HP: Observation Report That Begins with Potions

It can be regarded as one of the more natural emotional lines in CP Snape's novels that I have read. The protagonist is not a pure-blood and is sorted into Slytherin, but the author did not arrange any frustrating plot for the protagonist to be made difficult and then feel deflated. As soon as he entered the school, he was quickly taken advantage of by Snapra. There is no self-esteem-damaging thing like revealing the protagonist's scars to advance the plot. Generally speaking, I am not passive. And although Snape is still venomous, he does not lack care for the protagonist. There is no sense of being licked by the protagonist even after being scolded. To be honest, some CP Snape fanfics really make me feel that the protagonist may be a douchebag. No matter how he is scolded, he still looks touched and says in his heart that he is only caring about himself and that he is so kind. Although I know that Snape's character has a vicious tongue and is a tragic character, it doesn't mean that I will feel comfortable every time I see the protagonist being scolded so hard that he can't hold his head up and his self-esteem is destroyed. Anyway, every time I see this kind of thing, I turn on my phone.

I really like this article. It perfectly restores the vigilance, silent protection and awkward care of the Sri Lankan religion. The character is not OOC, and the cautious character of the male protagonist is also very suitable for the Sri Lankan religion. Even his patron saint is a bat. Moreover, he will not actively participate in the incident, but stay away from the incident, and only take action when the people he cares about (Sijiao) are in danger. The two people's silent tug, the old-couple-style getting along, the secret care and affection, the author really wrote it very well, I'm really looking forward to what their confession will be like hehe~

Very good. The male protagonist will "protect" Snape in his own way. He doesn't meddle in other people's business and is outside Dumbledore's tasks. However, he will not let go of any opportunity for a good future for Snape. He is also quite powerful. He is not overly concerned. I can only say that he has people he cares about and will work hard.

This is the most consistent fanfic I have ever seen that is in line with the original Harry Potter character. Professor Snape in it still seals himself with a shell of poisonous tongue and arrogance, and Lex never suddenly breaks this shell, but uses a long and steady way to accompany Snape to gradually come out on his own. The logic is very clear, and the emotional lines are also very smooth. There is a sense of natural flow, without any passionate waves of emotion. But every time I see their ordinary daily interactions, I can always feel that Lex is thinking about Snape from all aspects, loving him meticulously and deeply, protecting him, and respecting him. Originally, when I read the Harry Potter books, I felt more sorry for Snape, and I felt that he could only have that ending. But this book allowed me to see a more vivid Sri Lankan religion on a deeper level, and also allowed me to see his other destiny. It feels very healing. The child who was dumbfounded by the original book knife finally has a happy ending. (Big!!! I will follow you forever!!!)

This is one of the few Sri Lankan articles in recent times that is very consistent with the character of the Sri Lankan religion. Moreover, the author did not write a lot of ironic sentences and various potion knowledge in order to reflect the personality of the Sri Lankan religion. This is actually very wise. Appropriate white space avoids all kinds of OOC. Moreover, the relationship between the two people progressed very slowly. I personally liked it very much. Although the relationship was very obscure and platonic until the end of the main text, it was really very comfortable. Looking forward to the author's next article.

It's a very interesting article. Sijiao is really hard-spoken and soft-hearted. I really like watching them gradually realize that the other person is special to them as they get along.

It's very interesting. I really want to know what Snape was thinking when he saw the Patronus of Bats for the first time. The emotions are written very well step by step. I can translate Tsundere's words myself after reading it. It's rare for an article in Red Persimmon to write a good emotional line. The author has his own ideas and doesn't use too much of the original chapters. This is good. After all, we are here to read fan fiction, not the original work. In short, we are looking forward to the follow-up development.

Pretty good, but The relationship between the two develops in an inexplicable way, it's ordinary, but they guard it silently and never say anything [laughs]. 1. The original plot continues as usual, the protagonist only intervenes in some parts, and there is almost no change. How can I put it, it still feels a bit suffocating to watch the future partner being abused [facepalm]. 2. After tying the relationship, I suddenly discovered that the two of them were almost the type who hardly interacted verbally (ambiguously), and both were silently giving and silently guarding. To be honest, I personally felt that it was too bland. 3. There is nothing more to say, just keep reading. I hope the author can make the golden finger of the protagonist more obvious and bigger. After all, the situation where the two spells are together mentioned in the introduction, according to the current progress, the protagonist will never be able to reach it in his lifetime [smile].

Finished reading This is the first time I've seen a book with extra chapters longer than the main text, hahaha Compared to the main text, the extra story is more trivial. It records the lives of Sifu and Xiaolai after everything is settled, and their characters are also fuller than the main text, which gave me a different understanding of them. In this book, everyone has a happy ending that cannot be said to be perfect. There is no more death-defying victory, only a happy ending for everyone. Maybe I still have some regrets about the other Sif. I haven't witnessed the ending of Sif in the other world, but maybe like the author said, Sif will always be happy. He already knows that he is worthy of being loved. This is enough, isn't it? Okay, this ends my ramblings. 2026.7.22, This book is finished!

This is really the most imaginary Si Jiao fanfic I have ever seen [Blowing Kiss] Who knows, it really focuses on the new story line and character narration, and is no longer limited to the original story development process. It truly gives Si Jiao a new life and a desire to live, no longer sad and disgusted, no longer imprisoned by his own heart [crying] I am really happy and touched when I read the extra chapter written by the author in big letters. They are a couple who are really living a normal and happy life, supporting and taking care of each other in the long and happy years! ! ! ! Highly recommended! ! ! ! Babies who don't read this book will be really at a loss [Love] [Love] [Love] Author, I will follow you forever

Okay, not bad, it suits me very well. I want more people to see it, so I write a long review. Objective evaluation: Original male protagonist and Severus Snape. There is no detailed description of the original story line, which I like very much, because I personally don't like to read stories repeatedly. There are very few descriptions of the East, and occasionally it is mentioned that the male protagonist borrows Chinese medicine theory. I also like this very much, because I don't like to add too many private fanfics, especially if the background of the story is changed, it will feel a bit fragmented. Of course, the extras can have very different plots from the original work, which would be very interesting. Moreover, there is not much description of the background of the male protagonist, because most people may read it for the religious reasons and would prefer the story to unfold with Severus. Also: the setting of the male protagonist is not very unreasonable (which means very reasonable), the plot is not ridiculously strong, and it does not interfere excessively with the main plot. I just hope to change the ending of Si Jiao. (This book really doesn't feel like a time traveler has revealed all the plot.) This book is based on the magical world and Sri Lanka. It's really to my liking. I recommend it. This book is not abstract, and the characters are not OOC at all. It is definitely the original Sri Lankan religion that you will like. The relationship between the male protagonist and Sri Lanka also really poked me (I really respect Sri Lanka). The male protagonist occasionally loses control irrationally (this makes the character more complete), but he is never reckless and always has his head on his side. Overall: Recommended Also: I really want more extras. Any whimsical stories you have can be written in the extras. [Love][love][love]

Why do you want to write so beautifully [Sending Hearts] The characters are not OOC, they are very beautiful, and the interactions are also very sweet. The emotional line is very fast [Sending Hearts] Now I just have to express my love [Love] I am really looking forward to confessing [Sending Hearts] The pace is very fast, and there is nothing cruel at the moment. It is sweet [Sending Hearts]

It is a long and flowing article, unlike other fanfics I have read about the original male protagonist and Severus, most of which use "home invasion-like love" to intervene in Sev's life. This is the first time that I feel that Sev not only needs "home invasion-like" strong love, but a moist and silent love is also suitable for him. I actually think that what Sev needs sometimes is not necessarily love, but someone who firmly tells him that he is worthy of everything. The first kiss and love are both in the extra chapter, which shows that the progress of the main text is extremely slow. However, in the main text, our Xiao Lai has completely intervened in Xifu's life, but not as a lover for the time being. We all know that it is actually just Xifu who does not understand his own heart. The whole book has a warm tone, including the extras. There is nothing abusive. Our Xiao Lai also respects Sifu very much and does not make up for the age difference. The story develops naturally and some oriental elements are inserted to add some delicacy. The whole book ends with warmth, and my heart feels warm after reading it. I have always said something in my heart, I hope someone knows Severus' pain, but I don't need many people to witness it. I just want everyone to witness his happiness, even if it is dull.

I read it in one breath. It is so beautiful. It is a fairy tale. The love that dances on the tip of a knife between life and death is so touching. Love can make a person go against his own instincts, restrain himself or even rewrite himself. The emotional line of this book has the bitterness of a potion, the smoke of a battlefield, full of blood and thorns, not like the scalding sunshine, but tough enough to last. Love is restraint, respect, protection, wholehearted surrender and mutual possession without reservation. It's so good [Love] It's a masterpiece of Sri Lanka's CP literature, the score should be above 9.5

Oh my god, it's hard to imagine that this novel was completed at the end of last year. The quality is very similar to many fanfics from the heyday of HP many years ago (still ocss! Grandma Omnivore is ecstatic) I don't know why the rating is low, maybe because the male protagonist is not too involved in the main plot (but the male protagonist is really snake-yuan, very snake-like, quite), and the Sri Lankan religion is not very OOC, so it is only vaguely mentioned in the last chapter of the main plot, which is really appropriate. I felt quite melancholy after seeing the end of the main plot, and then I was pleasantly surprised to find that there were 90+ extras, which I enjoyed a lot. For me, being able to give Si Jiao a dull and non-traumatic daily ending is already the greatest happiness of reading this article🥰I am very grateful to the teacher for his excellent work. I am really grateful to the teacher for his excellent work... I will make up for the previous works. I read this one as slowly as possible and it only took six hours! Wow, it's so good. I haven't seen it for a long time. Oh, by the way, I forgot to mention that there are even a hundred questions. This is very old too hhhh there is no ooc for a hundred questions🥺

The writing is very interesting, and it doesn't feel very OOC. Many CP articles written by Sri Lanka are OOC, but this one is not, and it does not deliberately create hardship for Sri Lanka. Although the preparation was long in the early stage, I really felt warm when we were together later. Lex really liked everything about the professor, tolerated and accepted everything about the professor. He would not let the professor change his living habits or personality to adapt to him, but actively and slowly integrated into the life of the professor. Lex also had a calm personality, was very thoughtful and secure in his work, and was very smooth with the professor. I saw someone in the book review section who talked about whitewashing Black. I want to say that setting up a scheme to expose the facts at the right time and ensuring the safety of Sri Lankans so that Sri Lankans know the truth is not whitewashing Black. Sri Lankans need to know the truth.

The development of the relationship is very natural. The whole article has a very daily atmosphere and a very comfortable feeling. There is not a lot of intimate description, but the details are full of attention to each other. The professor is very good without OOC.

It was quite good for me to finish reading this book, but I couldn't figure out the emotional line in the early text, and it felt like it was stuck, and I often felt a bit inexplicable. And the attack is too restrained. I didn't expect that the CP arranged by the author would be a more restrained person than Sect. After watching HP fandom for so many years, this is the first time I saw this arrangement. It is quite novel. However, the movie watching extras at the end are really good, and they are also written in a very novel way. The original work is similar to that of the same author, but after reading it, I feel that Si Jiao is even more pitiful. Although the author said that he will have more possibilities in the unfinished parts, it is so miserable to see that there is a lover in another world who fully accepts him, but he does not. (Actually, I once thought about whether I would write that Professor Si left his job and went traveling later, met his lover who came from Dongfang Yuanpi, and then made love through his words and deeds)

It's so good, the emotional descriptions are delicately integrated into all daily interactions, the secret but understandable initiative of two introverted people, the deep-rooted love and respect that Xiao Lai has for the professor, and the professor's change from wariness to Xiao Lai's trust, the writing is so awesome. I have been reading it carefully for a long time. I originally thought it would have 500,000 words, but when I looked back, I saw that it was less than 300,000 words. It shows that it is really worthless [Sending my heart] Good luck to those who like to watch pure love + plots [Shy]

The cook is good and the food is delicious. Teacher, keep writing. There are people behind you. Don't be tired, but don't be idle either. [Sending Hearts][Cool] The main text is finished. I personally think that if there are enough people to rate this book, it is completely acceptable to score 9 or higher. Please rate it more. Also, most people want to read the original work or watch the movie.

It's super, super good. I finished it all in one night. I highly recommend everyone to watch it! ! ! (Actually, I still have some unfinished ideas about movie viewing. I still want everyone to see xql's daily routine [shy][shy][shy])

The main plot is short and logical, and their emotions felt natural to me. Kavin's silent devotion to Si Jiao (although Si Jiao knows it~), and Si Jiao's concern for Kavin's transformation (Cavan can feel it), gradually bring the two hearts that are guarded and alienated from the outside world closer together. Their feelings for each other gradually warmed up in some details of getting along. I wish the author of 99~ (I am a bad commenter, only my personal opinion) will have more updates soon, and I love to read╰(*´`*)╯

Join the ruminative series. The protagonist is the gentle and restrained Slytherin. In short, one sentence perfectly sums up my feelings: This is a professor fanfic that I have read that is very non-OOC. Worth a look. Again, the protagonist is really gentle, restrained and respectful towards the professor. Oh my god, I just realized that this is actually the second article I've read by the author! ! Moreover, both articles have joined the ruminant series, and we say this is the gold content. Neither article is particularly long, but both are delicious. Add chicken legs to the author [got it]🍗🍗

I've finished reading the main text, it's very interesting. The protagonist is very measured and respects Si Jiao. In fact, Si Jiao is a person who has a hard time accepting other people's emotions and won't try easily like other books. Si Jiao in this article is not OOC at all. In the early stage, the protagonist was a little frustrated. But what surprised me was that the protagonist was sorted into Slytherin as a Muggle. There were no embarrassing old-fashioned slaps in the face, nor too many plots, or being a nanny. It just revolved around the emotional development of the protagonist and the Slytherin. It was very comfortable to watch, and I felt that the score was low. I've watched most of the extras, they're so good. I forgot to mention that the text also saved Cedric. In the main text, the unused medicine to detoxify the snake is given to Sif in another world [almost crying]. My favorite part of the movie is the clumsy concern of the students in the college, and the soft-heartedness of the viewers. There is also the darkening of the main character in the if line. Haha, the main character just killed Voldemort and restricted Sif for a few days. He still respected him and did not force Silver to do things he didn't like. He was so lonely when he was darkened. It was really great when they kissed each other at the end. It was more emotional than the last time they got along without being darkened. This is good. There is a kind of ordinary happiness in those two extra stories in ten years. I won't go into details one by one, they are all so warm. 99 Wishes to the young couple

To be honest, I was not interested in this introduction at first, but after reading it, I found that this book is really beautiful. I just love cookies. I spent a day reading it. I highly recommend it. The emotional line is very delicate. I really love this book. It is one of the best quality books I have seen.

It's really great... The characters are not OOC, nor are they very flat to describe vigorous emotions. Si taught that he was restrained, and his love was never spoken on his lips, but was hidden in the potion, in his eyes, and in every little detail. He is no saint and he is not perfect. He is hard-spoken but soft-hearted, but he has his own bottom line... It's really great!

Very pretty! ! ! Lex really respects Sif very much. He doesn't force himself, he just quietly enters his husband's world, slowly letting him get used to it, making him inseparable from him, and making him feel uncomfortable without his own existence. The main text and the extras are very beautiful! Highly recommended

Two male protagonists, main attacker, Lex x Severus, the full story has been completed Lex accidentally traveled to the world of Harry Potter and gained some attention from the Sri Lankan teacher with his knowledge of Chinese medicine. Lex at the beginning: Peace of mind until graduation Lex in the mid-term: Sri Lanka teaches Kangkang me Later Lex: Voldemort? Watch my Avada eat a big melon Voldemort: Why can you apparate and use it with the Avatar? Lex: My lord, times have changed gracefully

It's beautiful! It's really beautiful! Why is the rating so low? It's so disgusting! Harry's own adventure is basically simple and fast, and is very friendly to those who are tired of the main plot and want to focus on the emotional line! The rhythm is also very good, and the emotional line is very smooth and not too bloody. The two people are a little light, and it is a very efficient way of getting along, but Xiao Lai's love does not feel less at all, and it is enlightened from the beginning! Even if ss doesn't (or vaguely) realizes that it's love, his relationship with Xiao Lai is very friendly and not so tense. Ss is a good teacher! In addition, I feel that the ss in this article has actually learned more language skills from the original work in terms of venomous tongues. I feel that the fandom is not very OOC. It is really good but too little. I have just finished reading the main text and I will seriously appreciate the extra! I don't know how to express it, but this natural love is really great. This is definitely one of my favorite ss fanfics. I love you, the author😭😭😭😭😭 Yes, it is true as other teachers said, the two very Platonic people are not carnivores, hmm...

I have read a lot of HP articles, and this one is a favorite in my heart. It has a very delicate writing style and some personal thoughts. The relationship between the two parties is really very delicate. It is the kind of careful exploration, the feeling of turning water into ice. I love it so much, it deserves my review as the first 5-star HP article in history.