kaia directly but only gave him a lesson to show that he would not be an enemy of the Knights. Why is Qin's attitude still so tough, as if the protagonist would cause a lot of harm in Mondstadt? [What] Of course, this novel is okay in terms of setting and early plot. I hope the author can be more detailed [shy]

"I guess everyone will meet someone in their life and fall in love with them. Some people meet at the right time, like flowers blooming in spring, and everything will be fine. They will fall in love, get engaged, get married, and live together; while some people meet at the wrong time, like seeing a fish coming up to take a breath through the ice in winter. The fish takes a breath and sinks to the water, never to be seen again, with no results. But we can Is it right to meet flowers in spring and wrong to meet fish in winter? If you meet at the wrong time, can you restrain yourself from not liking that person? Do you try your best to get close to him, try your best to hide yourself, or even pretend to be another fish. Not every love in the world has an ending. Some words are just words, such as 'I love you', such as 'I'm waiting for you'." - "Dragon" I read this book at an early stage. Isn't it the right encounter? [Blowing kiss]

First of all, the first point is the relationship between the protagonist and the character. How do you talk about this aspect? I don't know where you came up with the idea of ​​Gaosura Field. Let's put it this way. The protagonist in your novel really wants to find a partner. How can he not find a partner in the solstice year? You go to Mondstadt and meet Amber. It starts immediately, just like a 200-pound fat man who has never seen a woman. Then there is inexplicable jealousy. The brothers have only known each other for a few days and they are jealous. The second point is about Mondstadt's giant baby. Don't tell me, I really enjoyed the part about beating people and scolding people. But first of all, you have to think about one thing, that is, the knights in Mondstadt are all crooked melons and crack dates who were wiped out from the Great Crusade. The real elites have all gone to fight in the abyss. To put it bluntly, What was left behind was a bunch of trash. Falgame knew that taking people out would cause some problems in the country. The most likely reason was that he had a contract with Zhidong. Zhidong would never let anything happen to Mondstadt, but only to Mondstadt. They didn't care about the people of Mondstadt. The third point is that in your system, I saw 50 cards but didn't say how to start the next stage. You can take a look at Mei Luxin's book. Although that book is not a solstice start, it has a similar theme to yours, Invincible Girl and Everyday. You can see that everyone has a good grasp of the rhythm. The system there basically has no sense of existence but does not affect it at all. If you are dissatisfied after reading it, you can continue to reply to me. Let's have a good chat. I don't have anything else, I just read a few more books [face covering]

The plot of Mondstadt can be given 5 stars. I feel that the emotional scenes are above the pass mark. I hope the author can arrange the chapters between countries well so that the transition is not abrupt. Come on↖(^ω^)↗

I picked up a book randomly at night. I started to feel sleepy, but the more I read, the more energetic I became. The writing is very good. Regarding the writing of character emotions, the author is this [like] [like] [like]. The summary is two words [thinking], and the author should update it soon [love]

Nacida: You'll regret it! Protagonist: I am the Grass God! [Smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile]

It's quite good to read. The protagonist is a fool, and he follows the travelers on adventures. After all, there are relatively few stories where the protagonist is a fool. The general direction of the book is fine, but it's a bit sparse.

Very good, but the cover needs to be updated. A good cover can make people's eyes brighter.

As the author's debut novel, it is well written, and the author has a good attitude. If there are mistakes, he will correct them in time. The score is a little low because it was just the beginning. Low scores are normal, and they will gradually increase in the future. I hope the author can write better and better, and I also hope the author can continue to maintain his current mentality.

Let me put it bluntly. I said it was dark I said green I said green I said purple I said blue I said red I said it was yellow To put it bluntly, this book is so good! ! ! !

The author writes very well, keep up the good work. The book you wrote will definitely be great in the future. I am looking forward to the follow-up of your book, and I will speculate that it will be read by more people. Keep up the good work and keep up the good work.

I just saw the part about whipping the top, and I felt so happy. I was beaten and scolded in another world. Let me tell you my own opinion. The plot and characters are very interesting. I see a lot of people complaining about the "prelude". In my opinion, it is unnecessary. I like this method of quick connection. Most of the time, I spend a long time reading books, so sometimes I forget to read an old book during a meeting. I read this book twice at noon, and then I had time to read it again in the evening. I think it is a very practical little idea to connect the previous plot in a few sentences.

Halfway through, I really felt like I was reading a 12+ novel. I don't know if it's my imagination. [Palms face] Give it four stars. . . . . .

Very nice, good writing and unique style. It's just that Inazuma's writing is too abstract. In order to reflect the fierce confrontation between the protagonist and Shenzi's words, the author ended up writing it... Emm very abstract. I hope to return to the main line as soon as possible and get back to normal. Right now, I feel like I'm thinking about both and ended up not finishing both, and something went wrong. All in all, Mond and Liyue wrote very well and it is worth reading [Like][Like][Like][Like]

Yeah, yeah, yeah, since the author is begging for five stars, and I personally think it is quite interesting, with crushing strength, low profile, and handsome as it should be. I have seen some of the highest quality Genshin Impact fanfics. Just give it five stars. [Cool]

I have only read Chapter 23, but the values ​​​​are worthy of a good review. Damn, in the Genshin Impact books I read before, the protagonists must be based on what they read online. If you need help, for anything, the maid will definitely come out. It's your turn!

I will write a Genshin Impact novel one day in the future. This is the novel about Hu Tao's grandfather, Shen He's parents, the young Grass God, the water god Fukaros, the beheading, the Thunderbolt True Thunder movie Fox Zhai Palace, etc. All the knives and regrets will all turn into nothingness under my pen. I will use the pen in my hand to smooth out all the knives and write a new chapter. This will bring a happy ending to the whole Genshin Impact scene that leads to the separation of relatives.

This commander-in-chief recognizes that Amber has been recovered

Give it five stars for the time being! [Laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying] Looking back, I don't like too many emotional scenes, but it doesn't matter, it's really okay

It's so cool. It's so cool that I'm a little embarrassed. The author is already immersed in his own artistic creation.

Better looking Genshin Impact fanfics

It's pretty good-looking. Although there are some minor flaws, they are not very disturbing, and the update is also very fast. The author listened to his advice [Like][Like][Like][Like]

A true and objective book with multi-dimensional description, clear structure and substantial content. Comments can help more book friends

How can I put it, the first 80 pictures are indeed very beautiful, the emotional descriptions are very delicate, and the protagonist's personality is very perfect. It is a rare masterpiece! ! Highly recommended