Writing the Official History of China, Another World Forces Me to Update It!

It's good-looking. It writes Chinese history in the humorous style of modern online articles, but I feel that writing this kind of thing is a bit unpleasant. There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people's eyes. I think it's good-looking because I like the author's humorous language. I just enjoy reading this kind of historical novels, but history has preferences after all. If it's not serious, it should feel good-looking. Those who like history more or feel that their favorite historical figures have been vilified or those they dislike have been beautified should give it a low score. This kind of subjective problem is not a problem of anyone, but a problem of stance, and a problem of whether Taoism and Taoism are mutually beneficial.

The idea is good, but it is qualified as a verbal essay that understands history.

In fact, you can write more content in classical Chinese. Many of them are famous sentences that can better reflect allusions. Only then can the comments from netizens and judges about the content written by the protagonist be more coherent and harmonious.

I already know a lot of historical stories, so I am reminiscing. There is too little plot for the audience, and it feels like I am just listening to history.

It seems to be a very interesting talk about the 5,000 years of China.

It's okay, but many of the stories are pseudo-history, such as the war drama about princes and Wu Zixu whipping corpses. If you say he wrote official history, he is not so honest. If you say he wrote unofficial history, the general direction is correct. Just watch it for fun.

First there is Hongjun and then there is heaven, and gods and demons are even more present in front of the immortals and Buddhas. Pangu opened up the heaven and earth with his axe, and the sun and moon appeared in Hongmeng. Xingtian lost his life fighting for position, and Gonggong was angry at Mount Buzhou. The Eastern Emperor Taiyi controls all demons, and Nuwa refines stones to mend the sky. Kuafu is out of reach day by day, when will Jingwei's reclamation be completed? Shennong saved the world and tasted hundreds of herbs, and the Sui people made fire to warm the world. The Xuanyuan Divine Sword beheaded Chi You, and the Dinghai Divine Needle held down the sea and the sky. Cangjie cleverly created characters with his spiritual mind, and Leizu raised silkworms to draw silk cocoons. Fuxi's Bagua praised the number of gods, and Houyi's divine bow Qianqiu praised it. Wu Gang attacked Guanghan Palace, and Chang'e flew to the moon for elixir. The three religions jointly honored the list of gods, and Xiqi Chaoge met with swordsmen. The King of Chu and his goddess met in Wushan, and the Queen Mother held a banquet for the emperor in Kunlun Mountain. Zhuang Zhou dreamed of butterflies that aroused his emotions, and he looked forward to the emperor's cries turning blood into cuckoos. King You plays with the princes with beacon fire, just for the sake of beauty. Lao Tzu transformed the three pure beings into one breath, and the Buddha sacrificed himself and entered Nirvana. The Marquis of the Sui Dynasty rescued the snake and got the pearl, but Bian He offered the jade and his body was broken. The match between gods and men is punished by heaven, and the filial son tears apart mountains and rivers in anger. The spiritual stone nourishes the heart ape for ten thousand years, causing the three worlds to be shocked and the five elements to be in chaos. Xuanzang traveled to the west to seek the true scriptures and endured disasters for fourteen years. The righteous results of cultivation will be spread all over the world, and it will be passed down to thousands of miles of China for generations to come. Earth, water, wind, and fire are created by nature, and the six paths of reincarnation are boundless. Infinite magical powers are not a boast, gods, demons, immortals and Buddhas are just a joke. Yan and Huang are all extraordinary people. China only has five thousand years.

The author's style of writing could be to write less about history and focus on some historical allusions, with appropriate details and more modern feedback.

In fact, it's not bad. I can understand the general idea of ​​the author, and let people in another world hear the history of China. Every time I hear this kind of article, I feel a sense of national pride. I think it's actually not bad. There are no problems in the general direction, but there are a lot of small problems. I hope the author will keep up the good work and not make it worse. So here I give you 10 stars.

Good health, both vivid history and light-hearted fun.

The author's book is really well written. The writing style is fluent and the rhetoric is appropriate. It is deeply rooted in the legacy of the Wei and Jin dynasties, and it also carries forward the style of the Tang and Song Dynasties to the core. I can read this book by the author in my lifetime. It is really my blessing in three lifetimes. After reading this book by the author, I actually felt an indescribable feeling of sadness. If I can never read such a good novel in the future, what should I do? So what should I do? It wasn't until I put the author's book on my bookshelf without hesitation that the excitement in my heart gradually calmed down. But I immediately thought about such a good novel. If others can't read it, wouldn't it be a waste of the author's efforts? After a painful ideological struggle, I finally made up my mind to live in the small self and dedicate myself to the greater self. I want to dedicate this book review to the world for reading, and I want to keep reading this novel. As I walk between heaven and earth, with the sun blazing and the moon shining brightly in the sky, I have to ask, is this novel enough to read and not enough? When I walk on the rivers and lakes, the rivers are full and the rivers are rolling, I have to ask me, is this novel enjoyable enough? "Not enough! When I walk on the top of the mountains, see beautiful buildings, beautiful buildings, and immortals in the sea of ​​clouds, you have to ask me, is this novel updated fast enough? Not enough! Not enough! Not enough chapters, not enough speed and not enough content! It's not enough!

Not bad, especially the villain judges talk less. I don't know how long they can last. I also hope that the events caused by the shady scene will be as short as possible [face covering]

Yes, I have written down the important points in history. Let's talk more about culture, ideology, system and other aspects.

It's okay, but the audience reaction is a bit lacking.

Although I don't like it personally, I feel that the score is too low, and it's not less than six points, so I'll support it [rolls eyes]

The running account really didn't look good at first. After writing about the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, it started to look good. But the author was still too anxious. In fact, it could have been written in more detail.

Give it a five-star rating.

Very good novel [cool] [like]

It's OK to look back at history, but it's not that interesting.

Remember the history and forge ahead without forgetting the original intention. Come on, long live China.

Beautiful and interestingly written

It's too long. I wrote hundreds of chapters on the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period alone. I'm afraid it will take two to three thousand chapters to start writing on the Republic of China.

It's too slow. I should at least have 5 chapters a day, two chapters in the morning, one chapter at noon, and two chapters in the evening.

I don't think I need to write each period that long, but it's still pretty good.

Where did the barrage go after the update? There are also judges

Nonsensical little historical story on the front page, quite interesting

Just think of it as understanding history [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Okay, okay, there are too few written about the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, so it's just a good time to review history.

All I can say is that it is a very nice book and I must keep it up.

Yes, it can be seen that the author wrote very carefully