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The writing style is very good and the logic is smooth. Mr. Zhongli's character is not ruined, but... But Nantong is not to my liking, which makes my eyelids jump... I ran away first, slipped away first...

Very gentle writing, very gentle emperor, a little reserved at first, but more and more smooth ~ I also think the emperor is almighty, "knows a thing or two" about everything ~ but in the early stage he was really too nanny. . . In the later stage, it started to become more and more natural and gradually got better ~ I saw signs of CP starting to appear in the latest chapter. . . It's very confusing. . . I want to continue watching but I don't dare to continue watching because I am a twisted Emperor Du Wei/Right One. . . Worry about being hurt by mutual attacks. . . [Smile] It's my own problem, madam, don't blame me, I can just deal with it myself~ Come on, madam [blowing kiss]

The writing style is indeed much better than other Shuhui fics that I have read. It is a refreshing type of writing. The contrast between Zhongli and Wutiao Maomao in the same frame is very cute. They have feelings, but it is definitely not love [laughing and crying] I believe that they can develop into a father-son relationship more than brotherly love. Zhongli was full of love and kindness towards the five cats, and his impact on the magic world made me feel physically and mentally comfortable. Moreover, Zhongli's speech was very charming. I can feel that this person has a profound background, is elegant and calm. I originally wanted to gain weight before watching it, but ended up watching it all in one lunch break [face covering] The author is still performing steadily after following the update! Sisters, this investment is not a loss! [Notice]

Very well written and well written. But Zhongli's Teyvat has not had CP for more than 6,000 years. It feels weird to have CP when the spell comes back to fight.

Good looking, like it Make a wish, Mr. Zhongli is below. After all, Mr. Zhongli doesn't have Wu Gao.

After reading a few chapters, I just want to say that I really want to see Zhongli in the lower position [shy] and it tastes so delicious [laughing evilly] and it's really difficult to find a book that suits Zhongli's character [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] Anyway, the writing is good and it's not embarrassing! ! ! Are you still updating?😭😭It's rare to find such a well-written article🤧🤧

Well, four stars, let's call it "This author is obviously good but too modest" (bushi)

Teacher, please come ashore😭😭This writing is so good😭😭It feels like you are not reading a novel, but appreciating a work of art😭😭Super beautiful writing ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, teacher basis.

I came in without looking at the warning, and when I saw the age, I suddenly felt that the five lines of opposition were overwhelming. This is definitely not industrial saccharine 😭 Mom, this is true love. . This Zhongli is not very OOC, he feels authoritative, nice and powerful, and he has a vague temperament of an inner saint and an outer king (. He is also an authentic God of Contract and has a bit of a wandering world www. I hope the teacher will continue to write!!!

The author's writing style is one of the best among the Tomato novels I have read, and the characters are basically consistent with the original work. In my opinion, it has the potential to hit the nine-point mark. Whether you can achieve it depends on your luck. Author, although you have a lot of words in one chapter, it seems that a lot of it is a modification of the writing style, but it should make people less likely to get tired from reading, and it should be considered as a way to relax after retirement.

This guy is quite rare, so I give it 5 stars.

It's super beautiful (✪▽✪), the author has a good grasp of the characters, and the plot is also very smooth! Wu Mi, it's human nature to be tempted by Master Zhongli Zhongli, so hurry up and catch him `(*∩_∩*)′

Excellent writing style

I bet. There must be many people who came in because they saw this CP. Then most of the people who came in must not have gone out. The large writing is really nice. Especially delicate writing style.

It looks good. Although CP is a bit strange, it is a type I have never tried before. The author will continue to work hard! Zhongli's portrayal is great! ٩(๛ ˘ ³˘)۶♥ Very nice! That's it... Author, you have to be so slow (´இωஇ｀)

Good luck, I feel like Zhongli doesn't have OOC

Not OOC, it's pretty good for a casual party

I feel like it doesn't have much OOC, but overall it looks good, but it's a little lacking.

It's absolutely beautiful. There are 15 chapters in the first day and each chapter has more than 4,000 words. Where can I find such a diligent author? ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It looks good, but it must! You must write Mandrill well! He was really crying and tired [crying][crying][crying]

Looks good, the emperor is very suitable

Love watching it! But it's a bit OOC. Although Wu Tiao's way of speaking is exaggerated, it's not as radical as in the article. Xia You's emotions don't get out of control easily (maybe it's Master Zhongli's own magnetic field?) But the overall plot is very good [Like]

Awesome, awesome, awesome

The writing is super good!

Okay - look - come on!

Looks good, looks good, looks good! ! ! ! ! ! !

Give it four stars for fear of making you proud.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Very good, I like it

Keep up the good work author