Star Rise: My Omnic Empire

It's very good, and the character of the protagonist is also very palatable. It's good that it doesn't lick the official side. It doesn't have those messy female characters, and it won't lower its status in front of the official. It has a strong character. The protagonist's speech does not make people feel childish. To be honest, many Tomato articles these days are always very irritating whenever they come into contact with the official. They always emphasize patriotism and the like, which is very childish. They have a system and are always led by the official. When the official opens their mouth, they always respond to requests. It is ridiculous to act as an official tool. Don't forget who is the protagonist.

Yes, in general this book is quite innovative and the writing is good. However, the subsequent Star Sea chapter is difficult to conceive. I think the author can write more slowly so as not to ruin the book later. The pace cannot be too fast in some places. After all, the protagonist is the same person.

The writing is very good, I like the main character's character very much, and it develops on its own without any pulling. The pace is fast.

I like to read science and technology articles, but I don't like the messy pretense and love stories. I recommend reading them. It's very enjoyable. The protagonist builds his own technology empire and conquers the universe.

Please control the rhythm, otherwise it will be too tense and affect my sleep, unless the author gives me a tube of genetic medicine. The protagonist was testing the Blue Star civilization, and I was thinking, could I be the unlucky guy who was crushed to death by a screw when the star pirate spaceship fell? People who are not from a race that is not mine will have a different heart, and it feels like the protagonist is that race that is not from me.

It's okay, I just like that I'm not controlled by others. It's good to develop on your own. Come on! Is this the end? Is the fourth-level civilization gone? How can I write a ninth-level peak civilization? [Cover face]

Developing technology to explore the universe will make it less messy. Don't be a babysitter. The country has its own destiny, and mankind has its own destiny. Less participation. [Smile]

Not bad. It's just that the early stand-alone part is a bit long. The author's mind is still not open enough. The most important thing about science fiction is imagination. For example, attack methods include the three powerful forces of the universe, various elements of nature (metal, wood, water, fire, earth, wind, rain, thunder and lightning), various dimensions, and reversing (changing) the physical rules. Even time and space can be mastered. You can also look at the Three-Body Problem. A drop of water can wipe out the entire Earth fleet. It is even just a detector, not a weapon.

This is the second book I have read without playing with the earth [laughing and crying]. There is no heroine, only the desire to conquer the star sea. But I want to ask? Does the earth allow them to continue the civil war? Or are you planning to unite them?

It's nice, but it's a bit boring to write it here! [Attention] [Full] [Laughing] [Making faces] [Eating melon] [Exploring] [Understood] [Smiling] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Thinking] [Exploring] [Cool]

The book is good, but there are too few words and it will be lost in a long time. I hope it will be better in the future, so remember it! Don't enter the palace! Don't enter the palace! Don't enter the palace!

It's already interstellar travel, and we can still only see the exhaust smoke. You can play with them, or at least let them know that there is such a thing even if you don't take them with you, so that they can be small. Shock it

It is exactly the same as the science fiction novel I imagined. The first 50 chapters may be boring. The protagonist is mainly developing technology, but it is different in the later chapters. The following chapters show that the protagonist chooses to send a fleet to forcefully take over the Blue Star due to the continuous war and establish the Dragon Kingdom as a regulator. Anyway, these chapters are very cool. I feel that everything that was not included in the first 50 chapters has been included. I hope the author will update it soon.

I am currently single-player and have just discovered aliens. I don't know how the author deals with Blue Star. Is it the boss behind the scenes or a giant company that has risen in the world? Unify the Basketball Stars, or suddenly remove Xingmu and scare the Blue Star people.

The pace is a little faster, no nonsense, good-looking [laughing evilly] [like]

It's pretty good. If you like this kind of thing, you can check it out.

Don't just make the protagonist research technology. When will you build an empire? Let the protagonist develop a thought stamp. And the protagonist gets a super brain, isn't that a genetic unlock? First use the ideological stamp to control them. Then help them unlock that gene to unlock their super brain. Control the entire Blue Star by the way. Build a true interstellar empire. If possible, traveling through parallel universes, such as some kind of super seminary? What a wandering earth. Avatar.

It's a pretty good starry sky science and technology article. The main plot is to explore technology and conquer aliens. I would give it a 7 out of 10 points. Technology is advancing very quickly, and there are not many pretense steps on earth, just heading straight to the stars. There are many elements of stars. The positioning of the earth is very awkward. It is only equivalent to a teaching level at the beginning. The solar system is a novice village. After arriving in the starry sky, its positioning as a command center is actually the same as that of artificial intelligence. The intelligent civilization in the starry sky is a bit too dense, and it doesn't look as good as the more centralized alien empire. There was a bit of ink in the back part, so I didn't finish reading it because I wasn't interested.

A very good novel, written with great care by the author. Let me watch it carefully.

This is one of the better omnic genres I have seen in recent years. It is a blaster style, space exploration, not much love between children, and a mess of face-slapping and pretentiousness. It is the development of Lao Liu, but I have to say that the writing is very to my liking, and it is okay to add some daily life.

The development of civilization is very important, but the development of human morality is also very important. If it is just the rapid development of science and technology, I can't imagine how distorted the social structure and morality will be. However, the protagonist has not been exposed to civilization yet. I hope that the protagonist will open a company in various countries on the earth to slowly affect mankind and prepare for the unification of civilization.

So far, it's okay, but there is no unified Blue Star. Personal development planning is too slow.

Your "technology + code" pen skills really bring hard core technology to life - others talk about algorithms like flipping through a dictionary, but you can break down binary logic into story lines; others pile up jargon that makes people confused, but you can use life-like metaphors to incorporate complex underlying principles into the lines. Please bear with me (๑>_<๑)

Everyone in Wuxing, please support this kind of novel. Although it seems to me that it is too single and self-interested, I still hope that I can continue to write it.

It's so good-looking, so good-looking. It's really good-looking.

Super nice deep space exploration novel

I really don't understand what those people who gave negative reviews think? Why is it bad to fly solo? The storyline is clear and concise, without any delay. Highly recommended!

The whole process is single-player, I prefer this, and after a brief introduction to the surrounding forces of the protagonist, I always felt that something was missing. I immediately reacted when I thought of the protagonist. When the protagonist died, the out-of-control AI immediately appeared (Pangu: The boss is dead, I have no intention of distinguishing right from wrong, heaven and earth live together!) [Smile] It was fine before the bugs were beaten, but after the bugs were beaten, it was impossible to see. The super brain suddenly gained a devouring ability, and it instantly became a fantasy. The combination of the machine and the bugs behind it seemed to be weakening. You can bring some psychic powers, but your sudden change of world view is still quite speechless.

Not bad. We can improve Earth's technology later. But the protagonist doesn't have to build a robot or anything himself.

The author should make the content clear, smooth and exciting. The author should publish more articles and don't update them constantly. .