Naruto: Traveling Through Time with Sasuke, His Teammates Seem to Be Reborn

1. The author's writing style is very good 2. The battle of wits is very interesting 3. There is no OOC, very two-dimensional 4. The concept is very good, good~ 5. There is a battle of wits but also true feelings I think there will be more exciting stories between the time traveler Sasuke, the reborn Haruno Sakura and the Uzumaki Naruto in the parallel world. It depends on the author's efforts. I highly recommend this book, Haokang~

It's pretty good. When I read the introduction, I thought it was some kind of dark novel, but it turned out to be quite heartwarming and the emotional transition was very coherent. The protagonists of this book are three people from Team 7, Sakura who has experienced a tragedy in the future (Sakura came back from Hayate, I guess. I was not interested in Sakura's character before, but I quite like Sakura in this book), and Naruto who sees a happy life in a parallel world (I I always feel that that world is too beautiful, there are not so many tragedies, a bit like the Infinite Tsukuyomi), a time traveler Sasuke (Although this Sasuke was also exterminated, the hatred is not that great, because he came through on the night of the genocide, this is a calm and rational version of Sasuke). Bearing the world being too distorted, these three people walked together and rushed towards the future they wanted. This is a passionate comic. There is no need to be tragic for the sake of tragedy.

So far, it seems to be very good, with no quirks (CP is probably more official?), The author's writing skills are in place, and the style is rigorous. The emotional description is very contagious. As long as you don't give up later, it will definitely be interesting if you keep it up. Five stars are given to support the author. ˃̶ᗜ˂̶ The author uses too many adjectives. The advantage of this is that the content is expressed very delicately, but the disadvantage is that it seems redundant. I hope that the author's writing style can be improved and that the author will bring a better reading experienceᵒᵕ˂

The time traveler and the two pillars are integrated very well. It is hard to imagine that Tomato fans can control the character to this extent. But there are still some flaws. For example, if the protagonist wants to use the Yin Seal to open his eyes, the protagonist can open his eyes normally. Tomato's Naruto fans rarely write good companions. They basically use everyone as a tool. I hope you can write the friendship of Class 7 well.

The people in the Hokage village start from a different perspective. This book brings guests in the enhanced collection: Time Traveler, Sakura reborn, and the healthy but close-knit Team 7. Those who like to watch family carnivals are in luck, this micro-group portrait is a good product in terms of writing and plot. The main mission is probably to correct the regrets of the original work, pry open the door of the Happy Konoha Village next door, and blow up Otsutsuki by the way. Those with orthodox certification: You regret it, I will shadow you It's a pity that the battle part is due to the force majeure of Nise Sakura's strength bug and the healthy Naruto's massive chakra. The main perspective time travel helps the overall strength to be slightly weak and brings a sense of satisfaction that is not enough. But the cooperation is fierce, and the group battles are fun to watch, so please give them more. I don't really like watching the battle of wits part, so I skipped it without comment. It's rare that you don't maliciously attack any of the original characters👍🏻

It's very beautiful and interesting. Three people can make 800 tricks together. There is no vase. They are real partners.

After reading Chapter 70, I completely understand why this book's rating is low. First, in the first forty or so episodes, the author used too many pretentious "fights of wits" to foreshadow the differences between the three people, and repeated monotonous psychological descriptions to emphasize the protagonist's caution. This is contrary to the reader's preconceived perspective - the reader assumes that the three people have the same goal, so I personally felt a little frustrated. Second, the author has almost completely abandoned the content of the original Ninja School in this part. All changes are basically expressed in a way similar to "growth between scenes", which is a bit abrupt and redundant. But all in all, I think this shortcoming can outweigh the good points. The relatively distinctive material, relatively good writing style, and the author's over-exerting but more sincere plot can help me get through the previous poisonous points for me. Give it a five-star support

It's been a long time since Naruto has published a book with this kind of thoughtfulness. I'm looking forward to the plot and story in the future. Come on, author, it's no problem to have more than one million words. If it keeps this quality, it will be another masterpiece among Tomato fans.

Not bad, the writing style of the new author is already very good. It's just that some plot descriptions are too detailed and full of words. It feels a bit AI-like, but only a little bit. The protagonist has a lot of ideas, and there is also more content to write about the protagonist's thoughts. Overall it's pretty good, come on author

Nice setting. It feels like everyone except Sasuke is like a fool. Naruto and Sakura didn't notice that Sasuke was abnormal, but Sasuke did. It seemed like they were testing each other, but in fact it was Sasuke's exclusive show. Remedy: It would be nice to add Naruto and Sakura's perspective. This battle of wits (is there a bit of a battle of wits in Naruto?) There is a sense of being smart for the sake of being smart. Uh, there's water. The article is not smooth to read, but I can read the good article from top to bottom at a glance, and it is smooth. I skimmed this to look at a few key words. I don't know what the problem is either.

The concept is good and the logic is okay. The only problem is that the more I look at it, the more it looks like it was run by an AI. The story I ran with Claude is very similar to this one. No, I compared it. They are exactly the same. It is impossible for a normal human being to write such a sentence like this. Master Tsunade, she agreed. After reading, there are repeated things and inexplicable sentences everywhere. It is 100% AI-run.

The book has just been opened, and the rating will go up. It's a very interesting Naruto fanfic, with a novel setting, and Erzhu's character is very to my liking. Please read more. I don't recommend buying the book, because it may be recommended [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

This seems to be the best Naruto article I have ever read so far. I hope I can continue to work hard in the future.

I have to say that the opening chapter is very stunning, but the only flaw is that there are too many mutual suspicions at the beginning, which seriously affects the viewing experience, but it gets better after building trust. All in all, it's a masterpiece!

It's a very nice Naruto story. It captures the bonding feeling of the original work, and the supporting characters are also very three-dimensional. Compared with most of the current Naruto stories that are the same and mindless with overlapping skills, it has more meaning. It's the best fanfic I've ever seen on 🍅. I hope the author will keep writing.

It's very beautiful. It has a unique insight into Naruto and a real reflection on life. "Strength is noble because it serves life." It's so cool, so I came to support the author [note] [note]

The setting is ten or even nine times novel. Overall, I can see that there is nothing sinister about it. I'm looking forward to the showdown later (the introduction didn't write it down, but I personally expect it to be without a female protagonist).

The book is good-looking, the characters are not brainless, the combat is exciting, the plot advancement is reasonable, and the combat power is not broken, but there are too many temptations, and the score is unreasonably low. All in all, this Naruto fanfic gave me a pretty good feeling. It's pretty good, you can read it with confidence The pace is neither urgent nor slow. If you continue, you can write for a long time. The description of the characters' psychology is also appropriate and specific. It's very good food. There is still relatively little content at the moment, so there may be more book readers. The author is very diligent in updating books, so it's worth looking forward to. [Sparrow Food Masterpiece][Adoration][Bookshelf Plus One]

It's really, really good. This is the best Naruto novel I've ever read.

[Love] [Love] Some parts that may be more important, I used emoticons to mark them [Love] [Love]. It is difficult to see the core and writing style of this book from the introduction, so I decided to write a review to give more readers a general understanding when reading this book. The article setting is like an introduction. The author's writing style is very good, and the author got to Tomato from the starting point (this is a rough introduction to the author). Regarding the issue of the heroine being the original wife, [get it] Sasakura cp [get it], I personally think it is very well written, because it is a group portrait article, so every author will describe that Sasuke may have a lot of conspiracy theories in the early stage [under draft] [under draft] (but I think it is normal, because after all, he has traveled through time, so it is normal to have such thoughts. I saw this mentioned in the comment area, so I marked it as a highlight). It may seem a bit boring in the early stage (this is my personal reason, I have been describing the training content in the early part of the formal establishment of the Primary 7 class), but in the later stage I feel that it gradually gets better, [laughs] I think the character design is not OOC at all [laughs] (about Sasuke is good) Like always "laughing", I think there is nothing wrong with smiling in front of your companions, mainly because Sasuke's setting is to be pulled out of the pain of revenge by his companions, so it's okay to be a little cheerful) I think the description of Kakashi-sensei's character is also very good! Let's just say these for now. The above is just my personal opinion. If there are any mistakes, please point out! I think this book is very good, so I want to share it with more people!

It looks good now [Like] [Like] [Like]. The direction of this book is rare. Come on, author, don't stop updating suddenly. It's ok. It's just that the word count is too few. If there are too many, people will read it.

Don't read the comments, everyone has their likes and dislikes. This Naruto book is really worth reading.

Very beautiful! Class 7 with the strongest love

It has both novel ideas and powerful writing, as well as clear logic. It is one of the few novels in Tomatoes that requires you to use your brain to read it.

It feels quite interesting, and it feels like a very novel angle, really. Interest. Laman

It feels like the mutual testing is very in line with Sasuke, and he is a little calm and very natural, and his thinking is very clear.

Very good, healthy Naruto, not blackening Sasuke, even Sakura is written reasonably, the author will update soon

The more you look at it, the better it gets. The emotions of the characters are very delicate, and the vivid personalities of Team 7 are shown.

The mutual acting skills of Class 7 are one of the biggest highlights of the early novels, and there are also various imaginative ideas such as Phantom Boxing. The writing is good and the ideas are big. It is worth reading. But having said that, I read the book review again, and after reading the book for a while, I suggested that the author use less AI.

I feel that the author has controlled all the details well, and has enough psychological description to reflect the protagonist's brainless behavior. Not recommended for those who want to read cool articles. The plot progresses slowly, but everything depends on personal preference.