A Love Triangle Showdown? No, Just a Peaceful Everyday Life

In fact, just reading this book, you can't tell that it is the author's first time writing. The environmental description and psychological description are quite excellent for a Japanese-style novel, ^O^. However, the emotional expression in some places is not outstanding enough, and because the male protagonist is an observer, he is not able to feel the emotional expression. In my personal opinion, I think the emotional expression can be strengthened, for example, more vivid environmental descriptions can be used. There are also some places where it seems a little laggy, but overall it's innocuous. If you continue reading, you will find that this is a rare and good work. O_o

The opening was pretty good, unlike the first book. The pace is very fast, he finished writing 50 chapters in 10 chapters. Maybe I didn't want to write much, but I probably became eunuch halfway through. It's a top-quality tomato, so I give it 5 stars. After all, in Tomato, I hope there will be no eunuchs. It is recommended to read this book with 4/10 of your brain. You cannot read other books and lose your brain. I'm quite satisfied with what I can find in Tomato with a little bit of writing and a relatively normal plot. I hope the author will work hard.

The writing style of the middle and upper reaches may be flawed in some cases, and the love story is a little abstract in the early stage, but it is still a very good book. Some people may find Ling too annoying, but considering thousands of years of loneliness, this is okay, and I am quite likeable [OK]

To be honest, it's not bad, a slow-burning light novel with super powers (currently only the main character has it). However, I think it's a slow-burning pacing, and I estimate that it will take about 200 pictures to get traffic. Generally speaking, it's more like Flying Crow (my girlfriend is a villain). It's more than 80 pictures and there is no Shura Field yet. I suggest changing the title. You can change the name to something with super powers. It's closed, I'm tricking readers into coming in. Although the original title is deceiving 🤦, the writing style is a little bit literary, but I think the character Cao Lan has a little too much girly side, so it's better to make him stronger, otherwise it's not pleasing to both sides. Having said so much, I hope the author will continue to publish more, but I guess there will be no traffic before 200 pictures.

It's quite good-looking and suits my personal taste better, but I feel like there are so few people watching it? 🧐 It is more in line with my perception of Wudi's writing. Wudi must be the unity of knowledge and action, rather than the kind of mind that only has power but does not grasp its power.

It's been a long time since I've met a protagonist who is so appealing to me. It's rare to be someone who truly doesn't bite the bullet and stays true to himself. I haven't encountered such a deep author in a long time. The pull between the protagonists and their characters and the shaping of their characters made me amazed. However, the shortcoming is that the book is too slow and inconsistent. I felt that I finished reading it in a while.

This book is really good at writing. If I were in middle school, I would excerpt a few paragraphs and put them into a composition 🤭 The first part is a bit boring, but the more you watch the later part, the more you watch it. I look forward to the story behind it. I quite like the character of the male protagonist. I hope the process of self-repair of the male protagonist will not be so abrupt [Sending my heart]

It's awesome. It's a pleasure to watch. The delicate writing style and the setting of the protagonist's invincibility are perfectly combined. But now I want to see how Miss Cao's desire for control will be exerted in the second volume. Miss Cao has now become a defeated dog [laughs]

Beautifully written, waiting for the follow-up

Overall, it was good, but the second part of Shen Ling's chapter was a bit too one-man show (but it was also related to her role positioning and lack of connection with other people). I felt that this part was a bit fragmented, but when I returned to Liu Ying's part later, the familiar feeling returned.