HP*****

Very nice, very original. However, the sentences that are piled up with too gorgeous words are a bit difficult to understand, and there are also many vague and mysterious descriptions that make people confused. Generally speaking, the author's writing is very good, and the description of pain is very good and vivid. If the teacher wants to go further, I recommend you to think more about how the famous foreign works are described. They are also very gorgeous, but they don't feel artificial and awkward, but more vivid. Keep up the good work, author, and look forward to your new works [Sending Hearts]

It's very touching. The author writes in an immersive way. When Si Jiao and XP broke their left hands, I felt pain in my left hand. It was a bit too touching. How can we understand it? Does the male protagonist have the ability to predict? How did he know that Sri Lanka is a spy? And the death of Sri Lanka

The plot is compact and beautiful. Good luck to the author.

The ideas are clear and the writing is fluent, but I am a little confused about when the timeline started. The rest is okay (please ask the author to re-divide it into sections and chapters, I feel a little dizzy after reading it), overall it is very good (*≧∪≦)

It's very interesting and the plot is novel. I must keep writing it. The characters are well-drawn, but there are some repetitive content at the beginning of each chapter, which somewhat affects viewing. The author will work hard to update it. [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

Looks good, the story line is quite clear

It's been a long time since I've seen such a beautiful HP article, my eyes really lit up [laughing]

Hey hey hey, it feels good I feel like it's well written. I like this kind of tense writing [Read carefully], but I feel like the main character is so miserable [I'm about to cry]

The overall story was pretty good, but the emotional line made me uncomfortable. In the early stages, Sijiao's feelings for the protagonist felt like pure hatred. I didn't quite understand where the hatred came from.

Wow wow wow, it suits my taste better I hope it will be updated soon. I can't read it every day. It's really good to my taste.

Very beautiful, the plot is very innovative

After reading this, I just want to sigh that it is a miracle that Wilder can survive [Petrified]

It's beautiful and beautiful, the characters are perfectly portrayed [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] Madam, you must continue to update it.

How should I put it? It's more to my liking, so it's just fine grain for me.