Undead Ogre: Start with Pups and Stack Armor

I wrote the book at about the same time as you, so I jumped on it. When I saw your data, I was deeply envious~ It turns out that people are so irritating! I wish you good luck moving forward and your new book will be a hit!

It's okay, but the author's various notes and explanations in the article are really a show.

If you like to watch personal development and growth, you can watch it. There is no pressure to fight, and there is no beating the young to grow old. It depends on how it is written later. The plot is very simple and focuses on getting stronger. At this rate of strength improvement, it can already be hundreds of times its own gravity. I can't write more than 2-300 chapters at most. Personal suggestion: If you want explosive data, this type of book is most needed. Readers will read it after reading it. I think this book is developing too fast. The starting point of ogre strength is too high, and it is difficult for Peng Yuyan and others to substitute. In fact, we can prepare for the next book. The entries can be more detailed and integrated. In this way, the number of words can be occasionally improved by using data, and readers will not be disgusted. Continue to write about immortality, martial arts, and weirdness at the level of this book. The data will most likely be better. Western fantasy is considered a niche subject on Tomato.

There's not much to say. As a novice in writing books, it's quite impressive that the author can write the plot to this extent. As an old bookworm, I think this book has great potential. [Laughing out loud]

The author's first book is well written, the front part is good, but the following words are not readable. I originally gave it 2 points, but the extra 1 point is because you actually picked up An Guang [sneaky laugh][sneaky smile][sneaky laugh], and the other 1 point is because you have the perseverance to finish it. The last 1 point is the shortest one I have ever read [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face]

Really good You can add a talent to the protagonist to control his own body shape.

Yes, as a physical monster control, I am happy with it.

The first fifty-four chapters are okay. There are only so many chapters for now. 5 Stars to encourage you

I hope the protagonist can build his own Warcraft empire and not fight alone

It's pretty, okay

If you want to eat people, you can invite Haki to have sex. It's not a good look at all.

Five-star reviews, a pretty good ogre novel.

It's already a very good novel for a talented person, and there's nothing sinister about the plot.

Update it quickly. How can we write two thousand words a day? Ten thousand words a day, otherwise the book friends next door will think we look down on us.

I am such a good person [laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's normal for a new book to have a low rating. It's a good book and the author is a real person. He will listen to opinions and likes to post some cute little pictures. He doesn't stress his ability [laughter]

I hope the protagonist can continue to evolve [make faces][make faces]

It's okay. I've seen so much and it suits my taste.

Very good, very good

Interesting, strange and fresh

Not bad, highly recommended

It's okay, just like hmm.

Good-looking, fast-paced and refreshing

Worth recommending, good looking

Do ogres have to eat people? [Think]

Should I say that the author also knows about weekend breaks?

Working hard during exercise is not as fast as lying down and leveling up [Learned]

It seems to be pretty good food and grass so far.

The description is vivid and the genre is interesting

So far, it seems that there is nothing poisonous about it, and it feels good enough.