Pirate*******

Overall, it's good, but the appearance of the characters in the extra chapter is a bit abstract. The name "Extra" itself means that it should be independent of the main chapter. If you don't like watching extra chapters, you will miss important points.

I have a question. Zhongli's age is considered too young to be called uncle. But they are not the first in the world, they don't know his old man's lifestyle, and they don't know his age. Zhongli doesn't look like an uncle either. Why did everyone call him uncle in the first meeting? Zhongli looked very young.

I like the place where I haven't seen OOC yet. Zhongli's strength is really beyond the standard! You can't continue without joining any force [face covering] (I feel like as long as Zhongli joins a force, they can just wait and sleep) (Zhongli's filter is full)

What kind of grand world view and plot do you choose?

The content is smooth, the story is very coherent, it fits well with the animation, and the literary style is quite satisfactory. It can be regarded as above average.

At present, it seems that Mr. OOC is quite in line with the character! ! The descriptions of each part are also remarkable. To sum up, it's a great book! Worth seeing! ! !

More authors! ! ! Stop being a pigeon! ! ! Please [cry]

In one sentence: masterpiece! ! ! [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's also very impressive

Not bad, good, good-looking

Still pretty good. If you want to add other characters, it would be good to add Navilet or Grass God. Anything else? Not as interesting as either of them.

The writing is quite good, and the character design is not broken. I want to ask whether the emperor will go to other worlds in the future (:3_ヽ)_