I Really Want to Play This Game One More Time

The book as a whole and the scene descriptions are pretty good, but well, the whole story is bland. It's not like a novel but more like an extended narrative of a history book, and it's the kind of record that's very objective. It's hard to keep people reading for a long time, that's all I saw

Please ignore the author's own comments. Hello, book friends, since this is the first time for a new author to write a novel, he has undoubtedly made the same mistakes as new authors. The first two chapters of the novel are just some background. If you don't mind, you can skip it and start reading or listening directly from the third chapter. Of course, the writing may not be that good after the third chapter! I also hope Haihan. Since I'm a newcomer, the story progresses slowly. If there are any abrupt parts, just assume that the author's head was accidentally pinched by the door. I just come up with the plot. [Sending my heart] Speaking of which, does anyone who has read a few chapters have any comments? Maybe it's because the author has his own filter. When I "listen to the book" I feel it's quite the same, but I don't know how it feels in the eyes of others. Can any book friends who have time correct me for some deficiencies? I also want to have a general direction for revision.