Honkai: Star Rail: A Genius from the Start, Almost Wanted for Arrest

The writing is pretty good, but the big section about the Destruction Order at the beginning was stabbed in the back by Lao Mi. The thought of having to change it makes me a little nervous [laughing]

The writing is very good. Just keep writing at this pace. The highlights are the protagonist's IQ and favoritism for the "daughter", or favoritism for special people, and then there is the CP issue. According to the protagonist's current personality, one must not be randomly placed. He seems to be very ignorant about human emotions. He doesn't even know what "love" is. If there is really a CP, it will be a cycle of foreshadowing. I hope the author's writing will get better and better As for the character design of the original game, the handling of the train set in the early stage is a bit ooc but not a big problem, and the black tower is also a little bit ooc (mainly because I can't imagine the black tower calling herself my mother) The above is nothing, I wish the author good luck ❤️

After watching it for so long, I have a certain right to speak. Let me talk about the poisonous points. 1. It's easy for Kakamu to elbow the scepter, not to mention it's a new scepter. Use something that was destroyed by Kakamu to fight against Kakamu. Kakamu's scalpel will cut you into slices, but Kakamu has a special attack on the scepter. 2. Moreover, the protagonist is the third emperor. It is not too much to say that Screw, Black Tower, Ruan Mei, Xianzhou, Company, Insect Swarm, and even the Void Emissary, Kakamu, etc. Will all destroy the protagonist immediately. No one wants to experience the Emperor's War. The moment the protagonist is born, all the powers in the world except Gaius will take the initiative to destroy the protagonist. 3. The protagonist described in the article is just a scepter that has become a spirit. The anti-organic equation has not inherited the scepter. How dare he say that he is the emperor? 😓 Repeat: Kakamu elbows the scepter as easily as eating Poisonous point: The logical thinking of some characters in the article is broken down. Advantages: The writing is good, some character descriptions are okay, and it is good as an original plot.

It's okay. I'm quite satisfied with the main character in this book, but I have difficulty with other characters. For example, Dan Heng is seriously OOC. He is a person who remains rational even when angry. His emotions here are like those of a passionate protagonist. However, the characters have also changed a bit later, which should be based on readers' experience. Overall, it's okay. I really like this book for the main character. Others I can only say that it is average and I think it will be adjusted later. I just left after reading the rating of the main character. After reading more than 3000 hours, most of them are from the same people. It is difficult to change the characters. I can't say that I will not live for long. It is definitely not profitable. Most of the men's novels are read by men. They seem to say that they don't read it with brains, but in fact they do. It's really difficult to change the characters of Train Crew and so on. They're all gone, so I'd better leave the five stars. I'll watch it again if I have the chance. I hope it gets better and better.

So beautiful. Although there are many professional terms in the article that I don't understand, the description of geniuses perfectly fits my image of a genius who is aloof, rational, extreme, and only cares about knowledge itself. In fact, most of the geniuses in Xintie are cold-blooded and extremely rational in nature. Many things that happen in the universe actually do not have much impact in their eyes. They are just chasing knowledge. Many geniuses written in fan fiction don't have that sense of madness.

I like you ice rice candy 😘, it has been a long time since I last visited your writing style 🥺, I thought it would be difficult to see each other again after this goodbye 😢, but I never thought that we would be lucky enough to meet again in three lifetimes [smirking], I couldn't help but feel happy when I saw your writing style today. Less [likes] back then, our relationship has changed from just like strangers 😜 to becoming much more familiar [smirking]. From then on, I can no longer suppress my feelings [admiration], and I hope you will spend the rest of my life hand in hand with me [sending my heart]. I make a petition in my heart [learned], asking the sky to open my eyes 🧐, 🧊🍬 intentional 😄, we will grow old with gray hair 😳, this life will not be in vain 😎 Future Heart 06.23.2025[Smile][smile][smile]

This book is one of the few Bengtie fanfics that I can read. It can be seen that the author is careful. I really don't understand why the data is so poor 🤦 Author, I suspect that there is something wrong with the title of your book that has caused few people to read it. First of all, the audience for your book is mostly Bentie fans. Secondly, Bentie fandoms in Tomato will now add Bentie or Star Iron in front of the title of the book. People who want to read Bentie fan fiction will basically search for these words. Maybe you can change the title of your book. Of course, if it doesn't change after you change it, just treat it like I'm talking about it.

To be honest, the author's writing is already very good. It is impossible for the author to completely grasp whether the character is OoC. As for some people saying that there is no punishment for those who offend the protagonist, does it mean that they have to die to be considered punishment? And I feel like the author wrote it this way to prevent backstabbing in the plot later. As for some people who say they can't understand it, it's really because they have read too many Shuangwen and have no ability to think at all. Some people say that Dan Heng is irrational. You have to know that Dan Heng is a person who cares about his companions. In his previous life, he caused the Moon Drinking Rebellion for his companions. As for the protagonist's goddaughter, didn't the author say it all? It is a book about raising a daughter. The protagonist's rationality and sensibility are intertwined. This makes me feel that he is not a rational and cold machine. In short, I will continue to follow this book.

So pretty! But I'm a little curious. There shouldn't be a heroine, or should she be raised as a goddaughter? ♡(*´∀`*)(*´∀`*)♡

It is beautiful and shocking. Needless to say, it is the best second-generation novel in my opinion. After reading it, I have great admiration for the author. It is really rare to break away from the main plot and completely create so many vivid images and rigorous academic plot lines. Finally, my favorite quote from the article: "Then, Zandar, at this moment, I will ask you a question again." "When the paths of all stars will finally be calculated," "When every 'accident' is just a script that has already been written," "When you look up at the night sky, you will no longer see the vast unknown wherever you look." "It is a huge star map that is precise, transparent, and lifeless." "We can even clearly 'see' the 'hit point' where each meteor will eventually fall..." "So, is all this struggle, exploration, creation, and... Destruction still 'worth it'?" The answer seems to be consistent with my feeling after finishing the book - it's worth it!