You Asked Me to Invent a Fictional World, So Why Did I Write China?

It's good-looking. It writes Chinese history in the humorous style of modern online articles, but I feel that writing this kind of thing is a bit unpleasant. There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people's eyes. I think it's good-looking because I like the author's humorous language. I just enjoy reading this kind of historical novels, but history has preferences after all. If it's not serious, it should feel good-looking. Those who like history more or feel that their favorite historical figures have been vilified or those they dislike have been beautified should give it a low score. This kind of subjective problem is not a problem of anyone, but a problem of stance, and a problem of whether Taoism and Taoism are mutually beneficial.

The idea is good, but it is qualified as a verbal essay that understands history.

In fact, you can write more content in classical Chinese. Many of them are famous sentences that can better reflect allusions. Only then can the comments from netizens and judges about the content written by the protagonist be more coherent and harmonious.

I already know a lot of historical stories, so I am reminiscing. There is too little plot for the audience, and it feels like I am just listening to history.

The author's style of writing could be to write less about history and focus on some historical allusions, with appropriate details and more modern feedback.

It seems to be a very interesting talk about the 5,000 years of China.

In fact, it's not bad. I can understand the general idea of ​​the author, and let people in another world hear the history of China. Every time I hear this kind of article, I feel a sense of national pride. I think it's actually not bad. There are no problems in the general direction, but there are a lot of small problems. I hope the author will keep up the good work and not make it worse. So here I give you 10 stars.

First there is Hongjun and then there is heaven, and gods and demons are even more present in front of the immortals and Buddhas. Pangu opened up the heaven and earth with his axe, and the sun and moon appeared in Hongmeng. Xingtian lost his life fighting for position, and Gonggong was angry at Mount Buzhou. The Eastern Emperor Taiyi controls all demons, and Nuwa refines stones to mend the sky. Kuafu is out of reach day by day, when will Jingwei's reclamation be completed? Shennong saved the world and tasted hundreds of herbs, and the Sui people made fire to warm the world. The Xuanyuan Divine Sword beheaded Chi You, and the Dinghai Divine Needle held down the sea and the sky. Cangjie cleverly created characters with his spiritual mind, and Leizu raised silkworms to draw silk cocoons. Fuxi's Bagua praised the number of gods, and Houyi's divine bow Qianqiu praised it. Wu Gang attacked Guanghan Palace, and Chang'e flew to the moon for elixir. The three religions jointly honored the list of gods, and Xiqi Chaoge met with swordsmen. The King of Chu and his goddess met in Wushan, and the Queen Mother held a banquet for the emperor in Kunlun Mountain. Zhuang Zhou dreamed of butterflies that aroused his emotions, and he looked forward to the emperor's cries turning blood into cuckoos. King You plays with the princes with beacon fire, just for the sake of beauty. Lao Tzu transformed the three pure beings into one breath, and the Buddha sacrificed himself and entered Nirvana. The Marquis of the Sui Dynasty rescued the snake and got the pearl, but Bian He offered the jade and his body was broken. The match between gods and men is punished by heaven, and the filial son tears apart mountains and rivers in anger. The spiritual stone nourishes the heart ape for ten thousand years, causing the three worlds to be shocked and the five elements to be in chaos. Xuanzang traveled to the west to seek the true scriptures and endured disasters for fourteen years. The righteous results of cultivation will be spread all over the world, and it will be passed down to thousands of miles of China for generations to come. Earth, water, wind, and fire are created by nature, and the six paths of reincarnation are boundless. Infinite magical powers are not a boast, gods, demons, immortals and Buddhas are just a joke. Yan and Huang are all extraordinary people. China only has five thousand years.

It's okay, but many of the stories are pseudo-history, such as the war drama about princes and Wu Zixu whipping corpses. If you say he wrote official history, he is not so honest. If you say he wrote unofficial history, the general direction is correct. Just watch it for fun.

Good health, both vivid history and light-hearted fun.