Naruto: I Transmigrated as Sasuke, and My Teammates Seem to Be Reborn

1. The author's writing style is very good 2. The battle of wits is very interesting 3. There is no OOC, very two-dimensional 4. The concept is very good, good~ 5. There is a battle of wits but also true feelings I think there will be more exciting stories between the time traveler Sasuke, the reborn Haruno Sakura and the Uzumaki Naruto in the parallel world. It depends on the author's efforts. I highly recommend this book, Haokang~

It's pretty good. When I read the introduction, I thought it was some kind of dark novel, but it turned out to be quite heartwarming and the emotional transition was very coherent. The protagonists of this book are three people from Team 7, Sakura who has experienced a tragedy in the future (Sakura came back from Hayate, I guess. I was not interested in Sakura's character before, but I quite like Sakura in this book), and Naruto who sees a happy life in a parallel world (I I always feel that that world is too beautiful, there are not so many tragedies, a bit like the Infinite Tsukuyomi), a time traveler Sasuke (Although this Sasuke was also exterminated, the hatred is not that great, because he came through on the night of the genocide, this is a calm and rational version of Sasuke). Bearing the world being too distorted, these three people walked together and rushed towards the future they wanted. This is a passionate comic. There is no need to be tragic for the sake of tragedy.

So far, it seems to be very good, with no quirks (CP is probably more official?), The author's writing skills are in place, and the style is rigorous. The emotional description is very contagious. As long as you don't give up later, it will definitely be interesting if you keep it up. Five stars are given to support the author. ˃̶ᗜ˂̶ The author uses too many adjectives. The advantage of this is that the content is expressed very delicately, but the disadvantage is that it seems redundant. I hope that the author's writing style can be improved and that the author will bring a better reading experienceᵒᵕ˂

The time traveler and the two pillars are integrated very well. It is hard to imagine that Tomato fans can control the character to this extent. But there are still some flaws. For example, if the protagonist wants to use the Yin Seal to open his eyes, the protagonist can open his eyes normally. Tomato's Naruto fans rarely write good companions. They basically use everyone as a tool. I hope you can write the friendship of Class 7 well.

The people in the Hokage village start from a different perspective. This book brings guests in the enhanced collection: Time Traveler, Sakura reborn, and the healthy but close-knit Team 7. Those who like to watch family carnivals are in luck, this micro-group portrait is a good product in terms of writing and plot. The main mission is probably to correct the regrets of the original work, pry open the door of the Happy Konoha Village next door, and blow up Otsutsuki by the way. Those with orthodox certification: You regret it, I will shadow you It's a pity that the battle part is due to the force majeure of Nise Sakura's strength bug and the healthy Naruto's massive chakra. The main perspective time travel helps the overall strength to be slightly weak and brings a sense of satisfaction that is not enough. But the cooperation is fierce, and the group battles are fun to watch, so please give them more. I don't really like watching the battle of wits part, so I skipped it without comment. It's rare that you don't maliciously attack any of the original characters👍🏻

It's very beautiful and interesting. Three people can make 800 tricks together. There is no vase. They are real partners.

After reading Chapter 70, I completely understand why this book's rating is low. First, in the first forty or so episodes, the author used too many pretentious "fights of wits" to foreshadow the differences between the three people, and repeated monotonous psychological descriptions to emphasize the protagonist's caution. This is contrary to the reader's preconceived perspective - the reader assumes that the three people have the same goal, so I personally felt a little frustrated. Second, the author has almost completely abandoned the content of the original Ninja School in this part. All changes are basically expressed in a way similar to "growth between scenes", which is a bit abrupt and redundant. But all in all, I think this shortcoming can outweigh the good points. The relatively distinctive material, relatively good writing style, and the author's over-exerting but more sincere plot can help me get through the previous poisonous points for me. Give it a five-star support

It's been a long time since Naruto has published a book with this kind of thoughtfulness. I'm looking forward to the plot and story in the future. Come on, author, it's no problem to have more than one million words. If it keeps this quality, it will be another masterpiece among Tomato fans.

Not bad, the writing style of the new author is already very good. It's just that some plot descriptions are too detailed and full of words. It feels a bit AI-like, but only a little bit. The protagonist has a lot of ideas, and there is also more content to write about the protagonist's thoughts. Overall it's pretty good, come on author

Nice setting. It feels like everyone except Sasuke is like a fool. Naruto and Sakura didn't notice that Sasuke was abnormal, but Sasuke did. It seemed like they were testing each other, but in fact it was Sasuke's exclusive show. Remedy: It would be nice to add Naruto and Sakura's perspective. This battle of wits (is there a bit of a battle of wits in Naruto?) There is a sense of being smart for the sake of being smart. Uh, there's water. The article is not smooth to read, but I can read the good article from top to bottom at a glance, and it is smooth. I skimmed this to look at a few key words. I don't know what the problem is either.